Results 1 to 15 of 15

New Fiction: Allegiances (Director's Cut)

  1. #1

    Tau New Fiction: Allegiances (Director's Cut)

    Hey this is the first chapter of a short story/novella? that I started writing the other day. It features the Tau Empire, the Imperial Guard, and Khornate Chaos forces. Don't worry I'm not a fanboy of any one of these factions so you're not going to find a Fire Warrior taking down a squad of Chaos Space Marines by himself or anything like that. I started reading the fluff about a year ago and I don't play tabletop so if there's any major fluff issues please let me know. Constructive criticism is welcome!



    Allegiances

    Chapter 1

    The world of Arden IV was one blessed with a variety of industry, agriculture on the southern continents supported the hives of the north, making it one of the more prosperous planets on the Eastern Fringe of the Imperium of Man. The planet was policed by the forces of the Adeptus Arbites, who kept the dark interiors of the hives in order, waging an unending war against the inhabitants of the lower levels. It also garrisoned a regiment of the Imperial Guard, the Arden Dragoons, who had proven themselves in combat across the Eastern Fringe, though never at home. It was considered by most to be a rather sleepy backwater of the Empire. That was what Por’Ui Dal’Yth M’Yen, secret envoy of the Tau Empire to the planet had always believed. M’Yen lived in the shadows of Arden IV, amongst the rogue traders who plied some of the seedier spaceports on the smaller continent of Martenz Minor, always deprived of the wealth of its larger cousin. He was known on Arden IV not by his true name, an allusion to his skill at deception in service of the Greater Good, but by the rather more humble moniker of Rags. M’Yen hid his true nature behind thick soiled robes and rags wrapped around his face, only his deep eyes visible to the Gue’La. If asked he went by the story that he had been the victim of a disease seeded by the dark powers of Chaos on his home world as a child and that it had left him stunted and hideous, forcing him to hide his deformed flesh. It was not a question he was asked often, amongst the dilapidated ports of Martenz Minor there were many uglier sights to be seen than the innocuous Rags.

    M’Yen had been sent by the elders of his caste to assess the vulnerability of Arden IV, in order to prepare the way for the next wave of expansion and settlement by the Tau Empire many years ago. Probing and inquiring, he sent reports sporadically back to the home world of his Sept – Dal’Yth, yet the ways of the Water Caste required above all else patience, and in all his years on Arden IV he had never found himself ready to pronounce the world ready for annexation. Even when the Arden Dragoons had been sent to aid in a battle for a distant cluster of Gue’la worlds, fighting against the Greenskins, the defense of the planet remained strong, too strong for an empire which probed constantly at all its borders, finding much softer targets than Arden IV. When the regiment had returned home bloodied but victorious M’Yen had expected to spend the rest of his life on the planet, his efforts bearing little fruit. A frustrated desire for glory was not what irked him about the uneventful nature of his assignment, it was the burning desire in his heart to do more to further the Greater Good which made M’Yen restless. Yet a restless member of the Water Caste was far more patient than the Gue’La who inhabited Arden IV, whom he had seen kill each other out of passion more times than he would have thought possible. Surely once they became aware of the truth of the Greater Good even men such as rogue traders would lead lives of peace.

