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    = HWC = The Purifying Flame <Prologue >

    Welcome and thanks for clicking on this thread.

    This is a HWC fanfiction that will be closely based on the actual events of the standalone game "Homeworld:Cataclysm" but features various original characters of a (somewhat-vassal) clan/kiith and plotlines based on installments of my other fanfiction "Tales of the Vjel-Amaj".

    While this story will follow the path of the original Kiith Somtaaw vessel 'Kuun-Lan', it will still feature characters of the TOVJ fan fiction and there will be a lesser fan-created vessel that will join the Kuun-Lan's side as it ventures into, heh, equatorial hells.

    The current working title is "The Purifying Flame" is likely to be changed in the future. This story is experimental in writing for me.

    The initial idea of writing this story was inspired by Doberman211, who wrote a HW1 story based on the actual venture of the Kharakian Mothership to Hiigara.

    Quick Notes about this fanfiction



    Note:
    - There will be errors in diction and grammar. English has not been my main language for some two decades now. Bear with me.
    - This story is aimed for 18+ as it features violence. (And light-detail romance ;D)
    - Aside to optional musical themes from youtube, there will also be certain links leading to the cutscenes of the game, as well as direct links to favorable mp3 themes from Robotech/Macross and various other of my taste. My taste is bad, but if you can read while listening to the music, it could enhance the feel.
    - There will be several perspectives actually. One is that of the protagonist but also that of the military branch of the Kuun-Lan. It is intended that the protagonist's viewpoint is in " modern" speech. Nevertheless, the Kuun-Lan will remain in Homeworld-speech style. Despite the initial first person aspect in many occasions, the story is to be in omniscient narration. Full first person would have been too limiting and would work against my urge to learn how to write clean and thoroughly; yet an authentic first-person story is another challenge to take on in the future.


    Fanfiction category: military, adventure, scifi (duh), light romance, survival, terror

    Fanficiton description:
    This fanfiction plunges into the lives that serve the struggling Kiith Somtaaw and not only shows the progress of the Kuun-Lan's fleet command but also those who serve onboard the single vessel of their minor kiith; a deep space auxiliary tender.

    last note: First paragraphs are a slightly altered reference of the HWC introductory narration.


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    Table of Contents

    Prologue (scroll down, bro!)


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    /o\ Homeworld: The Purifying Flame /o\

    PROLOGUE

    ### Homeworld Cataclysm - Introduction ###


    The war for Hiigara has left the galaxy in turmoil. The past fifteen years have seen the birth of new possibilities ... and the festering of old grudges. The once dominant Taiidan Empire has fractured under the strain of civil war.

    The new Taiidani Republic tries to hold old territories together. Forces loyal to the old Emperor lurk in the new bandit kingdoms, waiting for their chance to strike back.

    While the Taiidani struggle between past and future, the Kushan people have established themselves on Hiigara… Building new cities. Repairing the damage done by the final battle for their homeworld.
    Even a fragile peace has its politics. The Kiith council has been reestablished, and the future of Hiigara is now debated amongst the gathered Kiith-Sa. Even amongst equals, there are power struggles.

    The Mothership still orbits high above Hiigara. Pressed into the role of shipyard, she now builds new carriers to the specifications of each individual Kiith. The need for new ships and the crews to man them is a desperate one. Military and economic pressure on the new Hiigarans is intense.

    Resources and technology are at the command of the council. Kiith with little or no political power have been forced to purchase technology from the Bentusi and other races. Hiigaran ships of exotic design now seek their future amongst the stars.

    The war for Homeworld is over now. But the galaxy remains a dangerous place...

    Of clan and kiith



    It all started on a day that was actually going well. I was onboard the Kebren-Ito during a third cycle in service of the Asune clan. I'd almost say that the Asune clan and the ship was becoming my new home. My mother was safe on Hiigara and somewhere, life felt to be normal. Living in space was tedious and hard work, but the struggle was worth it. Once I achieved a decent status for the both of us, I could return to Hiigara and enjoy life there for years to come until I would have to serve again.

