View Poll Results: Which story do you prefer?

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  • The Rain Lord

    2 13.33%
  • Exile

    2 13.33%
  • The Folly of Virgil Delargo

    10 66.67%
  • Reflexes

    0 0%
  • Once upon a time in Commorragh

    1 6.67%
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[Fluff] 40k short story competition: "back in the saddle" - VOTING THREAD

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    [Fluff] 40k short story competition: "back in the saddle" - VOTING THREAD

    OK, so I have got here 5 stories. All of them are western, and I will be listing them in order of largest to smallest. Please note that this is my first ever competition and my second ever time posting a poll. So it's likely that I'll get some things wrong, though I hope I haven't forgotten anyone's story (and if I have, I am prepared to become a flagellant in penitence. Seriously).

    So, heeere we go...

    The Rain Lord



    Exile



    The folly of Virgil Delargo



    Reflexes



    Once upon a time in Commorragh

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    No, there isn't. Nice try though .

    Exile was my personal favourite and received my vote. I know who wrote it, but I won't be revealing that until the voting's done, which incidentally will be in 14 days.

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    Well my favourite was The Folly of Virgil Delargo, which got my vote, but the others weren't that far behind.
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    Only two votes made so far?

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    Not many won't vote at first, mainly because it's quite allot to read through in one sitting. I still have yet to finish reading so I haven't voted yet either.

    I would like to point out though that if you come to this thread, read a story and then deicide to leave without voting due to wall of text syndrome, then think again. Print out a few of the pieces, and read them in your own time. People have put a massive amount of time into these shorts. I hope you give them the gratitude and praise they deserve by actually reading them. It would be a shame to have let them put all that effort to waste.
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    Hmm ... They are all pretty good. I like the narrative flow of The Rain Lord, Exile has a fast paced action and interesting descriptions, especially the ork scene. (though I don't think there's any conceivable way an eldar jetbike can defeat 2 eldar jets, its like a motorbike with some hero on it shooting down 2 F16s.)

    Reflexes has a good story, I like the ending. Once upon a time in Commorragh was an enjoyable read, though a little short and not fleshed out enough in my humble opinion. All in all, my fave read was The Folly of Virgil Delargo. Punchy and very western.

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    Well, these were some enjoyable reads, and I have a hard time choosing a favorite.

    I'll have to go with The Rain Lord though, it definately have some of that good old 40k mood to it. A bit of the old ultraviolence, if you will. I also like how it's told from different points of view, namely both sides in a conflict. Only thing that really bothered me was the format, but I'm not going to hold that against it.

    Good work all around lads.
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    To me,"The Folly of Virgil Delargo" seems both the best read and the most "to theme" story of the bunch. The twist is 40k-esque and the story itself is well-paced. Kudos to all who entered!
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    For me it came to a coin toss between "The Folly of Virgil Delargo" and "Once upon a time in Commorragh".

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    This thread requires a bump.

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    I assume most people who started reading the stories are finishing them around this time. We still have a while before the poll closes, though.

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    I just finished 'Folly.' I liked it well enough. I agree that impersonating an Inquisitor is probably a very rare crime.

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    And a very stupid one, as you can see .

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    I'm also a fan of the Folly. The Rain Lord was fighting for it in my mind, but wall of text is wallish and hurts my eyes. Besides, impersonating an Inquisitor? Bahahaha, silly people. Good job everybody!

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    I think it's quite clear who's going to win this, lol. Only a few more days of voting left everyone. If you haven't already voted, now would be a good time.

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    2 days and a minimum of 8 votes needed by The Rain Lord and Exile to displace the leader, The Folly of Virgil Delargo, with Reflexes and Once Upon a Time in Commorragh needing 10 and 9 votes respectively. It's possible, but is it plausible? Will Virgil's folly cost him victory? Or can Reflexes leap ahead? Can The Rain Lord rain on the parade? Or will Exile continue to wander alone, with Once Upon a Time in Commorragh becoming another tale of ages?

    Book your saddles and bring along your canned beans for the exciting conclusion to the final Story Competition of 2009. Voting closes on December the 25th, with the winner being decided shortly after. You don't want to miss this!

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    I want to say thanks to all the authors. I enjoyed reading all of the stories, and I think this sort of competition is a fun concept. Good work to all involved!
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    This poll is now finished. The authors are:

    The Rain Lord: AHH! MOTHERLAND
    Exile: Avatar 720
    The Folly of Virgil Delargo: Fith Knight
    Reflexes: Oh,John,no! (I expected to get at least one vote lol)
    Once upon a time in Commorragh: Archon Tahril

    Congratulations to Fith Knight for his stunning victory. 10 votes! Commiserations to me. Everyone else, your stories were awesome, have some virtual cookies!

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    So, where's my prize?

    I want to thank all who wrote, all who read and all who voted, and of course Shoota Fodder & Oh,John,no! for putting this thing together. It was fun, hoping to see more of these events in the not too distant future.

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    I think that we're trying to do these like the painting competitions and have one every quarter or six months or so... this is the 4th that I know of although there is another one that was already started and the deadline coming up shortly. Cognrats too all of the authors for fine work and special congrats to Fith Knight for the win!

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    OK, I think now is the time to start suggesting themes for the next comp (which I think Shoota will be running).

    My ideas:

    Non-imperial
    Inquisition
    Rogue Trader

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