    “Rags” made his living hauling junk from the lower levels of the hive named Habitatus Sigma up to the space ports where the traders exchanged them in return for currency and occasionally rumors of the goings on of the planet. Rags did business with many traders and few suspected him of anything. If they did it was unlikely they would ever see the small swaddled figure again- it was easy for him to fade into the faceless crowd. In the fourth Kai’Rotaa of the year by the reckoning of the Tau calendar M’Yen was doing just that, hauling the strange works of the Gue’la through the crowd flowing in and out of the port. His goods were concealed beneath stained canvas and he pushed them ahead of him in a worn, creaking old cart. He was supposed to meet a lean, dour man named Hawk down in one of the lower berths and was making his way across the main concourse, past the great banners extolling the strange and fanatic faith of the Gue’la that stared down at the passersby. Suddenly M’Yen heard startled shouts behind him. He shrugged off the sound at first, perhaps it was simply another brawl. Yet the startled shouts gave way to screams, accompanied by deep and savage growls. This was no ordinary brawl, the crowd was beginning to react, beginning to panic, running from the noise. M’Yen turned, peering out from under his rags and cloak. Before he saw anything his keen Tau sense of smell picked up an unmistakable scent- Gue’la blood. The growls turned to laughter and terrifying chants of “Blood! Blood! Blood!” punctuated by the cries of hapless victims. M’Yen was no Fire Warrior, and he knew he was not prepared for a battle, nevertheless he reached under his robe and nervously grabbed hold of a small Gue’la laspistol he had obtained from an offworld arms dealer long ago, gripping it tightly with one hand while frantically pushing his cart forward towards the berth where Hawk was supposed to meet him. M’Yen scrambled in his mind for a reason that the Rogue Trader might accept for taking him onboard and away from this madness. The cries grew louder still behind him and M’Yen could tell that the killers were closing with him, working their way though the crowd and laughing sadistically. For once M’Yen hoped that the Adeptus Arbites would arrive soon, this chaos was much worse than normal. Despite the fear gripping him, M’Yen didn’t dare look back; his sense of smell told him more than enough.

    Around the corner and down the ramp, the sign for Berth 47 flew past as M’Yen jumped on the back of his cart, letting gravity carry him down to the berth at a frightening speed. As he had predicted, the platform was hardly tidy, half empty crates lying about haphazardly. He tried to aim his cart for the crates and jumped free before impact, hitting the ground hard and rolling to the feet of a shocked Hawk, stunned by the dramatic entrance of the little man. “There’s no time! We have to get out of here, madmen are ripping through the Gue-people on the concourse! You can have whatever is in my cart and then some credits on top of that, just get us the hell out of here!” M’Yen stammered, shocked from his fall and winded by the impact. Hawk was a man who would never turn down the chance for profit and what was a little risk? Risk was a part of his everyday life ever since he had started out as a stowaway on an Imperial cargo frigate. Without hesitation he yelled for his crew to grab Rags and his cart, and bring them on board. A couple of the crew reached the cart when on of them collapsed with a yelp- from of the ramp came insane laughter as Hawk noted a crude throwing axe protruding from the back of his hapless underling. “If you want a job done properly…” he muttered as he ran to the cart, slapped his surviving crewmember back to his senses and called for him to start hauling as he spun to find a wild haired maniac in bloodstained robes charging towards him screaming bloody murder. Hawk was a quick draw and he manage to blow the lunatic’s arm off with a hastily placed shot from his laspistol before he was tackled to the ground, the oppressive smell of the lunatic filling his senses and the desperate feeling that he was soon going to die racing through his mind. He saw the indistinct shape of the madman’s arm drawing a weapon of some sort and preparing to bring it down. A prayer to the Emperor he learned as a child ran through his mind and Hawk braced himself for the end, but it was not to come- the lunatic’s head unexpectedly exploding in a burst of gore and his corpse rolling off of Hawk’s chest. Hawk shook his head to clear his senses, wiping brain matter and gore off his face he looked over to see Rags holding a laspistol in a shaking four-fingered hand.





    Hope you enjoyed it! The next chapter should be up in a couple days. I'm going to try to keep the plotting tight so hopefully this will end up being around seven to ten chapters long.
    Last edited by WiegrafFolles; 16th Nov 07 at 2:19 AM.
    "Everyone has their own god to kill for, they just all have different names."

    Allegiances: My 40k fanfic

  2. #2
    Not bad, not bad. I like the idea of water caste spies hanging about not in the world's upper echelons, but keeping track from the dirty underbelly; a very nice touch, coming as it does from the somewhat fastidious Tau Empire. I look forward to seeing Guardsman and Shas'la fighting down World Eaters side by uneasy side.

  3. #3
    Thanks for the encouragement! This next chapter is a bit short and maybe a bit slow but the next will be much more action packed. Anyhow on with it!