    And all was going as planned…
    The Kebren-Ito was part of the Kuun-Lan flotilla. Two other clan vessels were with us, supporting the mining operation at the orbit of a celestial moon. We were somewhere at the outskirts of the Homeworld system when the first hell broke loose. But… prior to that happening, things went as usual. No troubles with raiders. No technical problems. Nothing really.

    During the course of that day, my shift was actually over, just like the rest of those who were part of my shift - and there were several friends coming back from a mining sortie with their Worker corvettes.
    I was part of an industrial team, a so-called section consisting of some thirty men per unit. Although I was more involved as a technician, our teams maintained and manned Worker corvette #4 most of the time.

    I can remember it as if happened yesterday… I waited for them at the airlock ports. Another friend joined me, who was actually nervous to meet up with a specific person again. As you know, it is obvious for colleagues to become close friends.

    *****


    - Family business -

    = Sector -1.0.0 - Outskirts of the Hiigaran Homeworld System. Orbit of 5th moon of the 13th planet. =

    ### Homeworld Cataclysm Soundtrack - #26 ###

    The barren moon throws a shadowy blanket over the fields of minor asteroids captured in the well of the small yet frozen planetoid. Although utter darkness blinds the eye, one is soon to discover patches of periodically shimmering stars approaching the edge of the shadowy flank. Rows of light reveal the countless decks of a Hiigaran mothership, joined by three other vessel as well as several small units moving about the area.

    Batches workers continued their duties. Energetic fields were hurled upon random asteroids. Each wave of these nimble industrial corvettes used their forward phased disassembler array to decompose various materials from the myriad of rock formations and absorb them into their bays. Once saturated, the units returned to the majestic vessel, transferring the gathered resources into its belly by the ports found across the lower sections. Hours of nonstop strip mining services had gone by and a selected few of the worker corvettes split from the operation in order to exchange the exhausted crewmen.

    Two packs of three small fighters continually swept through the area, patrolling and finding nothing but thousands of obstacles to dodge.

    *****


    = Kebren-Ito. Corvette docking bay. Aft section =

    Men and women in industrial suits moved along the area, minding their separate duties. Dark orange and yellow was common upon their industrial attires. Announcements were made every now and then. The bay area was flooded by the noise of voices and the clatter caused by the industrial units that was right above the deck. Every now and then, faint rumbles went through the entire area, obviously caused by worker corvettes that either dropped of ore material or docked with the vessel.

    A young man with dark skin leaned against a fixed container. He yawned and crossed his arms again after wiping his face. He coughed a few times as he still had some of the fine asteroid residues on his suit. The recent shift at the industrial segment was strenuous. Just when he looked back to the floor, a sudden slap against his shoulder woke him from his drowsiness.

    "What the --"
    "Surprise", another familiar voice said, "Hey, Rojan. How's it going?"

    Rojan stood up and turned around. Looking at the other young man, Rojan recognized his friend and colleague of the same industrial section, Lucius Rhys Asune. Lucius was a Hiigaran who had fair skin, short blond hair, blue eyes and just about the same average height as his darker counterpart. Although he did not have the iconic sharp eyes of an Asune, he already pledged himself fully to the Asune clan, thus receiving all privileges.

    "Fine, actually. Just damn tired", Rojan replied and stretched his back, "*Ugh* That shift was quite a tough one."
    "Agreed. But according to the industrial command, it was totally worth it. Looks like we're harvesting a gold mine. Did you hear the report? So far we found heavy elements as well as radioactives. Pretty much the stuff we have on us right now."

    "Radio-- Wha-- don't tell me that we were --?!"
    "Of course not, man. Just kidding - Well, they did find valuable radioactives - just only that they used the internal disassembler to decompose it."

    The darker man took a deep breath and shook his head, "Knock it off, heh. I'm insisting to stay alive for a long while, you know."
    "Same here. Hey, shouldn't the others be here now?"

    "Actually, that should be the case by now", Rojan noted, "Guess they are the last Worker to dock… actually, they're always the last one… I'm sure the bunch is just as exhausted as we are."

