Thanks for the input!
Uki, I'll try to expand these a bit, as same as...
final sequence, the whole description of explosion and last moments is waaaaay too short ("Noooo!", The End. lol)
About the things happen too suddenly - well, at some points it was intentional (I guess you are about those unintentional, but well...) - I just don't like the books filled with descriptions of nature / ships / rooms, and lack of actual content, so I somewhat tried to make each part contain lot of action. I should think about making some action without real action... or something like that.
Bleah, and I should get MS Word too or make a trip to the friend owning it.