    Chapter 2

    Three weeks later

    From the hives of Martenz Minor the madness of Chaos spread quickly across the surface of Arden IV, the forces of the PDF hard pressed to stop it. Imperial Commander Derran Powell had ordered the remaining PDF and Adeptus Arbites forces to prepare a defense of the planetary capital on Martenz Major and the masses of Arden IV were set to work, preparing massive trenches and gun emplacements. Powell’s requests for reinforcements were denied, and a grim feeling of bitterness welled up in his gut as he realized that it was more likely than not that his ancestral home would fall prey to the forces of Chaos in a matter of weeks. Powell had ordered the priests of the Ecclesiarchy on the planet to preach determination and faith in the face of the depredations of the Enemy; he prayed to the Emperor that his people would fight to the last.

    In orbit M’Yen sat listening to the Imperial broadcasts coming off the planet’s surface. Realizing the desperate nature of the situation he had taken a risk and told Hawk of his true nature, half expecting to be killed but seeing few alternatives. Hawk took the fact that he was an alien in stride- once M’Yen suggested that he might find profitable employment in the Tau Empire. In Hawk’s aged cargo ship, the Freebooter M’Yen had watched Chaos’ forces wreak devastation across Arden IV, weighing his options carefully. Finally after a week of uninterrupted slaughter M’Yen had made perhaps the most fateful decision of his life, contacting the nearest command post of his sept and recommending annexation. With the Imperials and madmen locked in combat they would likely make easy pickings for a fresh Tau invasion force. There had been no sign of reinforcements, and perhaps the Gue’la commander could be persuaded to join the Greater Good. His subjects would serve well in rebuilding the planet after the war and exploiting its resources. M’Yen had waited another week for a reply from the Tau command, his superiors no doubt debating the merits of invasion heatedly. He spent that time waiting and listening alone in the com room of the Freebooter. Just because Hawk saw a profit in helping M’Yen it didn’t mean that he had suddenly shrugged off years of Imperial anti-xenos propaganda and his crew kept their distance from the Tau operative. M’Yen didn’t mind those lonely hours in the com room, listening to desperate pleas for help coming from across the planet as the madness of Chaos spread, devouring whole cities at a time. It only strengthened his resolution to bring the Greater Good to the planet.

    Finally on the third week a reply crackled to life through the com equipment M’Yen had brought on board, designed to send classified information over the vast distances of space. “The Aun find your suggestion satisfactory, we move in force. We shall arrive in a matter of days. Prosper as Tau shall Por’Ui.” The words leapt through M’Yen’s mind, quickening his pulse at the thought of the great work which was left to be done. He rose from his chair for the first time in days and rushed to the bridge.

    Hawk was bored. He had been floating above the planet without word from his little blue passenger. Him and his new first mate -the last one had been unfortunately axed by that damn Chaos cultist- were playing Tarot and drinking some of the local swill, passing the time when M’Yen burst into the room. Hawk rose unsteadily to his feet- he had a few drinks in the last couple hours- and started: “Well, well! What’s the news blue boy?”
    “The fleet is coming! We must make preparations!”
    “Just what are we supposed to do? I’ve been sitting here on my hands for the last couple weeks with no action and now you come to me like I should already busy.”
    “A start would be washing ourselves. Living down in those hives like insects in the earth, I’m afraid my appearance has become rather shabby.” M’Yen said, looking down at his soiled rags.
    “Right, well the facilities for that haven’t seen use for well over a year but if you’re interested be my guest, maybe you can persuade the machine spirit to give you a warm shower. Anything more interesting to be done?”
    “Maps, plans, we need to start gathering more data, anything the fleet can use. Do you have a proper coms officer or do you make do yourself?”
    “What does this look like? The damn Imperial Navy? A Xenos like you probably knows more about that junk in the com room than I do. You’re welcome to it but don’t come looking to me for help.” Hawk fell back into his chair and took a swig out of his bottle.
    “Very well, but you would do well to make yourself useful in preparing for when the fleet comes. The Greater Good serves those who serve it in turn.”
    “I’m sure I’ll think of something when I’m sober.” Hawk said and waived off M’Yen.

    As they talked the world of Arden IV burned to please the Blood God and men died by the thousands.

  4. #4
    Koranus
    Guest
    I can't wait for the next chapter.

  5. #5
    Sorry all, I figured in the end I needed one more chapter of exposition before I got to the good stuff. Anyhow, bear with me you won't be disappointed!