    "Late as usual. But hey. You know the drill as soon as I mention 'booze' to them. Easiest tool to enlighten spirits", the other Hiigaran shook his head, "Speaking of which. ' you coming with us to the dig? Enough to drink and new people around. Especially with the Somtaaw and other clan members of the flotilla onboard, it could get interesting for you too. After all, we're free of the next two duty shifts to come. Enough time to get drunk and sleep it out till duty again."

    Rojan lifted an eyebrow, "Drunk? Since when are crewmen allowed to be that off duty --"
    "Pssst. Nobody needs to know we got some real stuff", Lucius quietly said, waving his hands in a downwards motion.

    "Uh, right. Well, I already have a headache. I'll skip the real stuff. But, I really could need a short nap. That last shift was a killer. Better off getting some rest. That was the last time I try to sleep while the flotilla is in hyperspace, Lucius. I almost fell asleep while operating that processor unit earlier today."
    "Heh, yeah. Saw you dozing off. Lucky for you it was one of the subordinate staff who woke you up. "

    "Ugh. Indeed."
    "But thanks for dropping by. I'm sure the others will be happy to see you. After this, you better hit the bunk, man. You look like you want to hop right into the cryo-sleep shift, eh?"

    Rojan nodded with a weary face. The two men turned around when they noticed the specific signal light flashing from yellow to green, revealing that the airlock port had been pressurized and locked. At the same time, an announcement was made.

    ""Worker #4, pressurization completed. Anchorage confirmed and locked. All green. Clear to disembark. Welcome back.""

    It was clear that Lucius was slightly anxious about the people who were onboard the worker that had just docked. Likewise, Rojan was looking forward to it as well. Several friends were onboard Worker #4 that was also their designated corvette for space duty. Over the three cycles of service, Rojan became part of a small clique that served onboard the Asune vessel as the other two clan vessels of the flotilla. Working tightly together in space brought entire groups to learn each other closely.

    However, the two men were Hiigarans of different heritages than the native asune people or those of the other clans onboard. Native asune were well known for their shorter appearances as well as their notable sharp eyes. Nevertheless, it was common to have various ethnic groups serving throughout the wild mix of kiithid and clans of Hiigara; and thus, all were Hiigarans.

    The airlock was large for it size, offering much leeway not only for personnel but also for medium-sized vehicles to load cargo. Since the Worker corvette was to receive a replacement crew right after a maintenance run, a group of mechanics was standing by, reading to board as soon as the current crew departed.

    After the mechanical seal at the center of the airlock rotated several times, the automated units went active, slowly opening the blast shields and the three parts pressure ducts.

    A small group of men and women exited the airlock, all wearing specific industrial suits for space duty. A strong smell of oil stung their noses. Visible Fog continuously emitted from the rims of the airlock. All were happy to finally be onboard again. Various heavy steps clattered upon the grated floor. Many greeted the engineering teams as well as the two Hiigarans who wove back and shook hands.
    But finally, familiar and friendly faces disembarked from the corvette's airlock. Many had their pressure helmets dangling on their back or in their hands. Aside to minor differences of colored stripes, their suits had sky blue and white schemes. Their suits were of space-hardened material and also possessed protective plastics that also were devices. Cables and straps dangled from the sides of a few people; obviously the universal tools for seat harness and linking one's suit-integrated PDA with a specific system. Likewise, many had thick black cylindrical antennas pointing outwards from their shoulders, leading to a small unit as well as an ear plug with a curly cable.

    It was a great feeling for Rojan to be part of a group that enjoyed his company. There were at least eight different faces he knew well. Some were siblings; others were from the other clans of the flotilla. Familiar faces were greeted by lifting the chin to each other.

    *

    *Yawn* - The female of the trio before them stretched herself.

    "Erentir, Mak'. Rilese -- Glad you all made it back, everybody", the dark Hiigaran greeted once more, "How was the shift? Heard there were a lot rocks to dodge."

    The two Hiigaran brothers chuckled after looking at each other.
    Rilese intervened before the others responded, "Hey, Roe -- It was quite… well… rocky."

    Mak chuckled, "Yeah, Rilly rocky."
    "Rilly wild", Erentir added.
    The woman knocked her knuckles against his shoulder, "Very funny, brothers..."
    "It was quite the way he said it actually", Erentir added as he rubbed his head, "Rill's conning run was quite interesting. Little sister took some interesting courses to dodge a few rocks. Oh, and she's the one who was responsible for that bump that went through the ship, if you noticed -- heh, the fourth time this week."
    The young woman grumbled, "Hey. How about you boneheads take over the conn' next time we're in a class 7 asteroid field?! Not easy when you have some Somtaaw mining foreman blathering in your ear while having a full tummy of ore and a ship full of people. And for having controls that were sluggish -- You have no clue that it's a damn responsibility! Fortunate enough that the worker corvettes have a decent turn rate."

    Erentir patted her shoulder, obviously not even taking her ramble seriously, "Now now, little sister - Was just a tease between siblings, eh. Calm down", he said with a gentle cheer, "We're still alive, after all. For what it's worth."
    <<If one more happens this week, you owe me, Erentir>>, Mak whispered into his ear, only to receive an elbow nudge from his sister - and then from his brother.

    The Galaheth trio



    *

    "Not that I'm complaining, but where's Arison and Hidoro? Seen Joris and Gija back there, but where are the other two", Rojan asked, wondering why there were no other familiar faces disembarking.
    Rilese giggled lightheartedly, "Joris and Gija are comparing internal diagnostics with external readings, making sure that #4 is ready for the next run. As usual, the two are all craving for the report of the materials we harvested. Somtaaw Kuun-Lan stated that there were some valuable resources in the material we harvested.
    Dorothy is taking care of some last logistics, uh, things. Last time the bay command got on his tail because he forgot to charge battery units before we started our duty shift this cycle. He also had a bit of an argument with somebody of command and, well, bad idea."
    "Indeed, especially when it’s the whole section that gets punished", Makir sighed, "Was the reason we were forced to roll on two very long shifts."

    Rojan looked to the ceiling, "But of course. That is why we had to do another ton of hours… No wonder."
    "Aye", the other brother concluded, "Collective punishment to ensure no individual does it again. I thought we were engineers, not convicts."
    "Want to switch to the Kuun-Lan? I'm sure they're looking for workers."
    "Oh, hell no. Heh. Anyways. Glad you guys are back. Class 7 rock fields are not easy, but at least all went well..."


    "And we should celebrate that, and I know just the thing, guys", Lucius added, gaining their attention, "Our clan mates have another stash of liquid gold. And you know what that means…"

    Despite being dirty and weary, several faces suddenly became euphoric. It was probably the best news since they boarded they returned from the strenuous shift.

    "Hey, Luuucy…", a female voice said with calmness.
    Rojan and the others moved aside when he noticed the taller Hiigaran woman moving out of the airlock, heading straight the specific person.


    <Now comes the best part>, Mak said.
    <Heh. The greeting ritual, you mean>, his brother added, <Shheeeee-it… Here we go again.>


    Like many of the worker corvette, she wore the thick duty suit that had many gadgets and components across its sophisticated attire. The actual colors however were different and emitted a warrior's presence. Predominately, one would notice the distinct dark green schemes and the iconic symbols of the third clan of the flotilla. The fabric of the suit was of a thick material that was extremely sturdy, resistant yet flexible; no doubt that it could withstand the harsh realm of vacuum space and more.

    Tubes went from the left shoulder across torso to the bulky pouch on the side of the right thigh. A heavy and bulky pistol was slung over her back. Although it appeared to be of a considerably large caliber, it was obvious that the weapon was specifically made for zero-G environments.

    Lucius petrified the moment he spotted the taller woman coming straight for him. She removed the piece of fabric that covered her hair. The tall woman had bright green eyes and beige hair that shimmered as the light of the deck fell upon it. The green pearls focused on nothing else but the young man she approached.

    Once she was in range, the tall woman immediately wrapped her arms around Lucius' sides, embracing and lifting him almost off his feet as she pressed her lips against his surprised face. She held him almost in the air for at least six long seconds of a passionate kiss. Lucius landed upon weary feet for a split second when she lowered him again.