    Chapter 3

    Commander Derran Powell stood over the defense plans laid out before him. It would not be long now and the Enemy would be upon them. He had positioned the great Earthshaker cannons of the Arden Dragoons behind the lines, arranged precisely so as to provide Habiatus Alpha, the planetary capital, with a devastating and uninterrupted blanket of artillery fire. Leman Russ tanks had been dug in around the city to act as gun emplacements and trenches miles long had been opened out of the polluted earth around the city. To look at the maps and plans it was so clean, so exact, but Powell knew that no amount of dossiers and projections could hide the fact that this was to be a terrible slaughter, and one that his men were unlikely to emerge from with their lives- or even their sanity.
    Powell had inherited his position, as most all Imperial Commanders did, but his family had always believed that the privilege of birthright was not by itself any guarantee of security and he had studied long and hard the ways of war. However reading histories and battle doctrines could scarcely prepare him for the chaos of battle, and he knew it. This was why he knew he had to turn to the men of the Imperial Guard, hardened in battle with the hated Orks and skilled in the ways of war. Their loyalty and discipline would be the first and last defense for the city. Powell looked up from his maps and out the window of his office to the defenses arrayed before him, men in the millions occupied in preparation for the battle to come. He found some solace in looking at their might, but doubt welled up in his heart, thinking of all those cities which had fallen to Chaos before this. Powell looked up to the stars above and prayed to the God-Emperor of Man for salvation.

    Por’Ui Dal’Yth M’Yen stepped into the assembly hall of the great starship Prosperity and for the first time in so many years into the arms of Tau society. His rags discarded he wore the robes of the Water Caste and the colors of his sept. Arranged in great rows the members of the Fire, Water, Air, and Earth castes faced the stage before them where Shas’O Dal’Yth Shi Or’Es, commander of the expeditionary force stood, facing M’Yen as the Por’Ui walked to his side. M’Yen shook beneath his robes, it was far beyond his experience to have met a commander of such a high rank and looking at Shi Or’Es he could see the signs of wisdom and experience written over his scarred face. “I give you today Por’Ui Dal’Yth M’Yen, the Tau who has brought us here to the world the Gue’la call Arden IV. He has laboured long and thanklessly for the Greater Good and his efforts will today bear their fruit.” Shi Or’Es began, as the crowd announced its approval, stamping their feet in unison against the metal floor, bringing forth a sound like thunder. M’Yen could scarcely believe that he had been afforded this honour and he bowed deeply to the crowd. Shi Or’Es raised his hand in a sign for silence. “You are all aware why we have come here: to spread the Greater Good and bring prosperity to Tau. The struggle which is to come will be terrible and taxing, yet I know that you will not fail to bring honour to your castes and to Dal’Yth. I ask you now to go and prepare yourselves, for as Vior’la has said, in times of war what is necessary is readiness and speed. I go now to meet the Gue’la ruler of this planet and your actions thereafter will be contingent upon the results of our meeting. You will be briefed as to your duties, conduct them with honour and go forth for the Greater Good!” The crowd once again sounded its approval as Shi Or’Es turned and beckoned for M’Yen to follow him.

    Powell was surveying the line from the top of an Imperial Guard Chimera, taking note of points of strength and weakness when a message crackled over the com line from the vehicle’s interior. “Commander! I have a communication from headquarters; they say it is of vital importance!” A soldier called up from below. Powell dropped down into the Chimera and answered the com: “This is Powell, what news?”
    The voice over the line sounded somewhat incredulous as it spoke “Sir we have received a message from a xenos identifying itself as Shi Or’Es, commander of the forces of the Tau Empire’s expeditionary force to Arden IV. It requests a meeting with you regarding our situation here.”
    Powell’s face went white with shock. Xenos? At a time like this? He paused a moment before replying “Tell the alien commander that I will receive him at headquarters. Prepare the conference room with all haste, I will be there shortly.”