    <That lucky little bastard… >, Makir slowly raised his fist to the height his shoulder, followed by a pat of Erentir on the other side.
    <I know just how you feel.>

    The Galahethian sister made a subtle frown.
    "Ah... I was looking forward to that", she added with a smile, "Best part of my day."

    Rojan wrapped his arms and greeted her with a nod.
    "Hey, Roe."
    "Arison", he replied with a subtle cautious respect.

    Arison Vasinduur Shaiid


    *

    The dark skinned Hiigaran smiled back at her, "You know, Lucius here had the idea of heading to The Dig to moist dry throats. I know that Shaiidi --"
    "I will join", she said with a firm voice at first but then appeared to correct her tone, "- I mean, I would enjoy t-tagging among."

    "It's along *oow, hey*", Rilese corrected before receiving a gentle knock against the backside of her head.

    "You coming along, Rojan? Thought you wanted to sleep."
    Rojan looked to the floor before answering, "Oh, what the hell. It's not like we all ever get to have a break on the same off duty cycle. I'll be drowsy but I think there's nothing wrong with hanging with the crew for a while. Let's go."

    Makir and Erentir suddenly approached his side, wrapped their arms around his and began dragging him away as they sung a jolly theme.

    "Heh, I'll tell Gija, Joris and Hidoro quickly. We'll come right after you", Rilese added as she walked back through the corvette's airlock.

    <You sure about this, Ari? I mean, we don't want to force you -->, Lucius stopped when he read nothing but certainty in her bright eyes.
    <Do not worry about me. I enjoy the company. Let us enjoy the day.>
    He paused at first, then smiled, <You're right. Nothing can screw our day now. Let's go.>

    *****

    = Kiith Somtaaw Mothership - Kuun-Lan - Command Citadel =
    Almost half an hour later…

    ### Homeworld: Cataclysm - OST - #26 ###


    The bridge citadel of the Somtaaw mothership was very spacious, with various sections devoted to countless departments and operations of the vessel and beyond. From shoulder to shoulder, one would immediately discover the horizontal row of large screens representing the outer view of space featuring asteroids, the planetoid and countless symbols tagged upon everything.

    The entire area itself was not considerably bright. Every patch of crewmen featured light glowing from their consoles as well as a calm blue flood that soothed the eyes. One major source of the flood was the impressive and massive projection of a holographic sphere revealing astronomical and sensorial data of the vicinity.

    It was clear that one why one called this area the Citadel as it was not only full with hundreds of people but also vast in height and depth. Some would even sense the nature of a cathedral, as the structure and designs of the area did reveal devout features that was common in the cultural heritage of Somtaaw. Even drapes with iconic sigil of Somtaaw could be found upon the walls - one being old and burnt; one that was possibly an old piece of history itself.

    Minor announcements to pools echoed lightly throughout the spacious region. All operators focused on their individual tasks; speaking with officers throughout the flotilla and the vessel itself. Voices overlapped, almost sounding like the chants of various monks. The power grid hummed its songs as it continuously fused power and life to every single corner of the mothership.

    Every operator pool, every section had their individual designation. About two third of the frontal region of the citadel was primarily upon the same plane, with various minor pools just slightly. A selected few of officers moved along the upper areas, diverting orders through their headsets or directly by earshot range from above. Almost everybody possessed a shoulder-mounted radio unit with a cylindrical antenna pointing outwards as well as a headset unit or a cabled transmitter.

    The rear third of the citadel featured several levels of distanced pools that dealt with primary functions of the entire mothership. Even though the entire bridge citadel was the brain, the rear section was the superior command of the entire Kuun-Lan.
    Only the seat of the commander-in-chief rested between the two sections; heightened upon a wide platform with single operators manning lower stations. Every single part of the Kuun-Lan citadel was sophisticated with cables, consoles, interfaces and massive hardware. Guard patrols moved about the area, saluting as they moved past officers and sentry units maintaining vigil.

    *

    The subordinate officer gazed below upon the operator whose face was just as shocked as he was. Pure astonishment was written upon the face of operator. The officer placed his hand once more upon his ear as the garbled mess repeated itself into his left ear. What was thought to be a meaningless mess of distorted intergalactic radio noise proved to be something else… something far greater than one could imagine. The noises repeated once more.

    "S-Sir… Sir…", the operator repeated as others of the pool turned around with faces likewise concerned, "Your… O-Orders?"

    The grip of the man tightened upon the railing. The nightmare was unfolding just before his spiritual eyes.

    "Sir?! Sh-Shall I inform the --"
    At least, he awoke from his inner dismay and uncertainty. Once again, the myriads noises in his ear repeated in his ear. No - he needed to reacted… at once!

    "No. I shall take care of this task. It is my duty. I want you all to do your best to filter the best out of this… this… transmission."

    After a hesitant pause, the operators below saluted and conducted his order.

    The officer turned around, gazing over to the distant man who sat upon the sophisticated throne of the citadel.

    *

    The man who sat upon the prominent captain's chair was possibly in his early 50s and was of an average size for a Hiigaran. His dark hair was combed towards the back and his face was free of facial hair. His fair complexion revealed faint wrinkles. The man proudly wore the uniform of a Somtaaw Fleet Commander; serving as the highest ranking military officer of the flotilla. The epaulette upon his right shoulder was connected with a golden braid and other military decorations that went across his chest and broad shoulders. Even though he was a military naval officer, his appearance also emitted not only superior order but also faint presence of a pious figure.

    A specific recognizable tone suddenly sounded in his ear.
    ""Communications to Fleet Commander Cortaur Somaaw… Ur-Urgent.""
    "Hmm?", he hummed and pressed a specific button upon his small wrist pad, "Go ahead, officer."

    ""Excuse my interference, commander, but our arrays have captured what was first thought to be signal echoes from subspace… until we ran signal filters by protocol. By all due respect to the kiith -- Sir, you must heed this.""

    "Very well, patch it through."
    ""At once.""

    The mess of noises was played into his ear. Cortaur remained silent and did not react until he listened to the entire transmission once more. During all this time, the distant officer did not say a word but way for his commander to respond. Cortaur said nothing at first but maintained a frozen pose until he lifted his head, looking straight at the distant man. Before the superior officer said a word, he gazed beyond his shoulder, looking at the specific heightened platform - as if he were looking for a specific person.

    "My First Officer?"
    ""Off duty, sir.""
    "Of course… I want you to summon her and all senior officers to duty at once. Establish a flotilla-wide broadcast and transmit this signal to all ships. I wish this to be heard before I give my command to the ship. Attempt to verify the timecode of the broadcast so we can estimate the time dilation."

    ""Yes, sir… Yes, sir!""
    "One more order."
    ""Standing by.""
    "Dispatch to the flotilla: Initiate hyperdrive spooling."

    ""At once!""

    ***
    = Asune clanship, carrier Kebren-Ito - Recreation sector, The Dig =

    ### Total Recall (original) - Mars Bar Music ###

    Music continuously played in the background as people enjoyed their time off duty. Although the ceiling was not far above their heads, there was enough room for single people to be fooling around on the fixed tables, dancing around and doing other silly moves. Makeshift light beams struck colorful light across the area as another small batch of people carried their drinks over to vacant spots.
    It was always this jolly as these crewmen never had to worry about the next two cycles thanks to the regulations of off duty. Laughter and overlapping voices filled the place with life. Mixed crewmen enjoyed their time. But as everybody was having a great time, the music stopped abruptly and as the seconds passed by, groups seized their talks.

    As others hushed, Makir stood in front of table and continued his blathering, "- so then this other guy showed up, and we were, like, 'holy sand-cursed Iifrit!' - then just as this guy started talking stuff and insulted Rill, she immediately turned around and kicked him right in the -- Hey, why aren't you guys listening *hicks*?!"
    The others turned away from him, "Who -- no, WHY did something kill the music. Th-That *hicks* was one of my favorites from that - that… I forgot. Can't recall it… Uh - It"
    "Shh! Shhh!", Rilese said again and again and wove her hand.
    "Don't shh me, missy. This is an important --"

    Makir then felt a hand upon his shoulder. It was Arison, who looked beyond to the same spot where the entire mess hall was looking at. She seemed serious of something. After a while, the area finally calmed so that all could hear the noise coming from the public announcement speakers. It appeared to be a transmission broadcasted from the flotilla.