    Shi Or’Es’ Manta dropship descended to Habiatus Alpha’s starport, its sleek lines contrasting sharply with the bulky Imperial architecture around it. He stepped out of the ship’s portal and was followed closely by M’Yen, now assigned as his adjutant. The two Tau were escorted by members of Shi Or’Es’s honour guard, clad in the armor of a Shas’la, pulse rifles in their hands. A Gue’la met them on the platform, nodding curtly at their arrival. “Lord Commander Derran Powell will see you in the conference room, follow me.” Shi Or’Es nodded back in acknowledgment. They followed the officer through the maze-like halls of Habitatus Alpha, passing Gue’la engaged in all manner of work in preparation for the battle to come. M’Yen thought it strange how the Gue’la could exhibit such a range of behaviour, from the recklessness of those he had seen every day in Habitatus Sigma to the orderly dedication of those working here at the heart of Arden IV. Perhaps the Tau had once been so as well he mused, but no longer- the Aun’s message of the Greater Good had given them unity of purpose and discipline of behaviour. His thoughts cleared as he followed his commander into the conference room.

    Powell stood at the back of the room flanked by guards and servitors, his large frame casting a shadow over the diminutive Tau. He looked across to them and saw what he thought was respect in their dark, liquid eyes. The xenos commander addressed him. “Lord Commander Powell, we have come to your world offering you salvation. Your enemies number in the millions and alone you will stand little chance of survival. Your Emperor has forsaken you and left you to die at the hands of madmen. To deny our offer of help would be contrary to any logic and to the Greater Good. What say you?”
    Powell stood a moment scrutinizing the proud little humanoid, the heavy sense of inevitability in his heart. “What are your terms alien?”
    “We simply require that you recognize the Greater Good and join with Tau, together we may prosper.”
    “I was not raised to blaspheme against the Emperor alien, nor were my subjects. To abandon our eternal debt to him is no simple requirement.”
    The xenos looked into his eyes with determination: “Simple or not, the requirements of Tau are immutable. Your misguided faith or its resistance is immaterial, whether you choose to live or die your world will join with the Greater Good. Our offer is final Gue’la. Make your decision now, for there is no time to waste.”

    From outside came the sound of the great Earthshaker cannons opening fire like thunder, the Enemy had come.
    Last edited by WiegrafFolles; 8th Dec 07 at 8:33 PM.

  6. #6
    Koranus
    Guest
    Briliant, simply briliant...

  7. #7
    Let the battle begin!

    Chapter 4

    Private Scott stood bolt upright when the first shot came roaring from the Earthshakers behind him. His pulse raced with adrenaline as he realized that the Enemy would soon be upon them. Scott had fought for five long years in the trenches against the Orks and he knew that there would soon be nothing but mayhem around him. His finger flexed nervously around the trigger of his lasrifle. From behind him an Imperial Commissar screamed orders and encouragement, summoning up his men’s valour: “Men of Arden IV! Now the vile Enemy comes upon us! We are the fist of the Emperor, we are unyielding, we will make the heretic pay dearly for every meter! Pray that the Emperor guides your shot true and that you send the heretic screaming to hell!” The men of Scott’s company roared approval over the thunder of the artillery, yet their battle cry was soon drowned out by a deeper rumbling. Over the horizon the Enemy could not yet be seen, but Scott realized that the sound of their marching preceded them. Scott gripped his lasrifle so tightly his knuckles turned white, searching somehow for security in the terror that gnawed at his heart. Scott had faced dozens of charges, but somehow it never got easier. “Hold your fire until 300 meters men! Make every shot count!” Scott’s sergeant yelled over the rolling thunder of the enemy march. Over the horizon the enemy appeared, pursuing an insane charge over the plains before them in the face of heavy artillery bombardment. “Emperor’s mercy, even Orks wouldn’t charge through that.” someone muttered beside Scott. Indeed the Enemy was being slaughtered in the hundreds, even thousands by the great Earthshaker rounds, gaping holes being blown out of their line only to be filled by more eager heretics. As the enemy neared the very earth shook and Scott recited a prayer to the Emperor, although he could not hear himself in the least. The enemy was now in range for the smaller guns of the entrenched Leman Russ tanks and their shots now punctuated the booming Earthshakers’ deadly rhythm. Scott tried to forget that perhaps friends, even relatives might be in the horde of heretics that charged eagerly to their doom, pulped or vaporized by the Imperial shot. Scott counted himself lucky that he had faced Orks, for the strategy of these madmen scarcely differed from the brutish xenos. Those who had once been men had abandoned their reason and now were scarcely more than bloodthirsty beasts.