    A selected few stood up when they heard the first run of the transmission. They were shocked - and the majority had no clue why at first until it went through another time. It was a voice that was accompanied by loud disturbing sounds, ringing, irregular codec filtering and other interruptions that disrupted the comprehensible quality of the transmission. Electronic sounds and chimes frequently sounded in the background. Even though the transmission was extremely garbled, all soon managed to understand the same…

    ""This is Kiith Nabaal carrier VEER-RAK to all ships in range of Hiigara… Multiple Imperial Taiidani forces are attacking the Homeworld and are attempting to break through and raid. Our forces are spread and we cannot hold them! Requesting immediate assistance! Multiple deep space clan fleets have been ambushed as well and are compromised. I repeat… This is Kiith Nabaal carrier…""

    The garbled voice continued its speech, yet left the entire area full of concerned faces. Before anybody dared to say a word, a voice spoke.

    ""Attention flotilla. Standby for an urgent broadcast from Fleet Commander Cortaur Somtaaw…""

    Once a specific sound played, the firm voice of the Somtaaw fleet commander spoke from the P.A. speakers:

    ""This is Somtaaw Fleet Command to all ships. We have received this transmission only a few minutes. According to our current findings, we have discovered that this is an authentic message and that this was apparently dispatched seven hours ago. We must assume that we were not able to receive this earlier due to our low orbit, solar disruptions and of course our recent emergence from the shadow of the celestial planetoid. According to the transmission, various clan fleets were assaulted as well. We… must assume that our temporary inability of receiving the transmission earlier must have also been our salvation from remaining undetected - avoiding a deep orbit ambush all together.


    Somtaaw… Asune… Galaheth… Shaiid… Brethren -- Hiigarans… Our Homeworld is under attack by remnants of the fallen Imperial Taiidan. This must be a desperate incursion to strike at the very weak heart of Hiigara. Even if we are miners who seek the galaxy by our own spirit, we are still Hiigarans, and it is the blood of our brothers and sisters that is being spilled at this very moment. We cannot let this go unheard… We will… We must respond to the distress of our Homeworld.""

    Many mouths fell open.

    ""As of this moment, the flotilla is to seize all mining operations at once… All ships are to dock at once. This is Somtaaw Fleet Command to all ships: Condition: Red. Navigational guidance linked and in progress to break orbit from the planetoid by thrusters. Prepare for a combined emergency hyperjump. Set course for the Homeworld. Spool hyperdrive for a Constellation Jump. Coordinates to be transmitted as soon as kushanly possible. Standby for my mark.""

    Within a few seconds, the distressful sound of 'condition:red' swept across the area, followed by the announcement and alarm of the upcoming hyperjump. As of this moment, it was clear that the off duty cycle was over. Men and women immediately scrambled. Although hectic suddenly swept across the area, everybody rushed towards the exits in a steady stream.

    "We… We better report to the section leader!", Rilese shouted as she tried to speak louder than the surrounding noise.
    "Agreed", Arison said, dragging Lucius along, "Come!"
    Rojan kept his hands upon his head, not believing what was going on, ultimately deciding to move on with the rushing crewmen.

    The drunk Hethian still stood in front of the table, "Ey… Does that mean we don't get our well deserved off-duty cy-- ?!"
    But Erentir immediately dragged him along, "Exactly. Now - Come on! Party is over!"
    "Thundering asteroids…"

    *****
    To be continued…

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    Missed this; how I did I don't know!
    "You're worse than the Beast! At least the Beast doesn't pretend to be righteous!"

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    Hehe yeah, I forgot to do an update in this new story and announce it. My bad heh.

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    good read sparki detailed as ever

    hope to see some continuation for this as Cataclysm is my favoriti

    Cheers and greetings from Fryslan

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    good read sparki detailed as ever

    hope to see some continuation for this as Cataclysm is my favoriti

    Cheers and greetings from Fryslan
    Thanks!

    Really want to continue this one. It is fun to write from a different perspective.

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