    Now came their battle cry, deep and horrible as though the Blood God called out through them: “Blood for the blood god! Skulls for the skull throne! Burn! Maim! Kill!” Scott tried to shut out their inhuman screams and focused on his duty. Shots flew past the trench wildly, there was no discipline amongst the followers of Chaos. Behind him his Sergeant bellowed orders: “On my mark you dogs! Fire! Fire at will!” The air went hot around him as Scott’s company let their lasfire loose in unison, searing heretic flesh. Despite the terror before him Scott’s training served him well, telling him to focus only on the enemy before him and the necessity of their demise. The great wave of Chaos crashed against the wall of the Imperial Guard as thousands of cultists went screaming to hell. Even so, through their sheer numbers the forces of Chaos advanced unyieldingly, scrambling over bodies in their eagerness to please Khorne. Scott shot a hole through a cultist who wore a coat of human skin, hideous runes carved upon the garment, and blew the open the gut of a cultist who wore a belt of human heads. A man beside him lost his sanity, the madness before him engulfing his soul, and was promptly shot by the commissar behind him “Traitors will burn in hell! Have faith in the Emperor! Hold the line you dogs!” he roared before he was ripped apart by autocannon fire. Scott could tell that the end would be upon them soon. His sergeant yelled for them to switch their lasrifles to full-auto and fire at will. Scott did so gladly, pouring forth lasfire in the desperate desire to see the evil before him disappear. They were so close now, almost upon the trench, and Scott could smell their stench. He saw the men of his company fall before all manner of weapons, there was nothing but blood and death. Scott felt a sharp pain through his gut and saw that a crude spear had run him through. He sank back into the trench, the life flowing out of him, his last thoughts of holding down his trigger to take as many heretics down with him as he could. The Blood God laughed in pleasure as men died.

    Powell looked out the window at the terrifying scene before him. His city was an island of sanity in a sea of red madness, one that threatened to be engulfed slowly but surely by that crimson tide. He thought of his subjects dying down in the trenches or cowering in the halls of the hive-city, waiting hopelessly for the end. Emperor forgive me he thought as he turned to Shi Or’Es, fists clenched tight in anger. “Very well alien, we will submit to your Greater Good, but you had best hurry, soon there will be no city left to save.” Powell said through clenched teeth.
    “You will not regret your decision Commander Powell, together we will prosper, as Tau shall.” Shi Or’Es replied. He then turned to M’Yen: “Stay here with the commander, have him pass down the message that today we fight together for the Greater Good. Battle is no place for one of the Por.” M’Yen gave him a deep bow in reply. Turning to his honour guard Shi Or’Es spoke: “Have the Manta ready for departure and my battlesuit prepared as well, we go to war Shas’Vre.”


    Hope you're enjoying the story, thanks for the positive feedback! The next chapter should be done tomorrow.
    Last edited by WiegrafFolles; 29th Jul 07 at 6:31 AM.

  8. #8
    Chapter 5

    The first Imperial line had broken and the perimeter trenches of Habiatus Alpha were overflowing with the blood of the fallen, though truth be told much of it was that of the followers of Chaos who had so gleefully given their lives to Khorne. Cultists surged forward in their madness, hundreds being trampled and drowned in the bloody moat so that their fellows might carry on the dark festival of carnage. The crews of the first line of entrenched Leman Russ tanks fought to the last, the knowledge that flight would be fruitless giving rise to grim bravery, yet they were soon overwhelmed by the sheer mass of the foe. Earthshaker crews ceased adjusting their cannons, for aim was meaningless against the concentrated mass of the hoard, entering into a hypnotic rhythm of loading and firing their great weapons. The secondary line of Guard exacted a great toll from the Enemy, lasrifles and the autocannons of heavy weapons teams raining down death. All this and still the enemy came on.

    From behind the hordes of Chaos vast numbers of blue lights descended upon the plains, eerily marking the sky in ghostly hues . In their great bloodlust the followers of Khorne failed to notice the descent of the first wave of XV8 Battlesuits. At five meters till drop completion the Tau opened fire on the vast horde, specially issued cyclic ion blasters whirring to life and spraying death into their midst. It was a full five minutes before the horde became aware of their presence and began to turn on the massed battlesuits, opening a second front in the unfolding battle. Charging cultists soon met fiery deaths as Tau flamers’ discharge engulfed them. Thousands rushed against hundreds in a great red tide, yet that tide broke constantly against a wall of blue death. It was soon apparent that sheer mass was unlikely to defeat the heavy infantry assault. “Should we commit the second wave Shas’O?” Asked one of Shi Or’Es’ Shas’Vre. Shi Or’Es did not respond, he simply waited.

    From the horde suddenly welled up a wave of insane laughter, erupting even from the lips of those who now rushed to their fiery deaths. The air around the XV8 troops went wrong, strange lights playing across their monitors and waves of hot and cold rushing around them. A sickly pinkish-red light enveloped the sky and the laughter grew louder still. Huge forms materialized around them as the blood of the dead began to boil up from the earth. Soon they were upon them, demonic axes flying hungrily through the air in savage arcs, the bezerkers falling upon the startled Tau with glee. In an instant a cadre or more had been cut down, falling before the massive Traitor Marines. The survivors activated their jump jets and engaged in a deadly dance with them, the high technology of the Tau pitted against the inhuman strength and size of the bezerkers, battlesuits jumping away and struggling to distance themselves from the Marines, who followed in unrelenting pursuit. The Blood God's favoured gradually gained ground on the shaken Tau forces, picking off stragglers of the chaotic fighting retreat with gruesome efficiency. As he watched a XV8 battlesuit being cleaved in half by a berzerker leaping into the air Shi Or’Es recalled the 37th meditation of Puretide: The question of the timing of the commencement of hostilities is one upon which you must meditate most deeply. Once your decision is arrived at, it must be pursued with the utmost energy. “The enemy has shown their hand, it is time for the Mont’ka. With me my Shas’vre! Deploy all troops, surround and destroy!” Shi Or’Es said as he prepared his XV22 battlesuit to jump into battle.

    The dusk sky was lit a burning blue as thousands of Tau Manta dropships descended to the plains before Habiatus Alpha, cadres carried in their Devilfish Transports eagerly awaiting battle while dropping battlesuits covered the landing, tearing through the Chaos ranks. Stunned Guardsmen locked in desperate battle paused to note the spectacle in wonder. At that moment M’Yen broadcasted Powell’s recorded statement over the voxcasters lining the imperial lines, their sound carrying over the din of battle: “Men of Arden IV, we find ourselves presented with few options in this desperate war. Certainly on our own we face certain demise at the hands of the heretic. Yet incredibly, we are delivered from these dire straights by unexpected saviours. The Tau Empire has come to Arden IV to spread the Greater Good and save us from Chaos, even now they descend upon this world to purge the demonic taint from our home. Today we fight together for a new cause, the cause of the Greater Good and a brighter future for all races.” If the sight before them had stunned the Guardsmen, their commander’s words were yet more shocking. Priests locked in battle, swinging their chainswords in righteous fury cursed his name as traitor and blasphemer even as they fought on, refusing to bow to the new order. They were joined by few but the most fanatical subjects of the Emperor, most of the men of Arden IV finding solace in the prospect of survival and burying their doubts- for now. The Imperial Guard fought on, though they would no longer carry the name.

    Caught between the Guard and Tau Forces, the disorganized horde of Chaos worshipers found itself surrounded and outgunned, though by no means outnumbered. From the Guard ranks came a vicious counteroffensive, as stormtroopers held in reserve exploded into the Chaos lines, meltas whining and eviscerating all that stood before them. From the Tau side came a seemingly endless stream of pulse rifle and rail gun fire, blue streaks of burning atmosphere erupting from the fearsome Hammerhead gunships’ cannons carving long columns into the enemy line that reeked of vapourised flesh. An orgy of destruction was unleashed upon the Chaos forces, such that even the vile Chaos Space Marines were laid to waste, the war cry of their dark god upon their lips. The battle lasted a full three days and nights, with Shi Or’Es leading his men all the while. In the end the slaughter was such that blood soaked the ground, forming hideous lakes that still bubbled sickeningly with the twisted powers of the Warp. Yet the forces of Chaos on Arden IV laid vanquished. On that day, at the suggestion of M’Yen, Shi Or’Es ordered that there be a great celebration held in honour of the cooperation of Tau and man in the spirit of the Greater Good.

    M'Yen walked the length of the strange Gothic ramparts of the hulking Administratum building, its grim lines and towering statues a concrete testament to the principles of the Imperium of Man. He reflected with satisfaction that soon this crude structure would be replaced by the graceful lines of the Earth caste's architecture. For so long he had lived under the Imperial regime, in the shadows of society, watching for a chance to bring about the change of the Greater Good. In rags he had had walked the streets of secondary Hives, yet now he stood dressed in the grand ceremonial robes of the Water caste upon the top of the central administrative building of the whole planet. A smile came to his face, yet he only allowed himself a moment of pride as he looked out over the celebrating masses below him. What had happened here was not conquest. No, it was the integration of one more world into the prosperous harmony of Tau. It had not been easy to bring Commander Powell to speak the words of submission for his people to hear, but did not the Fire caste resist the message of the Ethereals themselves at first? Perhaps obstinacy was the way of the warrior, the message of the Greater Good calming it in slow degrees like water overcoming the strongest rock over time and integrating it into itself. That was the way of Tau, and it would prosper.

    Derran Powell, commander no longer, stared out the window of his former command post, deserted now by staff that had left to join the celebrations. He saw before him the jubilant crowds rejoicing under the alien banners of Tau. No doubt they would call on him to make a speech to grant them legitimacy. It had been a question of allegiances, that to his people and that to his Emperor. He had made his decision, one he was certain for which he was dammed. There was only one last gesture he could make of repentance. He would go to his Emperor without fear. Powell raised the laspistol to his mouth and pulled the trigger.

    Citizens of Arden IV, rejoice! Today you are saved from the depredations of the mad, and the fanaticisms of the Imperium. Join Tau and serve the principle of the Greater Good! There is much work to be done, for this world will be reborn out of its ashes as Tau was reborn so long ago out of the ashes of the Mont’au. Join the good workers of the Earth caste and let them lead you in the great work of reconstruction! Listen not to those who preach anarchy and discord, but instead follow the example of those who died gloriously in the planet’s defense. Those such as the great former commander Derran Powell who gave his life in defense of the Greater Good! From this day forth let Arden IV prosper as Tau shall!

    -Declaration of Victory upon Arden IV, Water caste distributed pamphlet



    Well there you go! I feel much more satisfied with ending now, hopefully doing better justice to all the races involved and throwing in some better character development. I'm thinking about writing another story about M'Yen's exploits (this one more character focused) anyone interested?
    Last edited by WiegrafFolles; 16th Nov 07 at 2:16 AM. Reason: New Ending

  9. #9
    jake17492
    Guest
    great job man keep it up.

  10. #10
    Mvctar Avrelivs
    Guest
    Hope you enjoyed the story, I had to cut it a bit short at the end since I have other real life things that need doing, but I think it came to the conclusion I was looking for.
    Any chance of a 'Director's Cut' with the extended ending? Inquiring minds need to know!

  11. #11
    That is a likely possibility but it will probably have to wait until next week or around the end of August. I'm moving from Japan back to Canada right now so I've go some things to do. "Director's cut" will probably elaborate a bit more on the Chaos forces, the final battle from both sides, and how exactly M'Yen played into staging the coup at the end there. Anyhow thanks for the support, there's will be more to come!

  12. #12
    Chapter 5 has finally been edited, take a look (For The Greater Good)

  13. #13
    controls
    Guest
    This is really, really good. It's a nice change of pace, seeing the story through the view of a member of the Water Caste.

  14. #14
    Member ThunderChild's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    Hive City London
    very well done. u should def contineue when u can
    ''When David Hasselhoff gives blood he doesnt get a needle, instead he asks for a gun and a bucket.''

  15. #15
    Thanks for the comments, hopefully I'll be able to get writing during Christmas break.

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

     

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •