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HW: Legacies Part II

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    Fiction HW: Legacies Part II

    Yup. This is the sequel to Homeworld: Legacies.

    Here goes!

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    Chapter 1

    Noreena held a tissue to her nose as she trudged into her quarters, ignoring the room’s dimness as she continued on a direct path to her bed. As she passed the recyler slot, she tossed her tissue into it. Then she peeled her bathrobe off. Underneath, she wore a set of blue scrubs that hung on her painfully thin body like a crinkly drape. She kicked off her slippers as she shuffled towards the bed.

    Then, with a deep, relieved sigh, she collapsed face-up onto the inviting mattress. She pulled her hand-com out of her scrubs’ pocket and tossed it into the quarters' far wall. It hit with a satisfyingly loud thunk then landed mutely on the carpet. She savored the feel of the soft pillow against her bald head as she closed her eyes.

    “Thank Sajuuk I am out of that damn tank,” she intoned feebly to the walls. “One more day with those Qwaardamn plugs and I would’ve been ready to kill somebody. Anybody.”

    Bleeep.

    With an irritated sigh, she struggled to pry her weakened body off the bed, and plodded towards the sound. With a pained wince that went through her entire body, she bent to pick it up. Then she slowly straightened, grimacing all the while. She hit the open line button.

    “If it isn’t about Makaan, Karan, or Ashoran, I don’t give a shit,” she snapped.

    “I thought you’d be in a better mood by now,” a surprised voice replied back. Noreena recognized it as Pyalun and let out a tired sigh.

    “Hey it takes time to get out of a two-month-long snit,” she replied glumly as she leaned into the wall, then slid down it to sit on the floor. “Those Vaygr neurostabilizers should be restricted to commandos looking for a battle-mood elevator. It’s a wonder I didn’t go insane from them.”

    “It’s a wonder we survived two months of you being on them,” Pyalun replied with a chuckle. “It’s probably just as well no Crusade got near us to piss you off.”

    Noreena sighed. Persuading the other six Vaygr Crusades to break their alliance with Ashoran had proven as fruitful as getting Makaan to wear green for a day: not at all. The Warlord had sent letters, couriers, and even gifts to the respective Crusades’ commanders in a bid to regain their favor. He’d gotten back cold silence. One even had the audacity to send a cloaked Marine Frigate full of Ashoran’s cultist soldiers for a second retake attempt on the Kuun-Lan.

    Fortunately Noreena, with her drug-induced crankiness, had picked up on the sensor anomalies the frigate’s cloak had produced, and ignored every insistence that she was paranoid. By the time the cult-run frigate had gotten close enough for the proximity sensors to go off, Noreena had already fired the Siege Cannon at it. The resulting explosion had instantly squashed any further protests with the bite of cold, hard reality.

    When all had been said and done, Noreena had saved the Somtaaw from fighting off another boarding attempt. Ifriit had loosened up from his annoyance with her temperamental behavior to thank her profusely. Twenty minutes and one smartass remark from Noreena later, he’d gone back to shooting her cameras snarky looks.

    “Hey, you still there?” Py asked.

    “Yeah, just reminiscing. I was skaarshit,” she sighed, rubbing her forehead as more memories surged in her mind.

    Too skaarshit to even see it. No wonder kiith-Sa kept acting like I’d turned into Mak’s clone.

    Now she felt afraid of the depths to which her anger had plunged during those months. She knew she’d have quite a few apologies to make during her time out. A long, loud sigh escaped her lips, alerting Py to her state of mind.

    “I forgave you a long time ago,” he replied calmly. “Bad drugs, bad tank. Just don’t get near kiith-Sa for a while.”

    Noreena blinked, then sighed glumly as she scrubbed her face with her free hand.

    “I’ll deal with him after I’ve had my sleep,” she said tiredly. “Not gonna be easy to apologize for calling him a wimp. I heard Alisair did that once and ended up ignored for a week.”

    Py chuckled.

    “He recovers fast. Just give him time.”

    “Time I’ve plenty of. Sleep I do not. Catch you later, Py.”

    “No problem.”

    Noreena shut the hand-com off. With another pained grimace, she pushed herself back onto her feet. Then, after several plodding steps, she finally reached her bed, and collapsed onto it. Only a second after her head touched the pillow, she was asleep.


    Chapter 2

    Chocolate.

    Noreena cracked one eye open to see a hand holding a small chunk of Collision Fudge over her nose. It was even triple-chocolate, her favorite flavor. A smile spread across her face. She quickly recognized her guest—Karan S’jet, her teacher and friend—holding the fudge.

    “It’s a wonder my poor abused nose even caught that,” she remarked with a weak chuckle.

    “Two minutes, straight from a deep sleep,” Karan replied. “I doubt your nose is as poor as you think.”

    Her visitor pressed the chunk into her left hand, wrapping her fingers around the chocolate. Noreena blinked fuzzily for a moment as she woke more fully. Then a thought occurred to her.

    “How’d you get in?” she asked.

    “Command-level override on the door lock,” the S’jet-Sa replied. “You’ve been asleep for two days.”

    Whaaaa? I just fell asleep!

    “Ugh. Two days straight? Why didn’t you…?”

    “After your living two months in a tank that makes Makaan’s look like a luxury item, ChiefMed decided you needed to stay asleep. He put an entry restriction on your doorway to make sure nobody woke you up ahead of time.”

    “Then he got worried?”

    “About two hours past his deadline, yes,” the S’jet-Sa replied with a laugh. “You try reading a mind that’s dead to the world and telling ChiefMed she’s alive and well while he’s standing two inches away, hanging on your every word.”

    Noreena burst into laughter at that mental image. Then she sobered, wondering when she’d last laughed.

    “I’ll bug him for the trouble he gave you, M’Lady,” she replied with a bit of her old mischeviousness.

    “Thank you,” Karan replied. “He’s back in Sickbay so you’ll have to hunt him down. How you feeling?”

    Noreena pulled herself into a sitting position, wincing as her back protested the sudden movement. She then moved her arms about experimentally; to her surprise she didn’t feel as much pain as she had when she’d fallen asleep. She could actually get up, put her uniform on, and take a walk.

    “Better than last time, that’s for sure,” she said. “And not pissy, for a change.”

    “Good,” Karan smiled. “Now eat up. You haven’t had anything in two days.”

    She motioned to the chunk of fudge in Noreena’s hand. The young woman quickly gobbled it up, smiling gleefully as rich flavors rolled across her toungue. Her stomach rumbled faintly, reminding her of a time when she didn’t have feeder lines jammed into it through her back.

    “Mm, been a while,” she said after she swallowed the last bits of it. “Now I remember why I used to like eating. I'm sure my stomach will tell me otherwise once this gets digested, though.”

    Karan chuckled.

    "I know, I know," she said with a crooked grin. "Liquids and bland foods first. I just don't give a crap where your situation is involved."

    "Thanks."

    “So, you feel up for the Collision?” she asked cautiously. “After a proper meal, of course. I talked the stir-fry place into getting something together for you. Something that does fit the post-extraction guidelines.”

    Noreena grinned with relief.

    “I don’t think I could sleep another wink,” she replied as she swung her legs off the bed. “Lemme get a sonic and changed first.”

    “No problem. I need to change as well. I came in as Lena.”

    She undid the front of her purple robe to reveal one of Lena Somtaaw's electrically-hued jumpsuits underneath. This one sported a blue so bright Noreena wondered why it didn't glow in the dim light.

    Noreena let out a short bark of a chuckle.

    “Hope nobody caught you using the command override as her.”

    Karan giggled and shook her head.

    "It's the middle of the day, Nor. Everyone's at their posts. Although I probably am getting sloppy now that you mention it. A civilian wouldn't even have authorization to wander around this deck."

    “When are you gonna tell Ifriit? He's still gone on you. I'm amazed he hasn't bothered asking me to track down Lena on the databanks.”

    “Not yet,” she replied, a shy smile flashing across her face. “It’d completely ruin the fun right now. And I’m waiting for what you just mentioned—for him to realize something is up.”

    “Yeah, he’s just too happy. No pressures, no dealing with Vaygr, no worrying about kissing up to…he does kiss up, you know.”

    “Of course,” Karan nodded. “Now go on. I’ll see you in a few.”

    Noreena stood slowly, taking care to balance herself so she didn’t fall back onto her bed. To her surprise, her legs felt much stronger than she’d expected. She also felt more energetic than when she'd fallen asleep. With a smile, she walked with reasonable ease to her locker and opened its door. A framed picture of a stunning orange and blue nebula shone back at her as she rummaged for her uniform. Upon finding it, she turned and strode into the bathroom, closing its door behind her.

    A long sonic shower and quick change into her uniform later, Noreena stepped out. Her mood now felt so much better. She felt as if she could dance the rest of the day off in the Collision.
    Lena Somtaaw stood in front of her, wearing a body-hugging jumpsuit of the most intense electric blue Noreena had ever seen. She tossed her long hair over one shoulder and winked at her friend.

    “Welcome back,” she said. “It’s great to see you feeling better after so long in that hellhole tank."

    Noreena grinned, relieved to find her other emotions surfacing as quickly as those hormone-balancers had faded from her bloodstream.

    “Tell me about it. So...shall we?” she asked.

    Bleeep.

    Sighing, Noreena pulled her hand-com off her nightstand and pressed the open line button.

    “Commander,” Ifriit Somtaaw-Sa’s voice boomed over the com’s speaker, “Your presence is requested at the Hangar Module. A diplomatic corvette’s just come in from Hiigara and our new guests would like to see you.”

    “I’ll be right over, sir.”

    “Sorry,” she said to Lena. “I’ll get to the Collision after this is taken care of. It’s probably some admiral or something from the Navy going on about the Crusades. Thank Sajuuk Makaan isn’t onboard right now. He'd kill the conversation just by being there.”

    Lena nodded understandingly; the Warlord’s tendency to ignore every Hiigaran except for the two Unbound, and Ifriit on rare occasions, had exasperated everyone. Nobody dared mentioned missing his presence - or if they did, they always made sure to keep their remarks to those within close earshot.

    It was enough to have a good-sized Vaygr fleet escorting the Sotmaaw’s First Fleet these days, should Ashoran return with the hijacked Sajuuk. Tensions had remained high despite that victory against the Qwaar-Jet cult leader’s fleet two months ago. Nobody except for Makaan seemed particularly eager to set aside their memories of the Vaygr War. Even so, the Warlord’s popularity was highest among his own people, not the Hiigarans whose trust he had yet to earn.

    Unfortunately, the Crusades Makaan sought to sway to his side continued with their attacks on Hiigaran outposts and border stations. These days, even the occasional Somtaaw base came under attack. Fortunately the Vaygr proved easier to repel with a decent-sized fleet than Ashoran’s had; only half of the bases attacked had actually fallen. However, it made for enough bad blood between Vaygr and Somtaaw wherever Noreena looked.

    “I don’t remember anyone with an ETA for today, though,” Karan remarked as she dropped Lena's mannerisms and Somtaaw accent for a few moments. “Admiral Soban’s due to fly over with the Progenitor Dreadnaught, and he’ll be bringing ChiefIntel. But that’s not for another week judging from their last transmission.”

    Noreena shrugged.

    “Probably someone jumping the gun or maybe another Intel operative with news, then.”

    Karan bobbed her head, then switched back to Lena mode.

    “If Ifriit’s going to be there, I’ll skip the meeting. Just say I’m indisposed or something.”

    Noreena grinned as she nodded.

    “Will do M’Lady—Lena.”

    Lena grinned back. She motioned for Noreena to lead the way out of her quarters.

    “So if any Hangar techs back away from you…?” she asked, her voice trailing off. Noreena chuckled.

    "Eh they know me too well to notice the difference."

    "Ha!"
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    swqeeeeeeee.

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    This reminds me so much of Legacies when it first started. XD

    Well, we all need a breather anyway after that last clash with Ashoran. Keep those chapters coming!

    (I trust the peace won't be as long as it was in Legacies I?)
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    Nope. Sure as hell won't.

    There'll be action, but not the kind you'll expect. And peace? When Makaan returns to the Kuun-Lan? I think not.

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    ooo i smell... war, violence, fudge abd wierd inter-species romance. dunno why, just do.

    anyway, good job as awlays DC, keep it up!

    peace!
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    Darn it all, I thought you were far enough ahead of me that i wouldn't catch up. I'll have to read slower from now on I guess.

    Anyway, i'm enjoying the read so far.

    G.

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    Saj, WHERE are you getting inter-species romance?

    Besides, it's not like the Vaygr and Hiigarans look any different. How can they be species then?

    Thanks for the remark Guelph. I'll probably post something tonight so people have something to munch on for thought.

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    More wonderful fan writing from DeepChrome. Seriously, this is quite possibly (except in some minor but understandable errors) the best fan fiction I have ever seen. I always thought highly of crobato but in some ways his writing comes off rather amateurish. Yours manages somehow to avoid that though he's had more experience at writing than you have.

    You have this natural knack for knowing how people think. It's not quite dialogue which is how people talk but you sort of get inside people's minds. It's a developing talent it seems to me but you've only just started writing. Keep at it and you could be top-notch IMHO.

    Really, your story has inspired me to write more.

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    Great start on part II, DC I am definatly looking forward to what is coming *muahaha* I will see you next time you pop on messanger. I have some questions for you.

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    Thanks Ishaar and JRL.

    Ishaar my writing style derives directly from my daydreams, where I like to get inside the heads of characters I come up with. To me, a character's mindset and thought proccesses need to be understood, or at least defined, if I'm going to write how they react to different situations. Our reactions stem from our thoughts, and how we view the world. I wouldn't ask any less of written characters. It makes them more real that way.

    I've been daydreaming for years, but this is the first real writing project besides scattered roleplaying with friends or on the occasional message board. I would be surprised if my roleplaying experience has helped--because I had to get inside my characters' heads. *shrug*

    I hope that explains some of where that writing style comes from.

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    Heh... actually DeepChrome, that's what I often do too. Whenever I'm working on a story I usually play it out in my head before writing it.

    So I guess we have something in common .

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    Yup.

    Uh. Yes.

    CHAPTERS??!!

    *stands there, tapping foot*

    Uh, yeah. Cuse me. *Vaygr 2x4 to something...BAM. BAM. BAM.*

    Ok. Chapters.

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    Chapter 3

    Noreena strode across the Hangar Module floor with only minor twinges to remind her she’d left her tank three days ago. Techs scurried about the ACVs and Guardians racked along the walls while maintenance bots buzzed about a trio of Workers that had just finished a resourcing run.

    As Noreena expected, everyone gave her a wide berth the moment she came within sight. She briefly wondered how much like her old Hangar-terrorizing self she had been those two months.

    She glanced at the pair of burly Somtaaw Marines trailing two paces behind her out of the corner of her eyes, and sighed. They’d arrived at the elevator when the doors had opened, and fallen into step behind her once she’d started walking. Noreena had thought they were waiting for the Somtaaw-Sa. Finding they were her bodyguards hadn't eased her confusion; it was worse when she tried to compare her rank and those that required Marines as bodyguards.

    Since when did I qualify for bodyguards? I’m not exactly high ranked outside the tank. Tydaar’s probably getting paranoid. Or maybe my lousy moods got me more enemies than he's been letting on.

    She finally spotted the small Pulsar Gunship sitting on the floor several landing slots away. A Beastslayer logo gleamed on its hull, proclaiming its affiliation for all and sundry. The Somtaaw-Sa and his retinue of aides and bodyguards stood in front of its landing ramp. Noreena picked up her pace; the newcomers would arrive at any moment.

    She arrived just in time to see Tessar Somtaaw stride down the ramp with his wife by his side.

    “Hey Dad!” she called out, a grin spreading across her face. His grew a matching smile as he walked over to her.

    Ifriit moved aside to let his Ambassador greet his daughter; business could wait a little longer. The two hugged briefly, then stepped back.

    “Well, it’s good to have you back. You were quite the cranky wench when I called you last week,” Tessar said with a laugh. “I had the feeling nobody could tell you or Makaan apart for a while there.”

    Noreena nodded sheepishly, warmth rising to her cheeks.

    “Sorry about the crankiness. Stupid drugs, and noseplugs from hell, like I said. I’m feeling much better now, though. Very much better.”

    “I know, I know, but still,” Tessar laughed. “I heard about that Marine Frig incident. Nice job, popping that in the middle of your PMS-ing. You’re getting as good as Lady S’jet now.”

    "It was nothing, Dad. Really. I was just doing my job."

    Noreena shot a glance at her mother, who hadn’t left the Kuun-Lan on good terms last time. Ilania Somtaaw merely smiled, her blue eyes twinkling with pride and merriment. Clearly Noreena’s role as an Unbound had settled in with her.

    Well, finally.

    “I’m very proud of you, dear,” she said, stepping forwards to hug her daughter.

    Noreena blinked in shock as she wrapped her arms around her. A flash of glee, anticipation, and smugness had rippled outwards from Ilania, surprising Noreena when she realized they weren’t her own emotions.

    Whoa. Did I just get a telepathic read on Mom?

    “Wait, I thought…?”

    “Oh, I was so wrong then,” Ilania replied with an unnervingly cheerful grin. “I wasn’t acting in your best interest with the arranged marriage. Besides, he was a complete wimp! He would’ve done far better with Talia! I just didn’t see it before. But now with your role in this war…well let’s just say I overlooked the obvious.”

    Noreena chuckled dazedly. Leave it to her mother to change her mind when nothing else would. Then a disturbing thought struck her—what would Ilania do about her nonexistent love life now? Those emotions she’d picked up from her did not bode well for the future!

    “Thanks, Mother,” she replied with a smile, struggling to hide her dread.

    “Oh I can’t wait for us to have a family dinner again,” Ilania blurted out. “After business of course.”

    “Thank you, Madam,” Ifriit replied with relief. He eyed Tessar in a silent request for some time alone. The Ambassador nodded and moved towards his kiith-Sa.

    “Illie hon, why don’t you get us set up in our quarters? I’ll catch up with you and Nor later,” he said with a smile. Then he and Ifriit strode away together. They took the elevator with both their retinues, the doors swooshing shut behind them. Noreena glanced to her mother, who let out a happy sigh.

    “I’ll walk you to your quarters?” she suggested. “You’re probably tired from the ride over.”

    At a motion from Noreena, her two Marines moved to pick up the pile of suitcases the corvette’s crew had deposited at the ramp’s bottom.

    “That’d be wonderful,” Ilania replied. “Do please lead the way. Oh, I brought some of those cookies you always liked. After hearing about the Tank from Hell, I figured you could use something from home.”

    “Chocolate krenza-nut?” Noreena asked hopefully. She hadn’t eaten her mother’s home-baked food in years.

    “The very same recipe,” Ilania purred. “I have the dough fresh-packed and ready to bake.”

    Once again, Noreena wondered why her mother was so happy. She didn’t give up grudges that easily!

    Aiii, Koshiir Ra. Something’s up. I just know it.


    Chapter 4

    “So,” Noreena said as she plopped into the sofa in her parents’ quarters. “What brings you guys up here?”

    Ilania set a large duffel bag on the dining room table. She and her daughter had finished unpacking several minutes ago. All that remained was that bag on the table.

    “What’s in there?” Noreena asked. “You usually travel light, don’t you?”

    “Yes, dear, but this is a little different,” she said with a smile. “I got this from an artifact hunter in Haven City a few days back. He was offering it, and various other items, to the highest bidders to fund a trip to the Karos Graveyard. He told me he got it inside an ice crystal from the Mortann Passage.”

    Noreena’s eyebrows shot up. The Passage was considered the most dangerous area in Somtaaw space.

    It was an area of shared atmosphere between two gas giants that orbited a central grav-point so closely they swapped gases like a pair of celestial lovers making out. The planets were even named after a pair of ill-fated minor Kushan gods who had fallen in love, and became mortal together to escape their parents' wrath.

    The coldness of space between the two planets condensed and then froze most of the shared gases into a sprawling sea of sharp ice crystals floating amid dangerously thick gas clouds. The larger of the two planets was known as Mortann, the smaller Rethyn. The shared atmospheric area had the highest amount of ice crystals, explosive gases, and resource crystals in the known galaxy. No ship larger than a corvette could get through the area without taking considerable damage from collisions with the ice shards floating about. Sajuuk help the crew if their ship bumped into one of the pink resource crystals; half the Passage would go up in the biggest fireworks show in the galaxy if they did.

    “Sounds like a tall tale,” she remarked, recalling the one time the First Fleet had gotten low enough in resources to require a jump to the Mortann Passage’s outer edges.

    Workers had broken all prior records refilling the Kuun-Lan’s RU stores that day, leaving everyone stunned at the sheer amount of resources collected at the shift’s end. Of course, every Worker had needed repairs for one ding or another from the sharp ice crystals that littered the area like glass from shattered bottles.

    Ilania shook her head as she unzipped the bag and pulled out a large object wrapped in soft cloth.

    “It isn’t. I had this examined by one of our top archaeologists to be sure. He swears by Koshiir Ra’s Scripture that it’s Progenitor. Like that hull fragment that Hiigaran survey team dug out of its fringes three years ago.”

    Noreena’s eyebrows rose higher. She remembered the buzz that discovery had generated in Somtaaw. To the archaeologists' exasperation, the Somtaaw-Sa had turned down every proposal to send a bigger survey team because the Passage was too dangerous for a possible Progenitor discovery to override.

    “Progenitor? You gotta be kidding. Mortann’s so bad it makes the Hethlim Ice Fields look like a training exercise. Not even our upgraded MBFs’ crews want to venture into the inner field. How in Sajuuk's name did your guy get out in one piece?”

    “He flies a heavily modified ACV, and was a commando fighter pilot during the Vaygr War. If anybody could get in and out of there alive, it’s him. I’ve checked his records quite thoroughly.”

    Ilania began unwrapping the cloth around her prize. Moments later she lifted it out of its covering.

    It was a good-sized statue carved of black marble. Streaks of pale white and blood red shot through the onyx-colored stone, reminding Noreena of Makaan’s Warlord uniform. It had a smoothly polished surface, and stunningly realistic features.

    It also strikingly resembled Noreena, up to and including the mane of wavy hair she used to have before her transformation into the Kuun-Lan's neural controller. Flowing robes and body armor hugged the woman’s curved body, suggesting she was a warlord of some sort—or someone’s idea of a shieldmaiden. Its circular stand bore a line of angular script that Noreena recognized as Progenitor writing.

    She arched one eyebrow.

    “I can see why you bought it,” she remarked. “Any idea what the letters say?”

    Ilania shook her head.

    “Nobody in Haven City is particularly proficient with Progenitor writing. I've checked. I came here with your father because I was hoping Lady S’jet could translate them.”

    “Well then, I’ll call her, and see what she thinks.”

    “I already did,” Ilania said, “on the ride over here. She’s quite interested.”

    “Oh,” Noreena said, putting her hand-com back onto her belt with more than a few surprised blinks. “Well, that’s good. When’s she coming?”

    The door buzzer went off. Ilania smiled knowingly. Chuckling to herself, Noreena turned to answer it. The doors opened to reveal Karan S’jet in her purple attire again.

    I wonder why she didn’t tell me about all this before going off as Lena? Maybe she knew Mother would tell me. Whatever. Not that big a deal.

    “Hello, Commander,” Karan said with a friendly smile as Noreena motioned her to come in. “Madam Ilania.”

    “M’Lady,” Ilania bowed respectfully, then motioned to the statue. “Here it is.”

    Karan moved towards it, eyeing it with interest. She picked up the statue and examined it closely, her gaze taking in every detail. She eyed Noreena with curiosity.

    “Looks just like you, Noreena,” she remarked, one corner of her mouth curving up in a lopsided smile. Noreena nodded, then shrugged.

    “Coincidence,” she said. “Pretty cool though.”

    “Indeed,” Karan said, holding the statue’s stand closer to her eyes. She perused the letters, turning the stand around several times to read the entire line of script.

    Several moments passed as Karan continued to eye the script, a baffled expression flickering across her face. Finally, she set the statue down with a sigh.

    “That proves a theory going around right now—that the Progenitors’ language is made up of dialects. The Sajuuk’s form of Progenitor doesn’t match this. I’m inclined to think it relates to one of the other gods, or a different faction from whoever built the Sajuuk. I’m sorry, but I have no idea what it means.”

    Ilania and Noreena both raised their eyebrows in surprise.

    “So…who do I ask to translate it then?” Ilania asked, shaking her head in puzzlement.

    “Progie’s got a translation program,” Noreena remarked, “but if it’s based off anything in the Sajuuk’s databanks, it won’t handle this. Besides, he's not enough of a linguist to help patch any holes in the translation anyways."

    Bleeep.

    Karan pulled a hand-com out of her jacket pocket, and opened its line.

    “Yes?”

    “M’Lady Admiral Soban’s on the line,” Alisair Somtaaw’s voice spoke. “He’s requesting to speak with you.”

    “I’ll be right there, Captain. Thank you.”

    Karan turned the device off and tucked it into her jacket.

    “I’m sorry to leave so quickly like this, but Fleet matters do take precedence. I wish I could be of better help. You could ask Lord Makaan, though. His flagship hypered in a few hours ago. I’m sure he’d be interested since Mortann might yield other Progenitor technology that could help us fight Ashoran."

    At Noreena's surprised expression, she quickly added, "I know the Somtaaw-Sa turned down every expedition. However, war has a way of making one forgo peacetime dangers.”

    Ilania perked up so much that Noreena blinked at her in surprise.

    “Why thank you M’Lady. I’ll contact him immediately.”

    “Let me know how it goes,” Karan replied with a smile, then strode out of the door.

    Noreena turned to her mother, who eyed her pointedly; surely Noreena knew how to contact the Warlord. She sighed, and pulled out her hand-com. She then dialed for the Flag Deck.

    “Commander?” Alisair’s voice came back.

    “Can your comms people get a message off to Makaan’s Flagship, and tag it as for him alone?”

    A wary silence followed Noreena’s question.

    “I think so,” the Captain replied uneasily. “What’s the message?”

    “Progenitor relic with unknown script found. S’jet is unable to translate. Contact Noreena for a meeting.”

    “I didn’t hear anything about this.” Alisair's tone was indigant.

    “Ambassador Tessar's wife made a surprise find on her own time, Captain,” Noreena sighed irritably. “Please, just send the message.”

    “Yes, Commander,” Alisair replied in a slight huff, then cut the com line.

    “So how long do you suppose that’ll take?” Ilania asked as she bustled to the kitchen.

    She pulled out a container, and an empty bowl. She dumped the container's contents into the bowl—a large moist lump of chocolate krenza-nut cookie dough—and turned back to Noreena for an answer.

    “No telling,” she replied with a shrug as Ilania rummaged for a tray and a spoon.

    “I’d think he’d be interested," Ilania replied, "especially since Lady S’jet can’t translate it. It’d be good for his ego. The alliance can’t be too kind to it.”

    Noreena chuckled; she watched as Ilania stirred the dough, then placed regularly spaced blobs of it on the tray.

    “No, hasn’t been good for kiith-Sa either. He keeps giving Makaan the evil eye whenever he isn’t looking. He probably worries that when we get the Sajuuk back, he’ll run off with it.”

    “And the silver?” Ilania snickered. She opened the quarters’ oven and slid the loaded tray into it.

    “Like Vaygr have an interest in that,” Noreena remarked with a wry grin. “But your kitchen knives would disappear. Long as it’s sharp and pointy, they like it. All our weapon shops down in the Morale Sector are getting a lot more traffic. Not that they buy anything…but at least they’re getting ideas from us, and we’re getting ideas from them.”

    “I hear the alliance isn’t on strong footing, though.”

    “The Vaygr War was five years ago, Mom. Nobody forgets things that fast or easily. Hell, I still remember the time I nearly got captured. Did I ever tell you how Vaygr I had to act to get ‘em to think I was one of their operatives?”

    Ilania shook her head with a chuckle.

    “You’ll have to tell me sometime.”

    “I will,” Noreena promised. “But not tonight. I just want a break from anything War-related for a while.”

    “That’s all right, dear.”

    The smell of baking cookies filled the room. Noreena smiled, remembering her parents’ home on Haven, and the happier times of those days. Her recollections of the War faded like fog on a warm Havenii day.

    Bleeep.

    “You've got incoming, Commander,” Alisair blurted out the second Noreena opened her com-link. “His shuttle burned over here so fast traffic control didn’t see it till it was a kilom away from the Hangar. He didn’t even ask where you were. Just took off for the living quarters.”

    “Probably tracking me down telepathically,” Noreena remarked with a snort. “Thanks for the heads up, Captain.”

    “Anytime,” Alisair said, then cut the line.

    Ilania brightened.

    “Wonderful,” she said, excitement in her voice. “I’d better put on some coffee. Oh my.”

    Noreena blinked at her in befuddlement. What was going on with her mother?! She eyed the quarters’ doorway uneasily, wondering how this meeting would go. Ilania had proven herself as stubborn as the Warlord; Noreena feared a violent disagreement breaking out over the slightest thing.

    The oven dinged. Deciding to distract herself by passing the time, Noreena quickly stood and snatched up an oven mitt. She pulled the cookies out and transferred them onto a plate Ilania had already put on the counter.

    “Thank you, dear,” Ilania said as she activated the coffeemaker. Within seconds, the rich aroma of coffee flooded the room, adding to the smell of fresh-baked cookies. Once again, memories of her parents’ home on Haven flooded Noreena’s memories. Then she remembered her worries.

    Ugh, Makaan versus Mom? I just hope the statue isn’t a fake. He'd go ballistic.

    The door buzzer went off. Noreena swallowed nervously, and headed towards the door. To her surprise and irritation, Ilania beat her to it, neatly inserting herself between her daughter and the doorway as it opened.

    Makaan stood outside, towering over both women. He looked exactly as Noreena had seen him last time; he didn’t deviate in the slightest with his meticulous grooming. He eyed Ilania suspiciously, then recognized Noreena.

    “Where is it?” he asked in that surprisingly elegant voice, his blue gaze boring into her skull.
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    lol, something about how Nor's mom is acting tells me she heard some rumor that I heard in the darker parts of the Collision last night. That or dad drugged her.

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    Hmm... methinks that something is wrong here... Illiana is not acting normal, even for someone who would accept her daughter's decision. And Makaan seems a bit edgy...

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    she's acting like a kid that just KNOWS where his perants hid the christmas pressents, and cant wait out to check what he got.

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    Another Progenitor mystery... what will it lead to?

    If it's a ship, I hope Ashoran doesn't hack in and STEAL it when they get it.

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    Atma...YOU HAVE NO IDEA! Trust me, it's a lot less predictable than that.

    As for Nor's mom....well, maybe I'd better post the next 2 chapters to resolve all your burning questions. :flamer:

    *****

    Chapter 5

    Noreena motioned Makaan inside, pointing to the statue sitting atop the table. It stood serenely, beckoning people to examine it more closely. The Warlord strode to it, and picked it up with one hand.

    He arched one eyebrow as he read the scrlpt on the stand.

    “It’s certainly Progenitor,” he remarked. “I’ve seen a similar statue before, in a wreck I recovered from a debris field in the Reaches over a decade ago. It wasn’t of her, however. Interesting. It also wasn't this well-preserved, either.”

    “And the writing?” Ilania boldly asked, stepping two paces towards him. Noreena remained at the door, eyeing the Warlord and her mother as if they were contestants in a sporting match.

    “Hmm,” he mused, eyeing the stand more closely. He turned the statue around several times as he read the lettering again to be sure. A slight smile crossed his regal features.

    “Of course Lady S’jet couldn’t translate this,” he remarked in a surprisingly upbeat tone. “She is the Sajuuk-Khar. This is a statue of the Qwaar-Jet Khar.”

    Whoa. Hello. QWAAR-JET KHAR?! Ya mean to say there’s another supership out there? And since Qwaar-Jet is the god of pain and retribution…

    “He will most certainly overpower the Sajuuk,” the Warlord replied to her thoughts with a smirk that surprised Noreena with an undefinable quality that she grudgingly settled on labeling as oddly attractive, “Or rather, she?”

    He held up the statue.

    “It has a most unusual resemblance to you, Noreena,” he remarked. “If I didn’t know better, I’d have thought your mother had taken the stand from something else, and commissioned a statue of you built onto it.”

    He eyed Ilania intensely, his gaze becoming bluer by the second. Then he blinked in complete, utter shock. Arching both eyebrows, he set the statue down slowly.

    “What?” Noreena asked, realizing he’d read Ilania’s mind. “She did?

    “No, I didn’t,” Ilania replied breezily. “I bought it because it looked like you. Then the seller told me where he had found it.”

    The Warlord continued to stare in bewildered amazement, blinking periodically as if struggling to make sense of something. Ilania smirked knowingly while Noreena stared at Makaan in confusion.

    The coffeemaker dinged in the awkward silence.

    “Uhmm, cookies? Coffee?” Ilania asked sweetly. She held out the plate of cookies to the Warlord in a bid to distract him from whatever he’d discovered.

    Makaan blinked again, then shook his head as if in a daze. He swiveled his head and locked his eyes onto Noreena. Then he returned his gaze to Ilania. A grin spread across his face, slowly transforming his severe features into the merriest expression Noreena had seen in a long time.

    Then he burst into hysterical laughter. Its sound unnerved Noreena considerably; she had no idea what the Warlord considered funny and suspected it was probably at some poor soul’s expense. Then she realized he was laughing at whatever he’d found in her mother’s mind.

    Oh dear Sajuuk. MOTHER WHAT HAVE YOU BEEN DOING?!

    “I hope that was a good response,” Ilania purred confidently, “to my…idea?”

    The Warlord paused in mid-laugh to stare at Noreena’s mother for a second. Then he burst into a second round of raucous laughter. Now Noreena had enough. She rounded on Ilania, glaring angrily at her.

    “Mother, spit it out,” she snapped. “I should’ve known something was up the minute you dropped your grudge with me. What is it?!”

    “I knew Lady S’jet couldn’t translate the script before I called. I simply had to get the motions out of the way. You see,” she said taking a step towards her. “I wasn’t thinking of the right kind of man for you, Nor. The one I found on Hiigara for you was a complete wuss. Horribly wrong for you! I didn’t see it until you defeated Ashoran. Noreena, you need a real man. Someone who’s as dedicated to his people as you are yours. A warrior. A leader—like you’re becoming. And who’s also been Unbound and using Far Jumpers, like you are.”

    Then the realization of what had made Makaan laugh so hard hit Noreena. Her jaw dropped in shock.

    “What?” she spluttered in dismay. “Mother, you can’t be serious.”

    “The statue was just bait,” Ilania said with a chuckle. “Although if it kicks out something interesting in Mortann, all the better.”

    “Me…and Makaan?” Noreena squeaked out, still trying to wrap her mind around the craziest idea to cross her mind in a very long time.

    The notion finally proved too ridiculous to handle. She found herself chuckling. It was the kind of reaction that most people had learned meant trouble when it came from her. The chuckle slowly grew into a hysterical laugh that mixed exasperation, disgust, and humor until she couldn’t tell any of the three emotions apart.

    “Mother,” she gasped out, “you’re crazier than Rey on triple-pazaar!"

    Then she burst into laughter again, collapsing into the armchair behind her. She tried to imagine herself kissing the Warlord, and doubled over as she laughed even harder. His considerable height on her would’ve made her crane her neck and stand on tiptoe to meet his lips—not the most romantic image someone could think of. All he could do without bending over was put his chin on her head!

    The sound of someone else laughing pulled her attention to Makaan. The Warlord had finally reached the end of his hysterics, only to laugh anew at Noreena’s reaction. His amused expression added to the sheer absurdity of the moment; now she couldn’t stop laughing even as he calmed himself again.

    “Are you,” he asked with a comical smile that somehow seemed completely unsuited to his face and yet perfectly at home where it was, “all right?”

    She chortled as she shook her head.

    “I don’t think so,” she replied, then burst into laughter again.

    “I’m serious!” Ilania snapped, stepping between the two. The pair’s hysterical reaction had not been the one she’d expected.

    “You both have so much in common!" she exclaimed. "And it’d be the best thing for the alliance. A Vaygr-Hiigaran couple. They can’t bring up war memories if it’s you two—because you’ll have gotten past yours.”

    “Us two?” Noreena sputtered out. “Mother, that’s like having S’jet date the old Taiidan Emperor! Ugh, that’s even more gross. Forget I said that.”

    Makaan wrinkled his nose in distaste at that mental image, then nodded choppily.

    “Indeed,” he muttered as if he’d gotten a bad taste in his mouth.

    “You even agreed about my idea,” Ilania persisted. “That means you’ve got to have something in common.”

    “The only thing we have in common,” Noreena retorted, finally reaching the end of her rope, “is that we’re agreed on you being certifiable. Sa-juuuuk! I need a stiff drink.”

    She stood and strode to the door; enough was enough. The Collision called to her with its fudge and Courage. Someone would have to deal with Ilania and her statue later. Makaan tapped his earpiece, listening intently to it for a moment. He nodded, and said something to it in his language.

    “I must go,” he said, scooping up the statue with one hand. “I will investigate this further.”

    Then he swept out of the door as quickly as his long stride could take him without running. Noreena quickly scurried out after him. She didn’t dare cast a glance back at her mother. As soon as the doors closed behind her, she rushed to keep up with the Warlord. The way Makaan had agreed with her about Ilania's crazy scheme demanded she at least talk to him a little before he left.

    That's the first time either of us have completely agreed about ANYTHING...

    “I apologize for my mother,” she said uneasily. “I had no idea she was gonna spring that on us. Where the hell did she get that idea?!”

    “The same place,” Makaan remarked with a grimace, “that my mother found the notion that I should be a hydroponics farmer.”

    Noreena blinked, then stared at him.

    “You, a farmer?!” she spluttered, verging on another wave of laughter. The very notion of Makaan tending to a hydroponics lab instead of ordering Vaygr about was almost as hilarious as the two of them being an item.

    He nodded grimly, then wheeled on her. He laid one hand on the massive Vaygr sword at his hip.

    “I would prefer that one kept a secret. Is that clear?" he hissed.

    Noreena nodded eagerly.

    “We pretend Mother’s idea didn’t even cross our minds, and it’s a deal.”

    “Excellent,” Makaan replied with relief, then strode into the elevator. The doors swished shut behind him, effectively ending their conversation.

    Noreena slumped against the wall, running a hand over the array of neural slots on her head. She wished it was hair; a bald head just didn’t feel the same in her current mood.


    Chapter 6

    “Another please, Saar,” Noreena said, holding out her empty Courage bottle to Barkeep. He nodded and switched it for a full one. Behind her, the pair of Marines guarding her stood two meters away—just enough distance for them to not overhear her conversations with anyone.

    Good. Privacy. At least Tydaar’s trained ‘em on that.

    “Unbelievable,” Lena remarked at her side, shaking her head in amazement. “And to think she was serious about it.”

    Noreena nodded glumly, then took two more swigs of her Courage. She let out a long, exasperated sigh.

    “I pray to Sajuuk, Qwaar-Jet, and Koshiir Ra that she never utters a word of this to anyone else.”

    Lena patted her shoulder comfortingly. Noreena slumped over the bar, then blinked. Where was that buzz she’d come down to get? In fact, after one bottle, and half of another of Courage, she should be quite tipsy by now.

    “Dammit,” she said in dismay. “I should be drunk by now.”

    “Core time,” Lena remarked knowingly.

    Noreena rolled her eyes with a groan. This was not the time to find that out!

    A male body in an IS HQ uniform hopped onto the stool next to Noreena, waving to Barkeep for a drink. Noreena recognized him as Jerel only when he had come to a complete halt.

    “You should try some Vaygr whiskey,” he said with a wicked grin. “Father was the only one who could drink a whole bottle and not get wasted. Mother did too, but she lost interest in booze after I was born.”

    “I’d have to pack in a lot more Core time before challenging him, then,” Noreena muttered.

    “I wouldn’t try it if I were you,” Jerel warned. “He has a thing for any woman who can pack away booze like he can. Mother ended up pregnant with me the night after she beat him at aal-shar. That's the uh, traditional twelve-bottle drinking game. They did it the night after becuase they wanted to do it sober.”

    Lena snickered as Noreena’s expression darkened with the memory of her mother’s craziness.

    Jerel blinked at his friend's sudden shift in mood. He eyed her quizzically.

    “Mother,” Noreena wearily explained. “Invited him for coffee, cookies, and a Progenitor statue. Then left a good clear thought in her head that he should carry me to his bedroom and give her some grandkids. You should’ve seen the look on his face.”

    The young Vaygr’s eyebrows shot clear up his forehead.

    Your mother tried to match you with my father?!

    Noreena nodded.

    "Yup."

    A second round of raucous laughter slammed into Noreena's years for a good few seconds before Jerel regained control of himself. He shook his head in amazement as his chuckling died down.

    “That’s…wow. That’s..that's...sorry, I don't have good words for that one,” Jerel muttered, shaking his head in amazement. “That's worse than when she ordered you to become a nun when she found out about the old Morale Sector."

    “Yup,” Noreena repeated grimly, then downed more of her drink. Jerel had found that story out by happening upon her bunkroom when she’d taken her mother’s call on her hand-com. His confused reaction had forced Noreena to give him the full blow-by-blow explanation, until he finally agreed that her mother was indeed insane.

    “What you need is a diversion,” Lena said briskly. “How about we pay Talia a visit?”

    “Sounds good. She still freaked out by passing Vaygr?”

    “Yup. Still hiding.”

    “I’m the only one of ‘em she’ll talk to,” Jerel remarked gloomily. “I’ve never seen anyone so flat-out scared of…of us, you know?”

    “Does she know about his being…?”

    “Don’t think so, Nor,” Lena explained. “That announcement went to all crew-run areas, not the Morale Sector. Besides, she’s deathly afraid of Makaan, so I didn’t breathe a word.”

    Noreena sighed, then planted her face in one hand. During the boarding fight, a stray Vaygr plasma shot had blown up half of Talia’s stand. A corridor-commando had been firing at a group of passing Ashoran cultists, screaming "Hail Makaan" at the top of his lungs as a battle cry. One of those shots had dealt the damage. The girl hadn’t been very far away when it happened; she now feared even the sight of a black and white Vaygr uniform. The Warlord, and all the stories and mystique swirling around him and his “return from the dead,” as the Somtaaw put it, had made him even more fearsome to the shy painter as well.

    “Sajuuk help the kid if Makaan decides to take a tour down here,” Lena muttered unhappily. “I’ve tried to suggest that he isn’t that bad, but it’s like talking to a wall. A terrified wall.”

    Both ways, even, Nor. Not even the illustrious S’jet-Sa got through. Not even after that painting of me with Kharak.

    Noreena winced. If Karan couldn’t convince Talia as herself or as Lena, the girl was really upset.

    She nodded, then finished off her bottle. She set it on the bar with some coins for Barkeep. Lena did the same, and the trio strode out of the Collision. The two Marines and Jerel’s lone bodyguard shadowed them with expert calm.

    Moments later, they arrived at Talia’s stand. She had already replaced the burnt portion of its white fabric roof with fresh canvas, and three new paintings adorned the foamboard walls. Several other new works of art gleamed from other parts of the kiosk.

    She’s been busy. Good. Should’ve checked on her more, but you try doing that when those noseplugs and Qwaardamn drugs make you too psycho to remember who your friends are. I still owe apologies to a coupla people. Should get to some of ‘em tonight if I can.

    Talia was nowhere to be found. Noreena blinked, then shot a quick glance at the half-open flap leading to the kiosk’s back room, where Talia kept her works-in-progress. The painter usually hid there whenever someone intimidating came to her stall. Ifriit had spent many a visit coaxing her out of there in the past.

    “Where is she…? I don’t see her in the back room,” she remarked. Lena pointed down at the table.

    Damn. Better hiding place, that’s for sure.

    “Hi, Nor,” a faint, nervous voice spoke up from under the table. Talia’s hand lifted a section of cloth away and waved from under the table.

    “Hey,Talia,” Noreena called out. “I finally got out of that damn tank. Felt like stopping by. You feel like coming out?”

    “Not really,” she answered weakly. “There’s a Vaygr at Risco’s stand. I’ll wait till she goes.”

    Lena motioned with her head towards a stand across the pathway from Talia’s. Underneath a large sign reading “Risco’s Woven Goods,” the stand brimmed with garments in every hue of the rainbow. Sure enough, a black, red, and white uniform stood out against the sea of brilliant colors. A female Vaygr officer, her long black hair tied in a severe ponytail, conversed with Risco himself. The merchant seemed nonplussed by having such an unusual customer; he relished living on the wild side. His choosing to work onboard the Kuun-Lan while a war raged around the Somtaaw certainly proved that.

    Then a quick glance showed a pair of wary Acolyte pilots at Risco’s entrance, eying the Vaygr with considerable distaste. A passing Vaygr mechanic, his black and white coveralls even more raucous in appearance than the corridor-commandos’, shot the two Somtaaw a sneer for their glaring at the woman.

    Noreena sighed.

    This is getting out of hand. Why is everyone STILL giving each other snarky looks two months down? What’s it gonna take to break the ice around here?

    Then the female Vaygr left, waving to Risco while carrying a bright turquoise tunic she’d purchased. The two Somtaaw parted, giving her a wide yet hostile berth as she passed. She didn’t even notice the pair as she strode away from them. The mechanic, however, did, and flipped them a rude guesture. Both Somtaaw saw it, and stalked after him, violence on their minds.

    There it is again. Just like with Mother.

    Noreena moved quickly; she had to stop this before it got ugly. She fell into step between the tow Somtaaw. She swiftly tripped the man to her left. He fell to the floor in a stunned heap

    “Oops, sorry,” she said far too cheerfully. She bent to help the man up, while conveniently knocking the other off his feet with a cleverly disguised sweep-kick.

    “Damn. Sorry about that. I’m a total klutz outside the tank these days,” she exclaimed, helping the other man up. When they stood again, the Vaygr mechanic was gone, as was the officer.

    “What’d you do that for?!” the taller of the two men growled, his jaw jutting out in a stubborn fashion. The shorter one simply glared at Noreena. Only her reputation as the Kuun-Lan controller kept them from retaliating.

    “Your careers,” she replied sweetly. “Wouldn’t want you doing anything stupid—like pissing off your Far Jumping wirehead. Try to avoid doing that in the future if you can."

    She turned and walked back to Talia’s stand, shaking her head in disgust.

    “Nice,” Jerel said. “Too bad those Vaygr didn’t see it. They’d probably like you for sticking up for ‘em.”

    “Doubt it,” Noreena replied. “I’m just another Hiigaran to ‘em. We wouldn’t be doing this if Ash hadn’t stolen the Sajuuk.”

    Jerel nodded glumly.

    “Same for my case, I guess. Talia, you can come out now. She’s gone.”

    The painter stuck her head out from a slit in the tablecloth, peering about cautiously. Upon seeing no other Vaygr than Jerel, she crawled out. She stood and dusted herself off.

    “Thanks Jer,” she said with relief. He nodded.

    Bleeep.

    Noreena whipped her hand-com out.

    “Yeah?”

    “Are you in the Morale Sector, Commander?” Ifriit asked.

    “Yessir. I'm at Talia’s.”

    “Wonderful! Mind if I join you? I just got off my shift at the Flag Deck and I could use a break. I’m already on the elevator down there.”

    “Not at all, sir. Lena and Jerel are with me.”

    “Well, I’ll be right over.”

    Lena perked as Noreena shut off her hand-com and hooked it back onto her belt.

    “Haven’t seen him around here lately,” she remarked. “If anybody needs a break, it’s him.”

    Jerel nodded with a grin.

    “So you gonna tell him about your mother?” he asked his friend. Noreena blinked, then shook her head.

    “He knows Mother’s a lunatic when she puts her mind to it.”

    “You should, though,” he said. “Sajuuk help us if your mother decided to blab it all over the ship.”

    Noreena winced. Every Somtaaw and Vaygr would be simultaneously revulsed and fascinated by the idea of her and the Warlord being an item. The Hiigaran tabloids’ current stories would have nothing on the lurid rumors that would fly about the Kuun-Lan. Even though she usually ignored such seedy things as gossip, she disliked when it refused to return the favor.

    “All right, I’ll tell him. But later, not out here when people are gonna overhear.”

    Talia poked her head around the kiosk’s corner. She promptly ducked back and began tidying up the stand that held the smaller prints of her work. Moments later, Ifriit Somtaaw-Sa and his retinue of bodyguards strode into the kiosk. He flashed a romantic wink at Lena, who returned it, then turned to Talia.

    “Hello, Talia,” he said with a smile. The painter nodded, and smiled back.

    Well, there is one good thing about the Vaygr where Talia's concerned. She’s nowhere near scared of Ifriit anymore cuz he’s Hiigaran.

    “I see you’ve been rebuilding,” the Somtaaw-Sa remarked appreciatively. “Good work.”

    “Not much else to do when you’re a civvie and can’t even fly a Worker in a straight line, sir,” Talia replied, her old shyness flickering in her voice.

    “Jerel,” Ifriit nodded to the young officer. “I see you’re doing well.”

    “Long as the Vaygr don’t find out I left ‘em, I’m safe as a regular ol’ Somtaaw. Nobody’s heckled me in weeks, either. It’s good. Lets me get some work done for a change.”

    “Good,” Ifriit nodded, then sighed. “I’ve been wondering--will you talk to your father anytime soon? I doubt he even thinks you’re alive.”

    Jerel’s eyes flashed with a mix of anger and fear. He shook his head.

    “You know my feelings on that, sir. He didn’t want me around then. I don’t think he’d want me around now.”

    Talia blinked, then eyed the two.

    “Jer, what’s this about?” she asked curiously.

    Noreena did a spectacular double-take, then sighed.

    Not every day I see kiith-Sa flub it this good…

    Lena shot Ifriit an annoyed look as Noreena rubbed the temples of her nose. The Somtaaw-Sa’s shoulders sank as he then shot his girlfriend a “I couldn’t help it” glance.

    “Talia, it’s personal business,” Jerel replied gently. “You wouldn’t want to know.”

    “I heard your father was Vaygr, but that’s all I heard. But for kiith-Sa to bring it up like this? He was somebody major. The guy who killed Adar?”

    “By the Three Gods, no,” Jerel blurted out, shaking his head with relief. “That guy was a moron—even for a Vaygr. Father would’ve killed him outright if he found out about the execution.”

    Heh. Someone should slip Makaan a line about that. Having him publicly denounce the admiral who offed Adar would go a long way towards better relations. Especially with Ifriit since he took over from him as kiith-Sa.

    “Then who was it?” Talia inquired. “C’mon, long as he isn’t Makaan, I’ll be okay with it. I mean you are …um…Vaygr.”

    Ifriit winced visibly at that. Jerel sighed glumly. Noreena merely facepalmed at the reactions going around.

    “Wait,” Talia said, gulping nervously. “What…? No it can’t be.”

    Jerel nodded sadly. Talia’s eyes went wide with horror.

    “Makaan’s your father?!

    She sidled away from him, eyeing him fearfully.

    “I…I need to be alone for a bit,” she said softly, then scurried into the back room.

    Jerel closed his eyes, shaking his head as he did so.

    “I never asked to be his son,” he muttered bitterly. "He was branded as a lunatic even before I was born."

    Ifriit clapped a hand on the young man’s shoulder.

    “I know you didn’t, Lieutenant. Come, let’s take a walk. Forget about some things for a while, hmm?”

    Jerel nodded, a weak smile flashing across his face.

    “Lena, Noreena, you’re welcome as well,” the Somtaaw-Sa smiled. “We should probably give Talia some space here.”

    Both women nodded, and headed out.

    He’s the bastard’s SON?!

    Noreena blinked at that mental outburst. The male voice had burst out of nowhere. Then she spotted who she knew had to be its source—a Marine from the Third Fleet, who stood at the fabrics kiosk, eyeing Jerel with bitter hatred in his dark eyes.

    Whoa. Better warn Tydaar ‘bout him. That’s pretty bad if a low-grade telepath like myself can hear him.

    She then saw Ifriit and Lena moving away from her, and scurried to keep up. Jerel’s bodyguard kept pace with Ifriit’s retinue as if he had joined them. Noreena’s two Marines trailed behind her like a pair of ghosts.

    An uneasy feeling that made her think of a Seeing, pointed out to her that bodyguards weren’t always very useful. She tried to shake it off, only to find herself staring back at the Marine.

    Skip the note. Send an alert. Now.

    The thought came quietly, but held such an aura of command that she didn't dispute its sentiments.

    She whipped out her hand-com and began dictating a priority alert destined for Tydaar’s console to the comsystem computers.
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    This cannot be good. I got to say though, Jerel is in for some trouble.

    Once again, great, can't wait to see more. The pacing as usual is excellent, I don't feel bogged down or like things are going by too fast. Keep up the good work!

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    QwaarDAMN this server!

    It just ate my reply to you AND the next two chapters!

    GAAAAH!!!

    Let's try this AGAIN. If it borks up again, I'm just gonna try this tomorrow night or later tonight.

    *whaps at server with Vaygr 2x4* YOU WILL @#*%^*( COMPLY!!!

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    Chapter 7

    Ifriit sighed as they strode out of the kiosk. He carried a newly built paperweight-size model of the Kuun-Lan in one hand. A thoughtful expression had dominated his face for the last two kiosks, causing Noreena and Lena to eye him with concern. He didn’t get that look during his off-duty time unless he was pondering something important. Jerel, who’d been darkly recalling his strained relationship to Makaan, hadn’t seen it. Upon noticing Noreena’s worried look, he followed her gaze and finally noticed Ifriit’s expression. He eyed his superior warily; he also knew Ifriit’s tendency to worry about things even when he’d given himself permission not to for a while.

    “Noreena, I’ve been thinking,” the kiith-Sa said thoughtfully. “I’ve noticed the tensions with the alliance lately, and I keep wondering if there’s a way to break the ice.”

    “Been thinking the same, sir,” she remarked, having noticed another incident like the one near Risco’s moments ago. This time, an Vaygr Assault Frigate Captain had stopped a trio of Laser Corvette pilots from making snide remarks near a group of Worker pilots.

    “This tension can’t keep up,” Lena muttered. “It’s bad for morale, and it’s bad for the alliance.”

    “Indeed,” Ifriit sighed. “I’m thinking of giving Makaan a tour of the Morale Sector. Personally. With bodyguards from both sides. Once he’s been through, both sides should consider the crewmembers the lesser evil, and stop harassing each other as much. Besides, it’d show a mark of goodwill, as it were.”

    “You do know,” Lena remarked, “that he ignores you for the most part? Even now, after that battle?”

    “Oh yes. I’d need Lady S’jet’s help with the tour,” he said with a smile.

    “I can talk to her,” Noreena offered by way of protecting Karan’s disguise. “She might have ideas on keeping the peace.”

    “Please do,” Ifriit replied. “I think it’s our best shot at calming things down.”

    Jerel peered about unhappily.

    “You know, this was the one place where we didn’t have to worry about him popping up out of thin air,” he remarked wistfully. “Saeri’s told me how he seems to appear out of thin air and breathe down people’s necks at IS HQ. Even Pyalun’s looking frazzled.”

    “I know,” Ifriit said, “but by segregrating our two sides, even the commanders, breeds too much mistrust and doubt. Distrust is what got us into this mess—had we gotten a treaty together before Ashoran showed up, things wouldn’t have been like this."

    “Obviously,” Noreena remarked. “So how do you want to do this?”

    “A day’s warning for people to prepare, and armed guards for him, myself, Lady S’jet, and you. They’re there not just for our protection, but also to break up any fights or disagreements happening as they see fit. The sooner we give the message that harassment is not tolerated from either side, the better.”

    “Sounds good, sir.”

    “You don’t have to come, Jerel,” Ifriit pointed out at the young man’s expression, which had shifted from glum to downright unnerved. “I’d rather you approached your father on your own time. But you need to do it. This distance isn’t healthy.”

    “Take it from someone who knows family tension,” Noreena added, recalling her mother’s grudge at her having become Unbound. “You’ll end up talking to him sooner or later.”

    “Yeah well, not yet,” Jerel sighed bitterly. “It hurts just knowing he was alive all this time, and didn’t bother trying to find me. I’m probably better off hidden.”

    His chrono bleeped; he glanced down to it and nodded to himself.

    “Sorry to do this, but I have to go. My shift starts in ten minutes.”

    “Didn’t you just come down from a shift?” Lena asked suspiciously. Jerel shrugged.

    “It’s better than being down here when someone snaps and starts a Qwaardamn riot,” he said dismally. “Sir, Commander. I’ll see you both later.”

    He saluted, and moved off. Noreena rolled her eyes as Ifriit eyed the departing Lieutenant worriedly.

    “I’ve tried pulling rank on him to get him to sleep. No joy,” she explained. “He still takes enough shifts to make even wireheads look like lazy sods.”

    “I’ll talk to him,” Ifriit said firmly. “He’s going to run himself into the ground. And avoiding his father definitely won’t help.”

    “I think he’s afraid of him,” Lena said sadly. “Afraid of how he’ll react when he finds out his only son defected to the Hiigarans…during the War. Any father would be hurt, but this is Makaan we’re talking about. I don’t blame him, you know?”

    Noreena sighed gloomily as she nodded.

    Bleeep.

    “Hey, Nor,” Pyalun’s voice burst from her hand-com, “I thought you’d like to know we finished up your new tank over here. Some workers just hauled in two crystals, and I just had to take advantage of Manufacturing’s good mood.”

    “What, the new tank’s up already?”

    “Yup. You feel like reinserting tonight? You know, the old system. The luxury system. The noseplug-free system.”

    “Hmmm, a block of fudge or another month’s Core time…fudge can wait. I’ll be right over.”

    About TIME. I’m done with the Qwaardamn noseplugs for GOOD! Mother can’t hassle me if I’m busy handling ship duties, I can bug Jerel to go to sleep from his consoles, and I can keep an eye on the ENTIRE Morale Sector when Mak shows up. This’ll definitely work.


    Chapter 8

    “Lucky you,” Saeri remarked nervously. “At least you don’t have to worry about getting stared down for a stupid thought.”

    Noreena eyed her from the eye-level camera near Talia’s kiosk. The ex-wirehead wore her purple S’jeti ensemble as she roamed amongst the new paintings Talia had put up.

    “What, is everyone afraid of him already?” she asked, shaking her head in her tank.

    Ahhh, I can move my head. I can….oh, gleeeeee….

    It felt so good to be back in the system she remembered from her wirehead training. The last two months’ misery now faded to a dull haze in the back of her mind. Now she could enjoy her Unbound powers without her tortured nose grumbling about the plugs on a constant basis. The real luxury: no more Vaygr hormone-balancing drugs. Sickbay’s chemical manufacturing capablities had returned to full a week ago, and now cranked out enough hormonal stabilizers to suppress the sex drives of the entire Kuun-Lan population.

    Hiigaran hormone-balancers had a calming rather than irritating effect, and gave Noreena an extra buffer between her natural emotional reactions, and the dispassion her job required of her at times. Feeling calm rather than irritated had put her in the best mood she’d been in for a very long time.

    She reluctantly pulled her gleeful self back from her ruminations and focused on Saeri again.

    The woman had shrugged.

    “Hey the only time I was close to him was when he picked on you having the plugs in Sickbay. I avoid him like everybody else with sense does. And still he does it!”

    “I know, but stared down for a stupid thought?”

    “Nor, you know how he is. The minute you start thinking too loud around him, he just gives you the one-eyebrow-up stare. I’ve seen him do it to people at IS HQ. If you keep it up, he says something real pointed about it, and you don't get to live it down till after he leaves. Even Py didn’t get out of that.”

    Noreena sighed. Saeri was right. Makaan wasn't anywhere near the definition of "friendly." She’d known Security officers who were more approachable than the Warlord. Hell, even Tydaar was friendlier, even if he proved as blunt as Makaan at times.

    What made it worse was that exasperatingly attractive voice the Warlord had. He had a voice rich and elegant enough for writers to commite entire paragraphs of beautifully-written prose to describing it. To have such a voice attached to such a perpetually abrasive Vaygr supreme commander added an extra layer of disorientation to the experience of dealing with him.

    “Yeah well, if it helps, not everyone ends up under his nose. Mother one-upped him earlier.”

    “I heard from the Boss,” Saeri snickered. “Nobody else is hearing it from me. You poor thing, having her for your mother.”

    “Thanks, Sae. She usually has redeeming qualities, but I think she left 'em at the embassy this time around.”

    “Noreena?” Ifriit’s voice broke into her electronic awareness.

    Noreena jumped to the sensors in the Morale Sector’s main square. The Somtaaw-Sa stood just outside the elevator, straightening his uniform nervously. Tydaar stood next to him, barking orders to the Marines surrounding them.

    She responded via his earpiece, as she had during Karan’s tour.

    “Here, sir. The Sector’s calm enough right now. The Collision’s pretty sparse though.”

    “Everyone made themselves scarce,” Ifriit murmured. “I don’t blame them. Hopefully we've enough around for this to work.”

    She checked the elevators heading into the Sector. One carried Karan S’jet and her retinue of aides and bodyguards. Another lingered in the elevator shaft five decks above the Sector’s—a victim of the periodic breakdowns elevators had onboard a ship this old. Noreena remembered seeing it drop a full fifteen decks before slamming to a halt at its current location. She’d sent Maintenance an alert about it five minutes ago; to her disgust, they hadn’t responded yet.

    She peered into the elevator’s lone surveillance camera. Jerel sat crosslegged on the elevator’s floor as he dismantled the innards of the lower control console. His pained grimace, disheveled hair, and rumpled uniform all indicated the elevator had given him a bumpy ride before coming to its present stop.

    “Hey Jer,” she called out. “How you doing?”

    “Fine,” he muttered through gritted teeth. “This collection of scrap parts broke down on the way to IS HQ. Had a few lovely seconds of free-fall before it stopped completely.”

    “Want me to override and send it down to HQ?” she offered.

    “Nah. I got the problem, more or less. But I’m gonna have to manual the thing from here. Did you call Maintenance on this? They’ve been getting sloppy again. Even the deck-location indicator went out.”

    “Yup. No response. They’re probably still up to their eyeballs in database glitches, since they just got the secondary IS relays to the main memory banks back online again. And you’re five decks above the Morale Sector.”

    Jerel shot the gutted console before him an irritated look.

    “Crap. That's further than I thought it went.”

    “Well, it’s fifteen up from Sector to IS HQ. Want me to give you a lift?” she asked. He nodded.

    “Thanks for the offer,” he said, “but I’m just gonna wing it. It's not like I haven’t done it before.”

    Noreena chuckled, recalling the one time an elevator had broken down on her, Rizzie, Kozz, Rey, and Jerel on its way to the Morale Sector after a very long Worker run. Maintenance had been bogged down in a massive cleanup of a huge data systems crash at IS HQ, and had put elevator repairs pretty far down the priority list. Jerel had dismantled and hotwired both upper and lower control consoles in a bid to get the thing working before the others killed Rey for telling yet another horrifically bad joke. He’d ended up sending the elevator down twenty decks fast enough to send everyone flying into the ceiling. Then it had stopped with painful abruptness when he had finally touched the proper wires together. By the time he’d finally gotten its doors open, nobody wanted to talk to or even look at him for a week. Oddly, he'd been the only one who hadn't needed a trip to Sickbay.

    “True,” she said. “Just don’t get yourself beat up too much, okay?”

    “I know,” he said with a sigh as he carefully reinserted plugs into their proper sockets. “I’ll be careful.”

    “All right,” she said, turning her attention back to the Morale Sector.

    Things still looked calm, yet tense. Many Somtaaw had taken extra shifts to avoid being near Makaan when he arrived at the Sector. However, some brave souls had decided to stick it out, and made up for their comrades’ absence in the Collision by partying twice as hard.

    Karan’s elevator had reached the Sector floor. It promptly disgorged its guests in a rush of green-and-black Somtaaw Marine uniforms, and purple clothes. Then all was calm again as Ifriit saluted the S’jet-Sa.

    “Thank you,” Karan repiled smoothly, moving to stand next to the Somtaaw-Sa. Around the pair, their retinues rearranged themselves into a phalanx formation—half the guards facing inwards, the other half facing outwards towards potential threats.

    Another elevator moved towards the Morale Sector. Noreena checked its interior; Makaan and his retinue of Marine and Vaygr guards stood inside.

    “He’s on his way, sir,” she reported on the speaker nearest to the Somtaaw-Sa, as well as his earpiece. He nodded briskly.

    Suddenly Jerel’s elevator dropped towards the Sector. It jolted sharply upwards, bouncing across an entire deck before dropping back down to stop halfway into the Sector’s level. The entrance’s doors opened then closed several times before finally opening partway.

    Ifriit’s eyebrows shot up on his forehead as he saw Jerel lying in a stunned heap on the floor. The young IS officer blinked, then leapt off the malfunctioning elevator’s floor, hitting the Sector entrance’s floor with the grace of a long-time martial artist. The moment he cleared them, the elevator’s doors closed. Noreena cringed as the conveyance promptly shot upwards at triple its normal speed. It finally screeched to a halt between Decks 87 and 88—both of which were cargo levels that saw little traffic. She fired off another alert to Maintenance, this time adding a slew of Taiidani and Vaygr cursewords about their lack of action on her earlier report.

    The Somtaaw-Sa and Tydaar eyed the shaken Lieutenant quizzically.

    “Uhm, had a little technical trouble,” he said sheepishly. “And I’m okay. Thanks.”

    “I see,” Ifriit replied mildly. “Noreena?”

    “It went up to the cargo levels. Maintenance has been alerted. And cussed at because they didn’t respond to my first alert.”

    Karan and her aides snickered softly at Noreena’s words. Ifriit quirked a momentary grin.

    “Good. And our guests?”

    Noreena checked the shaft; Makaan’s elevator had descended to the Sector level.

    “They’re here.”

    “W-Wait, the tour?” Jerel spluttered, his face going white. “Aw, shit.”

    He turned and sprinted for the Collision, vanishing into the crowd of officers heading into there. Karan sighed, and shook her head.

    Then the elevator’s doors opened. Makaan stepped into the Sector as he raked the Somtaaw-Sa and Sajuuk-Khar with his electric blue gaze. His guards fanned out behind him, blending seamlessly the Somtaaw-Sa’s retinue. The Warlord’s face bore a disdainful expression; he’d expected to be doing something more constructive than wandering about a civilian-run area.

    “Welcome to the Morale Sector,” Ifriit said in his best diplomatic voice. Only Noreena knew he spoke through gritted teeth.
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    Nice. Almost a pity I keep spoiling the story for myself. Still quite fun to read. You may continue.

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    Wonderful. I wonder how Makaan will react to discovering his son is on board the Kuun-Lan. From what we've seen of Makaan so far its likely to not be pretty but to be better than the characters are expecting.

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    Chapter 9

    “Talia,” Noreena snapped, “I can understand your fear, but we need you here at your stand and not hiding somewhere! He’s going to want to meet you when he sees your art!”

    “It’s Makaan, Nor!” the painter retorted in a quivering voice as she swiftly packed her fold-up cash register into a duffel bag and slung it over her shoulder. “You can face him. I can’t! Ever.”

    “Talia, if there’s anything he can’t nitpick, it’s your art.”

    “Well, I don’t share the sentiment,” Talia protested.

    She turned and ran for the Sector entranceway. Unfortunately, she was too late. Ifriit and Karan rounded the corner near her kiosk, with Makaan at their heels. The trio’s combined retinues marched around them in a thunderhead of guns and muscles. With a terrified squeak, the painter wheeled around and dove for the back room. Noreena sighed yet again; all this fear of Makaan couldn’t be good for Talia’s health.

    “And this,” Ifriit boomed as he led the tour group into Talia’s kiosk, “is Talia Somtaaw’s stand. She’s our resident painter, and did the mural on my office’s wall.”

    Makaan nodded, his regal features softening slightly as she saw the dazzling spacescapes adorning the kiosk.

    “I remember that mural. Impressive work,” he remarked. He took several steps into the kiosk. His gaze roamed over the paintings, one by one.

    Noreena focused her attention on the Warlord, who’d come to a complete stop in front of one painting. Her eyebrows shot up in her tank as she recognized it.

    It was a picture of Talia’s older brother and her father, hugging one another with tears in their eyes. Talia had told stories of the pair’s strained relationship with one another; her father hadn’t cared for his eldest becoming a fighter pilot. The two finally had reconciled after the young man helped fight off a group of pirates attacking the asteroid base Talia had grown up in. The painting bore the title “Reconciliation,” which was perfectly suited to its subject matter.

    Knowing what she knew about Jerel, Noreena would’ve told Talia to stash that painting before Makaan’s arrival. However, the girl hadn’t connected her father and brother’s disagreements to the love-hate relationship between Jerel and Makaan. Karan also recognized the picture; it had been one of the few survivors from Ashoran’s battle with the Kuun-Lan. She eyed Noreena’s camera with a helpless expression on her face. Then she caught Makaan’s mood. She turned towards him, her eyes widening in shock.

    The Warlord’s face had softened even further; a sad gleam flickered in those blue eyes. He stood there, eyeing the picture as if it provided a window into his past.

    “Tural, where are you?” he whispered so softly that only Noreena and Karan heard him. "I've looked everywhere."

    She instinctively scanned the Sector for Jerel. To her surprise, he wasn’t in the Collision. A wider sweep showed him standing at a kiosk five places away from Talia’s, eyeing the corridors uneasily. He hid behind a large Beastslayer tapestry, occasionally peeking around it at the main entrance, which lay several dozen paces away from him.

    Probably got chased out by some Vaygr-haters. Either that or he’s trying to get back to the elevators unnoticed. If Karan's telepathic range is anything to go by, he's probably pushing his luck. C'mon Jerel. MOVE.

    The stand’s merchant stood at his entryway, eyeing the cluster of people at Talia’s stand.

    A Marine up on the second floor moved to get a better view of the tapestry kiosk. Noreena eyed the man briefly, wondering if Tydaar had posted more personnel through the Sector as an extra precaution. If he had, he hadn’t used the normal com channels to do so.

    She shook herself, and returned her attention to Jerel.

    “They gone yet?” Jerel whispered to the merchant running the kiosk. The man shook his head.

    “He’s really into Talia’s stuff,” he remarked in a tone suggesting he didn’t think Makaan wasn’t as nasty as War stories would have him believe. “Doesn’t surprise me. The girl’s got art so good it could impress Sajuuk.”

    Jerel chuckled.

    “He always had a thing for good spacescapes. I appreciate your help, man.”

    “Hey, my father didn’t want me ditching Naabal to join Somtaaw,” the merchant replied with a shrug. “Takes one to know one.”

    So that's why he didn't chase Jerel out or ask loudly what was going on. Good man, that, Noreena mused.

    “That it does,” Jerel muttered bitterly. He uneasily eyed the guards clustered around the kiosk.

    It didn't take a telepath to figure out that he was frantically, and probably loudly, thinking of a way to get out of his predicament.

    In Talia’s stand, the Warlord’s eyebrows shot clear up his forehead. A shocked expression exploded across his face.

    "T-Tural?"

    Shit! He DID hear him!

    Noreena quickly called Jerel’s hand-com, only to swear inventively when she realized he’d put it on mute. She quickly activated a speaker at the camera nearest to that tapestry.

    “Psst, Jer,” she whispered as loudly as she could for him to hear it without someone else picking up her voice further away. “Don’t think so loud.”

    He blinked, then eyed the camera in confusion.

    “If his reaction's anything to go by, he just overheard you. Telepathically.”

    His face turned to a look of pure horror. He turned and sprinted directly to the elevators, not caring a whit for the few people he passed on his way.

    The Warlord spun on one heel, and strode out of Talia’s kiosk. The Marine on the second floor perked, and drew his ion rifle as if anticipating danger.

    Makaan made a direct beeline for Jerel’s position, his long stride catching him up to his shorter son with surprising speed.

    A burst of movement on one of the upper level floors caught Noreena’s attention. That Marine had lifted his rifle and now watched the scene through its scope. Then she recognized him—the man she’d telepathically overheard reacting to Jerel being Makaan’s son. Noreena remembered the hatred in the man’s eyes and swore to herself. That rifle had just gotten a lot more ominous.

    Where he stood now, he had the best possible shot at Jerel. The sparseness of the Morale Sector meant he would have a clean shot, even with his target scurrying madly to get away from his father.

    Fuck. Did Ty read that notice I posted to him?!

    She called Tydaar’s hand-com. The Chief, who stood next to the Somtaaw-Sa, picked it up.

    “You got my alert?” she asked.

    “Yeah. I got people looking for him. Why?”

    “He’s on the second floor with an ion rifle. He’s tracking Jerel. Through the scope.”

    That had sufficient implication that Noreena need say no more.
    The Chief didn't reply as his eyes sought the Marine in question. He spotted him quickly, and motioned for the Marines to surround and capture him. Ifriit blinked, then sputtered as the Marines leapt into action, sprinting for the nearest stairwells. He got ahold of Karan’s arm and steered her away from the scene for her safety. She nodded as if perfectly understanding the situation, and moved away with him.

    Only then did the Warlord sense the danger swirling around his son. He shot a glance to the murderous Marine, and opened his mouth to snap an order to his guards.

    Before the Warlord could get a word out, the renegade Marine fired. His weapon sent a beam of brilliant blue light blazing into Jerel’s chest. Screams rang out from several kiosks as passersby dove to the floor in fear.

    Everything seemed to move as if in slow motion. People peered from around kiosks and hiding places, watching the tableau from safe vantage points. Makaan blinked in horror, as if everything were a twisted holofilm playing to the delight of sadistic gods.

    Smoke oozed from a large blackened patch on Jerel’s chest. He stumbled briefly, intense pain wracking his body and turning his face into a rictus of agony. Then he fell backwards like a broken doll. Makaan moved swiftly towards his son, and grabbed hold of him. Then he slowly lowered his body to the floor.

    Jerel clutched his father’s arm as he struggled to keep his head upright.

    “I’m…sorry, Father,” he breathed, fighting with every ounce of his will to say those words.

    Then the last of his strength flickered away. He slumped in the horrified Warlord’s arms.

    “Tural,” Makaan whispered, too shocked to say anything else. He lifted his son in his arms, his eyes gleaming with unshed tears. Then he bent his head, gritting his teeth against the new onslaught of emotions.

    Upon seeing the ion rifle’s beam, the Marines picked up their pace. They quickly surrounded the rogue, pointing their rifles at him to prevent any further resistance from their target. The renegade Marine whirled and sprinted through the closest opening in the group. Tydaar lunged at the man and tackled him to the deck. He savagely wrenched the rifle from his grasp.

    Recovering quickly from his shock, Ifriit whipped his hand-com from his belt. He tapped out the emergency-call code.

    “Officer down in the Morale Sector. I want a med-team up here NOW!” the Somtaaw-Sa snapped.

    “Yessir,” a startled voice blurted from the com.

    Karan, completely stunned by the turn of events, collapsed onto a cargo crate outside one kiosk’s entrance. She closed her eyes and pressed a hand to her forehead as she fought the deluge of emotions slamming into her. Tydaar and his men clapped restraints on the man’s wrists and shoved him roughly ahead of them as they marched towards the Morale Sector elevator. The shooter struggled against the restraints, slowing the team down as he resisted his capture.

    “Shall I toss him in solitary, sir?” the Chief asked his superior with an undercurrent of fury in his voice. “I’d do no less for such a pathetic excuse for a Somtaaw.”

    Ifriit could only nod, his jaw working with fury.

    “Very good, sir,” Tydaar said crisply, his face reflecting Ifriit’s anger. Just as the Marine detachment had reached the main floor, the rogue turned to glare murderously at Makaan.

    “How’s it feel, huh?” he shouted at the stunned Warlord. “How’s it feel to lose your only fucking son?! How’s it feel to be one of us?!"

    Tydaar grabbed hold of the rogue’s other arm, and gave him a rough shove towards the entryway. The shooter had finally had enough; he began to violently thrash against the pair of Marines holding his arms. A brief scuffle ensued, ending when the pair shoved the man to the ground and pressed their knees into his back.

    “That’s enough!” one of the two snapped angrily.

    “It’s better than having him onboard this ship!” the rogue hissed.

    Scowling, Tydaar pulled out a small sidearm—a tranquilizer gun—and fired a dart into the man’s side. He promptly collapsed into unconsciousness. The Chief motioned for the Marines to carry him off, then rose and turned to the Somtaaw-Sa.

    “I’ll have an interrogation room set up for you when we get his files,” he said.

    Ifriit nodded his approval. The Chief saluted, then stalked off with his Marines. They nearly ran into the medical team as it left the elevator. Knowing the medics would carry a critically injured crewmember, they waited, leaving the empty elevator for them.

    ChiefMed himself led the team; he saw Jerel in Makaan’s arms, and sprinted towards him.

    “Sajuuk in heaven,” he muttered in horror as she saw the young man’s wound for the first time.

    The Warlord's shock suddenly gave way to boiling anger as he pinned a smoldering glare on ChiefMed. His eyes became so blue that Noreena thought they would turn into small ion cannons.

    "If he dies in your Hiigaran hands," he growled dangerously, "this alliance will be terminated. Is that clear?"

    "Very," ChiefMed practically squeaked. "May we have him please?"

    Makaan gave only one short, curt nod as his anger still held dominion in his mind. He held Jerel out to the medics.

    "I have no choice," he said acidly. His burning gaze spoke volumes more than those words.

    ChiefMed frantically motioned his paramedics to bring their gurney forwards. The second it came within reach, Makaan gently lowered his son onto it. The medics went to work, scanning his burned chest as they attached life-support machinery to his body.

    “He’s still alive!” one nurse blurted out in amazement.

    “Barely,” ChiefMed retorted. “We’d better move or we’ll lose him.”

    Then he shoved the gurney towards the elevator. One of the cardiac monitors suddenly flatlined, emitting a steady tone. Makaan went completely pale despite his furious expression; his eyes glittered as if someone had ripped his heart out of his chest and pulverized it into pieces.

    ChiefMed swore, and grabbed the defibrillation paddles. He pressed their activation studs.

    “Clear!” he snapped, pressing them to Jerel’s sides. A jolt of current shot through him, causing him to lurch atop the gurney.

    The monitor’s tone fluctuated wildly, then resumed its flatlining. ChiefMed pressed the studs again.

    “Clear!”

    Jerel’s body jerked violently once again. This time the monitor switched to a steady beeping. ChiefMed let out a relieved sigh.

    “Too close,” he muttered angrily as he resumed his push towards the elevator. “Move, people, move!

    The medical team sprinted to keep up with him as he boarded the elevator with the gurney. Makaan slipped through the doors just as they began to move. Then they closed with an ominous click.

    Moments later, they opened again as a new elevator moved into place. The Security contigent tromped inside, carrying their captive. Tydaar, the last to step inside, shook his head in disgust as he dialed for the Brig levels.

    After the doors closed, Ifriit slowly sank onto the crate Karan sat upon. He put an arm around her shoulder and squeezed it comfortingly. She leaned into him with relief.

    Noreena swore inventively to herself. She shivered in her tank, too infuriated by the day’s events to do anything else.

    QWAARDAMN THAT IDIOT! Jerel is as Somtaaw as any fifty of us put together, and he can make us all look like lazy slobs doing it! If I had an ADW for every moron who can’t forget the War around here, I’d have enough to barbecue a gas giant! AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!

    Then a wave of sympathy for Makaan crashed into her. She hung quietly in her tank, stunned by the swirl of intense emotions. Then she realized why those feelings had hit her so hard. Seeing him so mirthful at her mother's bizarre behavior--and actually agreeing with her about that behavior--had revealed another side to him than the perpetually stern Warlord everyone saw.

    That side obviously could be hurt--and hurt deeply. No wonder watching him suffer through the near loss of his son caused her to empathize with him!

    She physically let out a long, weary sigh as she turned her attention to the Kuun-Lan's com networks. The news should be hitting the rest of the ship any time now, and Somtaaw's resident wirehead would be the only one able to keep up with the thousands of frantic conversations that would soon fly about.


    Chapter 10

    Wrapping the blanket around her still-soaked body, Noreena stalked into Sickbay. The medics pushing the cartful of backup feeder-line systems scrambled to keep up with her. She strode past the empty beds, and headed towards ChiefMed.

    He had just come out of an operating room. Blood smeared his white scrubs, and he slung his crimson-stained gloves at the nearest waste recycler. Upon seeing Noreena, he turned towards her.

    “I had to remove a lot of burnt tissue. Nearly lost him three times. I don’t know if he’ll make it through the night. But for now he’s stable. Critical, but stable.”

    “That's good to hear,” Noreena replied grimly. “given this mess. Com lines went crazy before I tripped the extraction systems. The one good thing is everybody feels sorry for Makaan. Me included.”

    "Well that's all and good but...wait...why'd you leave?"

    "I want to see Jerel. Personally."

    ChiefMed nodded his approval at Noreena's show of friendship, only to freeze upon seeing the tank fluid still dripping off her body. He scowled as his eyes sought out the trail of soggy blue footprints that had followed her into Sickbay from the entrance doors.

    “You tracked tank fluid all the way to here?! Why didn’t you take a gurney?”

    Noreena sighed irritably.

    “It’d be a waste, especially when you needed everybody watching Jerel. And I'm not that atrophied just yet.”

    ChiefMed's eyes glinted as he briefly contemplated chewing her out for such careless behavior. Then he calmed down; clearly he couldn't expect her to be at her best in this current situation.

    “Hmpf. Well, get yourself dried off," he said sternly, having settled on a reminder rather than a reprimand, "before walking out of HQ next time. As for reinsertion, I’m not putting you back in until I can spare the time and people away from Jerel. Right now we’re on 24/7 watch until he pulls through—that’s if he pulls through. Two, three days, minimum.”

    “Yes, Doc,” she replied with a nod.

    ChiefMed curtly nodded back, then spoke again in a softer voice.

    “We just got him out of surgery. He’s in Room 45. The one with the Vaygr guards at the door.”

    “Thanks, Doc,” Noreena said, clapping him on the shoulder, then moving to the room in question.

    Thanking the medics who’d helped her, she grabbed hold of the feeder-line cart, and wheeled it with her. ChiefMed sighed irritably at the blob of tank fluid that ran down his arm from where she’d touched him.

    Noreena peered at the doors that lined the main Sickbay area’s walls, then spotted the one labeled 45. The two Vaygr guards recognized her instantly; they had been on Makaan's detail when he had toured IS HQ. Both nodded to her, and stepped aside to let her pass. She opened the door slowly, and pushed her cart through. Then she closed the door behind her as quietly as she could.

    Jerel lay on a raised bed, wires trailing from his arms and head to various medical scanners. A large tissue regenerator hung overhead, shining down on his wounded chest with soft purple light. Pale and haggard, he looked as if he’d already died. The only thing that told Noreena otherwise was the gentle rise and fall of his chest.

    Eyeing him sadly, she slowly walked towards him. She rested one hand on his arm.

    “Hey,” she said softly, hoping he would hear her despite his unconsciousness. “Least you’re getting some sleep, huh?”

    Silence answered back, filled with the soft hum of life-support machinery. She nodded to herself, and turned to walk away.

    Then she saw the room’s other occupant.

    Makaan sat slumped into a chair set against the far wall. His eyes, unfocused and distant, stared into the wall above Jerel. He kept his arms folded, as if trying to hug himself. A haunted expression dominated his regal face. Even his eyes seemed less blue than usual, as if the life had drained out of them.

    “You saw what happened,” the Warlord spoke sadly, his voice unusually soft. Noreena nodded.

    "How could this...?" his regal voice, wracked with bitterness, trailed off, then picked up again. "I have searched the galaxy for him, hoping that he was still alive. And when I finally find him, he runs away from me...and in the same breath, he's nearly killed."

    Noreena shook her head vehemently. Makaan deserved some kind of apology on her behalf—this by all rights, should never have happened.

    “This isn’t us. This isn’t Somtaaw,” she said. “Nobody entertains revenge like this unless they want kicked out of the kiith.”

    Makaan nodded mechanically.

    “You knew Tural,” he said.

    “A good friend since my Worker days,” she replied.

    The Warlord stared sadly at his son, and let out a glum sigh.

    “I’d say ‘I’m sorry’ but the words just don’t cut it,” she continued bitterly, anger rising in her voice. “It shouldn’t have happened. I should’ve seen this coming. With two months’ Core time, I should’ve seen this coming!”

    She turned back to face Jerel, remembering her concern about the rogue Marine. Why hadn’t she addressed him outright, and had Tydaar haul him off for questioning if he reacted badly?

    “You couldn’t,” the Warlord said grimly. “I didn’t, and I had several times your exposure.”

    Noreena sighed wearily.

    “It still shouldn’t have happened,” she muttered angrily.

    “Indeed,” Makaan quietly replied.

    She turned towards the Warlord. To her surprise, she saw a lone tear trickling down Makaan’s face.

    I should’ve been proud that he had the sense to join the only Hiigarans living like Vaygr. Proud that he’d survived this long without me. Proud that he found a life where nobody wants to kill him just for being my son.

    Noreena blinked in shock at both the tear and the torrent of inner thoughts radiating from the Warlord. She stared at him, at a loss for what to say. In the short time since the alliance’s inception, he’d already proven one of the toughest people she had ever met. War propoganda had strengthened that image considerably; she thought Fleet Intel had been spot-on about Makaan’s temperament until today.

    To see him this vulnerable and this distraught, disturbed her beyond any words she could use.

    But it went just like Balcora. Like everything I’ve done. I’ve failed. I failed him. I failed my people. I failed myself. What am I doing here?

    He simply sat there, his face regal and stoic as ever, but his eyes continued to stream tears. Noreena yearned to console him, to put her arms around him and tell him everything would work out. But he was still a Vaygr Warlord, and she doubted he would appreciate her sympathy in any form besides that apology. She also feared ending up in a badly injured heap if she dared touch him.

    She turned towards the doorway, still disturbed at overhearing the Warlord’s personal thoughts. She hadn’t yet gotten accustomed to hearing such things from people. She could feel his anger and sorrow rolling from him like waves through water. She slowly pushed her cart ahead of her so she would make as little noise as possible.

    Damn you, Ashoran! a mental voice much akin to Makaan's physical one, slashed into Noreena's mind with its fury. You brought me to my knees, stole my new Core, and gave me nightmares to last a lifetime. You wanted me broken—here I am. My son may not survive the night. My fleet is in pieces following your every word. And I’m on a goddamned HIIGARAN ship trying to save my sorry ass like the pathetic coward you said I was.

    I hope you’re happy.

    Then she realized that Makaan had no idea she’d overheard him; he was far too distraught to notice his mental broadcasting. Now she felt doubly uncomfortable. She had never liked walking in on a friend’s private moment or accidentally stumbling onto someone’s dirty secrets. Makaan’s vulnerable state right now qualfied as both.

    She slowly opened the door and pushed her cart through it. Then she closed the door behind herself, and sighed as she headed for the Sickbay exit. She paused to eye Room 45’s door worriedly as second thoughts rose in her mind.

    Crap. I should’ve hugged him or something. He was miserable as hell—isn’t there anybody around here who cares about the guy? Nope…he’d probably put that sword through me the minute I laid a hand on him. Forget it.

    She shook her head glumly.

    “Never was a diplomat, never will be a diplomat,” she muttered to herself. She resumed walking.

    Why’d I even leave the tank? Should’ve left well enough alone.
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    He'll pull through, I hope? It's too cruel to pull them apart forever when they've only just met in such a long time...

    Nice handling of the reunion, and Makaan's inner thoughts. It's a fresh insight into who Makaan really is deep down inside.

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    I am too preoccupied by a video game to threaten you for more chapters.

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    lovely DC, just lovely.

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    Wow... hope Jerel pulls through all right. I feel really sorry for Makaan.

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    This is a very good read. I'd like to see more! You have a way with characters that draws the reader in -- very nice. It's nice to see Makaan as human, rather than just a being of total evil. I look forward to future chapters.

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    awww *sniffle* poor Makaan. i always thoughtr inside that absolute psychomaniac there was a soft, touchy feely guy...

    ..well, actually i didn't, but great wway to pull it off Deep.

    more please!

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    Okay...once again I MUST repost this becuase the server is acting like the Beast and EATING MY POSTS.

    *Vaygr 2x4 to server...BAM....BAM.....BAM....BAM!*

    GAAAAH!

    I find your lack of connects DISTURBING.

    Oh yeah, Chapters.

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    Chapter 11

    Noreena plodded into her quarters, grateful for the removal of her feeder-lines. She briefly registered the time shown by the chrono as it glowed in the darkened room: 1935. Flinging the blanket off her shoulders, she strode straight to the sonic shower, peeling pieces of her wirehead suit off along the way. She closed the bathroom door behind her, and flipped the activation switch on the shower.

    She simply stood there, enjoying the feel of gelatinous tank fluid running down her body as the sonic pulses cleansed it.

    Bleeeep. Bleeeep. Bleeeep.

    Noreena blinked as she recognized the priority signal code from her hand-com. She scowled as she snatched her bathrobe off its hook and stalked back out. The device lay on the coffee table, where she’d left it last time. She scurried to it, and opened its line.

    “Noreena here,” she said, wondering who else knew she was extracted besides Py, Saeri, and those two medics. They were the only ones who’d disconnected her from the Tunnel.

    “Lord Makaan wishes to speak with you,” a Vaygr-accented voice announced, “immediately.”

    That was the tone any Vaygr used when Lord Makaan was displeased, and wanted to chew someone out as soon as possible. Noreena swallowed nervously as sweat rose on her forehead.

    Oh shit. He knows I overheard him. I’m dead. Quite dead. Qwaar-Jet, I’ll be seeing you very shortly…please be kind…

    “Where is he?”

    “Sickbay conference room one,” the voice replied curtly. “We will escort you from your quarters.”

    He HAD to send his guards to make sure I didn’t wimp out? Great. Just great.

    “I’ll be right out in a few minutes,” Noreena replied, grateful that the shower had cleaned her to a presentable level.

    She shut the com off as she lunged for her locker. Within moments, thanks to long experience with combat drills and IS network crashes, she was fully dressed and ready to walk out the door within five minutes. She flipped her beret onto her head, and strode out of her quarters.

    A pair of Vaygr commandos stood at either side of her door, eyeing her dispassionately. She nodded, and together they strode to the elevator at the end of the hallway. Noreena eyed them nervously; it wasn’t like Makaan to send his people after a Somtaaw. He typically demanded their presence at a conference room and let them come on their own time; he would rebuke them if they took more than five minutes getting there. Then, if he were displeased, he would launch into the chewing-out on whatever subject had irked him enough to require a meeting.

    The elevator ride consisted of an awkward silence in which the commandos stood like parade-ground statues. Noreena yearned to fidget, but refused to show her nervousness to the two Vaygr.

    When they reached Sickbay, the trio strode directly towards the conference room in question. Then the guards fell into position at either side of the doorway. Noreena gulped, and pressed the open button on the conference room’s door. She stepped in reluctantly as it opened.

    She blinked in the room’s bright overhead lighting, then saw the room’s other occupant. Makaan sat alone at the head of the table, an expression of barely controlled fury on his face. His blue eyes snapped dangerous sparks, resembling Siege Cannons about to fire.

    The door closed behind her with an ominous click. Noreena gulped.

    Is it too late to request a krenza-wood coffin?

    Far too late,” the Warlord hissed.

    He glared angrily at Noreena.

    “I thought I’d seen you people sink low enough in the War,” he snapped. “I was wrong. Is nothing sacred to you?! Do you people have any concept of privacy?!”

    Noreena staggered back under the lash of his words, unconsciously stepping back towards the wall behind her. The Warlord surged from his chair and advanced relentlessly towards her.

    “How much of my thoughts did you overhear?” he asked, his blue eyes boring into her with smoldering fury.

    She blinked, then sputtered under that powerful stare. She struggled to push the words out but her fear had rendered her speechless.

    Makaan leaned in close, baring his teeth in fury.

    “How. Much?” he growled, his voice dropping an octave.

    “A-All of it,” she finally squeaked out. “E-Even about Ashoran being h-happy.”

    Makaan’s face suddenly went from merely furious to frighteningly enraged. Noreena felt the blood drain from her face. He moved towards her again, causing her to step back a pace for each he took.

    “Who did you tell about this?!” he snapped. Noreena gaped in horror as she realized the full extent of his fury.

    He is PISSED. I need outta here. No way in hell can I talk to him. Get Karan. Get Ifriit. Somebody who can HANDLE him!

    She scrambled towards the door, reaching to hit the open button. The sooner she got away from him, the better. Then he could cool off, and she could explain herself from the safe distance of a com screen.

    The Warlord suddenly grabbed a handful of the back of her jacket, and hauled her off her feet. Then she soared through the air, crashing face-first into a wall. She crumpled into a stunned heap on the floor.

    Then a massive hand gripped her neck and shoved her back into the wall. Its fingers dug into her throat. Behind it, Makaan glared at her, his eyes glowing with murderous fury.

    Who did you tell?!

    “N-Nobody,” she squeaked out. “I didn’t tell anyone.”

    “Don’t lie to me, woman!” the Warlord hissed, squeezing her neck in a grip that slowly tightened. She gasped for air, her lungs burning from the effort.

    “Nobody,” she repeated, feeling sweat roll down the sides of her face. “I swear. Read my mind.”

    “Don’t swear anything you lying piece of…”

    Then he finally sensed her thoughts. He narrowed his eyes at her.

    “How fortunate for you,” he snapped sarcastically, “that you kept your sorry mouth shut.”

    Oh good, maybe now he’ll be reasonable and let go of my NECK!

    “I’m not through with you yet,” he snapped icily. “You spied on me when you should’ve kept to yourself! How dare you?!”

    His fingers tightened further, reducing her breathing to ragged, frightened gasps. Utter fear rooted her to the spot. She tried futilely to pull his hand away from her neck with hers; it was like pushing away a machine rather than a living arm. Stars danced in front of her eyes. She blinked to clear them, but to no avail.

    “What in Sajuuk’s name possesed you, woman?! How dare you invade my mind?!”

    She worked her mouth, desperately trying to say something. The reduced flow of air prevented a single sound from coming out. Snarling in fury, Makaan moved his face to within an inch of hers as he tightened his grip on her neck.

    Someone…help me…Karan, walk through that door. Please…I’ll die here…

    “The truth, or you will die,” he growled. Noreena squeezed her eyes shut as his chokehold became ever stronger. Now her gasps drew in so little air that she felt she would faint.

    Then the Warlord tore into her mind with his mental powers. His attack was so intense, it was like a tidal wave smashing past every mental defense she had. Suddenly, he was inside Noreena herself. Nothing escaped his mental gaze; every memory, every thought, every emotion she’d ever had lay bare before him like a book to be read. She found herself completely overwhelmed; she would have screamed if not for his chokehold.

    Suddenly yesterday’s fateful events replayed like an intense dream. Noreena saw the tears trickling down Makaan’s face again. His thoughts, as clearly as she’d heard them the last time, rippled through her mind with their sorrow and fury.

    Then came her desire to console him, and finally, her decision to leave him alone. Once again, she felt her regret at not having done something to comfort the distraught Warlord. Then she uttered those last words: “Never was a diplomat, never will be a diplomat.”

    Makaan blinked in amazement.

    Shock radiated from his presence as it receded from her mind. He abruptly let go of Noreena’s neck, then staggered back several paces, his eyes wide with shock. She collapsed into a stunned heap on the floor.

    Silence drew itself out. She saw the Warlord simply stood there, staring in horror at the hand he'd nearly killed her with.

    Noreena remained where she lay, shaking in terror. Pain screamed from her neck, reminding her how close she’d come to dying. She gasped fitfully, her tortured lungs drawing in as much air as they could.

    Then her emotions caught up with her; tears welled in her eyes. She put her face in her hands to prevent Makaan from knowing how badly he’d shaken her. Stunned by the ferocity of his psychic attack, she curled up into a quivering ball. She felt as if his mental invasion had permanently rearranged her mind. She could not find her memories in the same places among her thoughts as she used to.

    Then Noreena's fear rose to the forefront again; Makaan was still in the room.

    She suddenly bolted to her feet, then ran to the room's door. Once it opened for her, she ran as far away from the Warlord as she could.

    She didn't stop running until she reached her quarters.


    Chapter 12

    Noreena blew her nose into yet another tissue, letting the tears roll down her face. Her mind still felt too scrambled to muster any sort of a verbal explanation to anyone about what had happened. She glanced to the chrono, which showed a time three hours after her encounter with the furious Warlord.

    She sat curled up on her bed, her back propped against its headboard. Tissues lay littered around her like a small crowd of comforting animals. The tissue box sat in her lap, nearly depleted of its supply.

    Again and again the confrontation played itself out in her mind, from the Warlord's furious remark about her request for a krenza-wood coffin to when he finally dropped her in horror. Everything replayed itself like a broken holoprojector that couldn't turn off. Whenever she became just distracted enough to forget the details even a little, a random thought would trigger the mental holo-recording, and then her memories sucked her back into their loop.

    Noreena continued to cry as her violently jarred thoughts slowly crept back to their usual places in her mind. Even so, she felt utterly and completely vulnerable--and violated in a way Ash had never managed. She prayed that nobody would try to talk to her anytime soon; she felt too broken to even speak.

    Then came the dread of having to explain to Karan and Ifriit what had happened, sinking Noreena into an even worse nadir. The shame of realizing she hadn't notified Karan or anyone else of the upcoming meeting with the Warlord, and then remembering how it had turned out--how badly he had caught out an experienced barfighter--easily kept her from picking up her hand-com to call anyone.

    Oh Gods. Oh Gods. Am I ever gonna be the same? I can't think right anymore. Oh, shit. I'm gonna have to explain this to Karan and everybody. And the bruises...the bruises on my neck. Anybody sees that, it'll be out, and...wait.

    She froze.

    Isn't there a first-aid kit in here somewhere? I think I saw a tissue regenerator in it. It'd at least make the bruises fainter, if not totally gone.

    She tossed aside her tissue, which fluttered down to join the others littered about her. Then she crawled off her bed and crossed to the wall cabinet marked with the First Aid symbol--a red dot within a white circle with a blue line through it. She wrenched the door open, and yanked the white plastic box out of its compartment.

    She tossed it onto the sofa, then plopped painfully onto the cushion next to it. Her body had just begun protesting the violent trashing it had undergone three short hours ago. From experience, she knew that she'd been lucky; a broken bone would've been felt right away. At the least, the bruises were going to be quite spectacular.

    She quickly opened the box, and promptly reduced the orderly kit to a pile of strewn regenerator pads, bandages, and gauze littered about her lap and the floor. The search quickly turned up her prize; a small metal rod the length of her open hand.

    She turned it towards her aching neck, and flipped its on switch. A gentle purple glow, and a soothing warmth enveloped her neck. For a moment, she felt as if she could actually handle this entire mess.

    Bleeep. Bleeep. Bleeep.

    Oh crap. Not now. NOT NOW.

    Bleeep. Bleeep. Bleeep.

    Noreena sighed miserably as she recognized the priority call signal. She set the regenerator down, then plucked the hand-com off her belt, and turned its screen towards her.

    A text message scrolled slowly in blood-red letters.

    "I could not have committed a greater act of stupidity if I tried. I will inform Lady S'jet of what has happened. If this alliance is terminated, know that it is entirely my fault. You had nothing to do with this. - Makaan."

    Whatever shred of composure Noreena had left promptly vanished in a tidal wave of relief. She curled back into a quivering ball on the sofa, and cried into her knees.
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    AAAAHHHH! I had emotions. Like Random being sad.

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    Well he was already emotionally unstable from Jerel being near death. Doesn't take much to make him flip mental gears....*shrug* Guy still has some psychomaniac in him, I guess. And I WANTED it to be unexpected, so.....there?

    Yes. CHAPTERS.

    Because I'm leaving for vacation on Sunday, and will have only periodic access to the internet via laptop on dialup (and said laptop is not mine, and won't have Legacies II on it...) , I will pop up 2 new chapters per night till Sunday, just so people's Legacies fix lasts through the week. After that I come back the following Friday or Saturday (one week's vacation), and I will resume my normal posting pattern.

    So, on to the Legacies fix to make up for next week.

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    Chapter 13

    Noreena eyed the tissue regenerator, then her arm. The bruises would take longer to show, but she was confident that she would look at least somewhat presentable when someone did finally see her. She set it back inside the kit with a relieved sigh.

    She then got up and tottered to her bed, hoping that a good long nap would somewhat calm her still-rattled nerves. She tossed her hand-com onto her nightstand, not caring where it landed.

    “Aiii, Koshiir Ra,” she mumbled an old prayer in the most tired voice that had ever emitted from her lips, “Guard me from harm, and from wickedness.”

    She then altered it, pumping all her frustration into a curiously calm voice as she stood before her bed.

    “Give me one quiet day. Because if you don’t, my head will explode. And it’ll be all your divine fault.”

    She then crawled onto the bed with relief. She fell asleep faster than she ever had before.

    Makaan glared furiously at her. His blue eyes bored into her skull.

    “WHO DID YOU TELL?!”

    “N-Nobody,” she blurted out.

    The Warlord backhanded her across the face, then hauled her off the floor with one hand. He squeezed her neck, his grip tightening till she couldn’t breathe. She clawed frantically at the hand clutching her neck, but to no avail. She felt her life draining from her as she struggled to take in even a whiff of air.

    “Wrong answer,” he growled furiously. “Now DIE!”

    Then Noreena felt her body go limp as her heartbeat slowed to a crawl. She heard a satisfied grunt as she sank to the floor in a heap.

    “No Hiigaran gets inside MY mind and lives to tell it,” he snapped to her limp body as he strode out of the conference room.


    Noreena jerked awake with a scream. She gasped for breath as she clutched her neck with both hands. It took several minutes to realize she was indeed alive, and the enraged Warlord had just been a bad dream.

    Except that happened, dammit! I couldn’t stop him. I just couldn’t fight…back…dammit!

    Bleeep.


    Noreena screamed a second time at the startling sound. Then she recognized it.

    She reached out feebly for her hand-com. Several roaming sweeps with her hand finally turned it up on the far corner of her nightstand. She snatched it and hit the open line button.

    “Jerel’s awake,” ChiefMed’s voice spoke through the grille. “He’s asking for you. Come down when you can.”

    Noreena’s eyes widened. She saw her bedside chrono; it read 0924. She leapt off the bed and dove to her locker. She dressed quickly in a sweatsuit, then sprinted out of her quarters in a bid to prevent anyone inquiring about her condition. A quick jog took her to the elevator at the end of the hall. Fortunately, it was empty at this hour; everyone had already departed for the morning shift.

    Noreena dialed for the elevator to take her to Sickbay. The minute its doors opened, she scurried through. Several quick paces got her past the waiting hall and through the Sickbay entrance.

    She didn’t even wait for someone to give her directions; she beelined directly for Room 45. The two Vaygr stood at the door as they had last time. They didn’t even see her until she punched the open button on the doorway’s console. Both guards drew their knives out of instinct, only to freeze upon recognizing Noreena. She almost leapt backwards an entire meter at the sight of the weapons. Then the startled pair nodded as they realized who she was. Slightly shaken by their own reactions, they tucked their blades away.

    She shakily stepped through the door, then nearly jumped into the room's ceiling. Makaan stood just inside the room, eyeing the floor uneasily. She nervously skittered away from him; she hadn’t fully recovered from the incident or her nightmare. She didn’t dare talk to him. Instead, she moved towards her friend.

    Jerel lay where he had when she’d last seen him. However, his color had improved a little. He peered about with alert eyes, squinting against the overheard dermal regenerator’s light. ChiefMed and two nurses hovered over him, adjusting the life-support machinery for his renewed strength.

    “Good, very good,” ChiefMed said, glowing with relief. He stepped away from his patient and turned to Makaan and Noreena. “He’ll pull through for sure. Quite the fighter.”

    He then motioned for the nurses to leave; Jerel’s visitors would want time alone with him now that he was awake.

    Noreena chuckled with frazzled relief.

    “Same Jerel who can’t sleep more than four hours a night,” she cracked. “I should’ve known he wouldn’t get any more than a day’s worth, even with something like this.”

    “Very funny,” Jerel remarked weakly. “I’d rather sleep another day.”

    ChiefMed made some final checks himself, then headed to the door. He stopped to eye the two visitors pointedly.

    “He’s still very weak. Keep your visit brief. He needs to rest.”

    “Gotcha,” Noreena said with a nod.

    Makaan didn’t even respond. He simply stared blankly at the floor as if he were the one lying in bed from an ion-rifle shot to the chest.

    Then ChiefMed strode out. Noreena moved closer to her friend, smiling down at him.

    “Hey. How you feeling?” she asked.

    “Like shit,” he retorted bitterly. “Did you get the serial of the beam that ran me over?”

    “Nope. But your shooter’s in the brig waiting for kiith-Sa to rip him a new one.”

    “What’d he shoot me for? Was it one of Ash’s guys or something?”

    Noreena shook her head.

    “One of our own. Sounds like revenge against...your father. He thought you’d be a good way to hurt him. He’s probably one of those crazies with the Paaura symbol scarred into their arm.”

    If Noreena's voice wobbled at mention of the Warlord, Jerel didn't notice in his weakened state.

    “Ugh. Some things are the same, no matter what race,” he muttered angrily. “I hate being a target.”

    “Tell me about it,” Noreena replied grimly. “I never understood those Eternal Vengeance types. Sounded like a good way to get committed.”

    Jerel nodded grimly.

    “How long was I out?”

    “Two days.”

    “That’s not too bad.”

    “That’s putting it mildly,” Noreena snorted. “We didn’t think you’d come out at all.”

    “Could’ve told you to save it for a first-timer. I’m used to this,” he replied wearily. “I’ve taken ‘em in the back, in the side, to the head”—

    “To the heart,” Makaan interrupted mournfully. He hadn’t moved from his position by the door.

    Jerel blinked, then turned his head to look at his father. He then quickly looked away, hurt flashing in his eyes before he closed them. He would’ve turned the rest of his body away, but the restraints that kept him in place for the overhead regenerator prevented him from doing so.

    The Warlord slowly walked up to his son’s bedside. Noreena gulped nervously, then backed away from him. She headed for the room’s door, eager to flee that towering presence. Makaan’s mental voice stopped her, however.

    Noreena, stay. You should see this. You’re the closest friend he has.

    She blinked, then nodded. She headed to the chair he’d sat in yesterday, and sank uneasily onto it. The Warlord sighed sadly, and put a hand on his son’s shoulder.

    “If I never wanted to see you again,” he said in a quiet, sad voice, “why would I be here now? From where you were in Somtaaw, you couldn't have seen my search for you. I had hoped you were alive...and feared you were dead.”

    The young man blinked, and looked up at Makaan.

    "I thought you'd"--

    "Renounced you as a traitor who left his post during battle?" the Warlord sternly asked.

    Jerel cringed, then looked away. Makaan sighed, his stern features relaxing into a more somber expression.

    “You are my son,” he said quietly. “The Code says that fathers should renounce those who leave as you did...but I was not much of a father to you, was I? You tried to tell me what was happening to you, and I wouldn’t listen. I've become a fool. A fool who shunned those who would be my family, my friends...in some mad quest for glory."

    Jerel gulped down a lump in his throat. He closed his eyes with a long sigh as the Warlord continued.

    “You were right. I ignored you when I shouldn’t have. I trained you to consider survival your utmost priority. How should I fault your leaving when I did nothing to help?”

    “You had a war to run, Father,” Jerel said softly.

    “That doesn’t excuse my neglecting my own son. When Kaiza died”—

    “Father, I’m alive,” Jerel interrupted. “You’re alive. That’s all that matters.”

    “Son, I’ll understand if you can’t forgive me, even if I haven't renounced you. It...it was a long time. I should've thought to look among the Hiigarans, and I didn't. All this time you've spent thinking me dead...”

    "I forgive you," Jerel said softly. "You're here now."

    The Warlord’s blue eyes brimmed with tears. He blinked them away as he nodded his acknowledgement, sniffling softly. Jerel reached out and gripped his father’s shoulders, pulling him into an embrace as best as he could with his restraints.

    Noreena swallowed the lump rising in her throat, and quietly made her way to the room’s doorway. She looked back one last time to see father and son locked in a long-overdue hug. She smiled shakily, and stepped through the door.


    Chapter 14

    Noreena looked up to the other children. They held paintball guns modeled off various Somtaaw ships; one boy hauled a massive model of the Kuun-Lan on a wagon behind him. They all eyed her and her cardboard model of an Archangel with disdain.

    “C’mon,” she pleaded, “I even built an Archangel. It shoots paintballs like yours.”

    She held up her model, which she’d built on top of a hand-held paintball gun, and aimed it at a nearby post. She pulled the trigger. Nothing happened. She pulled it again. Then a small blob of blue paint fell far short of its mark, splattering into the grass.

    “Yeah, right,” the tallest boy sneered. “Go home, dork.”

    “Yeah. You couldn’t hit the Naggarok broadside-on.”

    Noreena gulped then pinned their leader with her best puppy-dog-eyed stare. He didn’t even flinch.

    “Please?”

    “Go away, newb,” he scowled. “We don’t take shrimps around here.”

    “Yeah,” a group of MBF-carrying girls taunted.

    Noreena sighed sadly and trudged away from the group.

    Then a massive shadow fell across her. She looked up to see a towering man in a black, red, and gray uniform accented with white. He snarled in fury as he lunged at her, his hands clawing for her throat.

    She screamed, dropping her Archangel as she ran. She sprinted to a brick building standing amid juaarball courts and combat-training obstacle courses. A quick push on its door let her in; she slammed it shut behind her as she gasped in terror.

    Then she recognized where she’d escaped to: Captain Ifriit Somtaaw’s Tactics class at the Haven Academy. The room was empty, save for rows of empty desks and the Captain himself. He looked up from his desk, an irritated expression on his face. Moonlight illuminated his features in a soft blue glow.

    “Noreena, what are you doing here? It’s after hours! I’ve already told you my office hours. I’d appreciate your honoring them!”

    She looked around frantically for an exit. Then a dark shadow fell from the open door she’d barged through. Then the towering intruder strode through, his blue eyes glowing furiously. She froze in utter terror again.

    He stalked slowly towards her, his glare intensifying.

    “You are fortunate you kept your sorry mouth SHUT!” he snapped, then grabbed for her throat.

    Noreena whirled and ran for the nearest window. She leapt straight through the glass, shattering it into thousands of errant shards which flew past her.

    Then she landed on the Collision floor. Rey and a handful of Crewroom 16 regulars stood around her, holding up their bottles of Courage.

    “All right, let’s see who gets the new LIEUTENANT piss drunk first!” Kolaay shouted. The crowd around her cheered so loudly the deckplates vibrated under her feet.

    “Yeah, congrats!” a Recon shouted at her, clapping gleefully as her companion handed Noreena a newly uncorked bottle of Courage.

    Then the intruder stormed through, shoving people aside with enough strength to send them flying. Bodies crashed into the floor as he strode towards her.

    “HOW DARE YOU INVADE MY MIND?!” he bellowed as he grabbed her by the throat with both hands.

    Noreena clutched at his vise-like grip with both arms, kicking and screaming as she struggled to work free. The man’s sapphire gaze glowed with blue fire as Noreena fought for every breath. His hands squeezed tighter, causing stars to dance in front of her eyes.

    “N-No,” she whimpered through the chokehold. “I don’t wanna die.”

    Then she felt her body go limp again, unconsciousness exploding into her mind.


    “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!”

    Noreena gasped for breath as she thrashed in her bed. Then she sat bolt upright, her lungs still sucking in huge gulps of air. She lifted her hands to her throat, then closed her eyes again.

    With a long, sobbing sigh, she curled up into a ball. Tears welled up in her eyes and rolled down her cheeks as she tightly hugged herself. Moments crawled past as she finally calmed down.

    As the last tears rolled down her face, she slowly uncurled herself back onto her bed. Scrubbing the tears off her face, she sucked in one slow breath after another as she calmed herself. Then she closed her eyes, waiting for true sleep to take her.

    Makaan picked her up by the back of her jacket and threw her into the wall. It shattered into a thousand pieces, each of which reflected a memory from her life. The Warlord stormed after her, reaching out a hand to choke her again. The memories flew around them both, then hurtled towards him.

    She watched in horror as memory after memory flew towards him, then became liquid slime that joined with his body. Then his hand wrapped around her neck yet again—

    Bzzzzt.


    Noreena rolled over in her bed. She popped open one eye, and sighed miserably. The chrono read 1045; scant time had passed since she’d woken from that first nightmare. To make matters worse, she easily remembered the one the buzzer had woken her from.

    I just went back to sleep, dammit. Stop giving me nightmares dammit! Just STOP!

    She fumbled for her remote, and pressed the proper button. The door opened to reveal Karan S’jet, who strode inside without a word.

    “Would you mind some company?” she asked gently as she moved towards her bed. “I heard about what happened.”

    Wait…the…the thing? With Makaan?

    Karan nodded somberly.

    “I’m fine for now,” Noreena said. “Mostly cuz he made up with Jerel. But I can’t fucking sleep. Ash’s mindblast was nothing compared to this. Nothing.

    “Let me know if you want another memory block,” Karan offered. Noreena nodded as a lump rose in her throat.

    “So how’s Jerel?” she asked in a bid to change the topic.

    “Doing better than anybody thought considering that shot went to his heart. ChiefMed wants to keep him for the rest of this week. Then he’ll be sent to rest up in his quarters for next week. After that, he should be fine.”

    “So he’ll be all right…for real,” Noreena said, relief flooding her mind.

    “I’m more worried about you right now,” the S’jet-Sa said, putting a hand on Noreena’s shoulder. She flinched, then calmed herself.

    “Sorry.”

    “It’s a natural reaction,” Karan replied gently. “No need to apologize.”

    “So…what’d he tell you?”

    “He didn’t say a word. Just walked in, pointed to his head. I read it right off him.”

    “And?”

    “I’ve seen people in remorse over things they did during wars,” Karan explained softly. “That was nothing next to how upset he was about hurting you. He didn’t show the full extent to you. He thought you had betrayed his impression of an honorable person...then he found out he was wrong. That's the gist of what I gathered besides the actual attack in his memory.”

    Noreena stared glumly at the ceiling. A fresh lump rose in her throat.

    “What’d you say?”

    “I told him, that because he took responsibility for his actions, the alliance now stands on better footing with me than before. Noreena, I was shocked to see him that shaken up, especially when it was about something he’d done to a Hiigaran. That did more to put the War behind me than anything Ashoran could do—up to and including his stealing the Sajuuk.”

    Noreena sighed with reilef, rolling onto her side so she could face Karan more easily. So the Warlord had gained respect from her teacher. This definitely boded well for the future.

    “And…?”

    “I also told him we have Jerel’s shooter in the Brig. As soon as enough information’s put together, Ifriit and I will interrogate him together. He’s already had the man stripped of his rank and position within the kiith. And he’s had his name stricken from Somtaaw personnel records. Our oldest, and slowest-moving cargo shuttle is being prepped in the Hangar for his exile. As per your kiith-Sa’s orders, it has a huge Angel Moon logo on it. If he makes it to Hiigara and starts a new life, good. If he becomes target practice for Ashoran’s Vaygr, I doubt anybody's going to worry too much.”

    Karan's icy expression seemed singularly at odds with her worshippers' image of her as a compassionate messiah of the Hiigaran people. Noreena, long accustomed to Karan's gentle manner, blinked in shock before she realized the S'jet-Sa took little stock in the well-being of people who so willingly threw away innocent lives in a quest for vengeance.

    Noreena nodded grimly. A fitting punishment for such a cold-hearted act of revenge. He had shot her best friend, and he had done it in an act of revenge so cold-blooded that her memory of it sickened her.

    “Makaan would’ve loved it. Especially the slow-moving shuttle part.”

    “He did,” Karan said with a wry grin. “Although he didn’t show it.”

    Noreena sighed wearily. Karan lightly rested a hand on Noreena’s forehead.

    “Sleep,” she said gently. “I’ll set up a block on the nightmares for tonight. It’ll take deeper work to deal with this fully…but I can give you tonight.”

    Noreena blinked back fresh tears as she gulped with relief.

    “Thank you,” she whispered as Karan applied the gentlest of mental pressure. She dozed off within seconds.
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    Backyard Homeworld!

    And I hope your right about this fix. With "Wrath of the Gods" over, and both Ghent's, RN's and Starfisher's stories at multi-month stand stills I'll have nothing to read for days. Well, maybe Sajuuks Thesis will update his story.

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    Me like new slight emotion. HAPPY! BACKYARD HW, YEAH!

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    I was a bit worried about Makaan's reaction for a while as it so shocked me but with hindsight I see it made a good deal of sense. And how you're portraying Noreena's reactions to the incident is remarkably detailed and real, I can almost feel Makaan's hands around my neck.

    Excellent work and can't wait to see more.

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    Yay! I smell some frienship and some romance ahoy! poor Makaan.. enevr thought i'd say that but hey.

    poor Nor.

    You're bloody good at this Deep, keep at it!

    have fun on your hols!

    peace.

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    OK....now for TODAY'S server battle....*readies Vaygr 2x4 and Phased Cannon Array*

    Yeah, some Bentusi sold it to me for a Karan S'jet pinup from Reydavic's locker. I've no idea how useful it is. *pokes it nervously* Or why those Bentusi wanted the pinup....*eyes the departing tradeship warily*

    CHAPTERS!

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    Chapter 15

    Noreena’s earpiece—a gift from Tydaar for helping with Jerel’s shooter—chattered at her. She quirked one eyebrow as she listened to the com talk amongst the Security and Maintenance crews.

    Man, they’re missing me already? I’ve been out for what, two days, and everything decides it wants to crash? Wow.

    She then lifted her bottle of Courage to her lips, peering about the Collision as she did so.

    To her surprise, the Vaygr had started coming to the bar more often lately; perhaps the Courage and more relaxed attitude here had won them over. Obviously, people were more interested in just having fun here than in the rest of the allied fleets. The drinking contests had lately started to include Vaygr liquor; its ablity to reduce any Somtaaw to a stumbling drunk after half a bottle made a good laughing point among the Vaygr. While the two groups mostly avoided one another, they partook equally of the liquor and music available. A small number of Somtaaw and Vaygr, scattered across the Collision, actually partied together.

    It took little in the way of observational powers to notice the tension between the two distinct groups. If any member of either came a touch too close to the other, they became the recipient of at least a dozen hostile stares. Those who partied together steered far clear of the zones of tension in the Collision, and typically lingered near the entryway should a fight worth fleeing break out.

    This tension mostly manifested as hostile stares that jumped from table to table to table. In some cases, it came up as little acts of mischief done to the other side. One Somtaaw mechanic who’d taken the wrong shortcut to his friends’ table had been tripped by a grumpy Laser Corvette pilot when he’d brushed past his chair. Fortunately for him, his cool head prevailed and he’d backed away from the man before causing further trouble.

    “Ya know,” Noreena muttered grimly to Karan, who sat next to her in her usual purple clothes. “I think the only reason they just tripped that guy is the two of us being here. Although I bet they’d have left him alone if…”

    “Makaan were around?” Karan asked softly. “He is.”

    Sweat popped out on Noreena’s face. She glanced about fearfully. The last thing she wanted was for him to burst through the crowds as he had in her nightmares.

    “But not as himself,” Karan soothed as she saw her student’s reaction. “He’s using a holofield. He’s either disguised as one of his crewers or as a Somtaaw. I can’t tell because he’s keeping a low telepathic profile. But he is here.”

    Noreena nodded nervously; two nights’ worth of nightmares, not counting the remainder of last night before Karan had blocked them, had reduced her to a shivering sleep-deprived wreck. Not even the typically soothing buzz she got from Courage helped. She glanced about warily, but didn’t see anyone who stood out particularly among the Vaygr or Somtaaw. Karan smiled reassuringly.

    “I think his staying away from you is another form of apology,” she remarked softly. “I don’t think he’s recovered either.”

    And well he shouldn’t. I’m going crazy. Slowly but surely. Won’t be long before every Vagyr uniform has me up in a sweat worryin’ about getting choked. QwaarDAMN it! Maybe I should start hiding under Talia's table with her...

    A tall Worker pilot, his body almost too big to fit into a Worker’s tiny cockpit, shuffled up to the bar. He set his empty bottle of Courage down near Karan, and motioned for a refill from Saar. Noreena blinked in surprise; she didn’t recognize the man at all. She knew the names and backgrounds of every Worker pilot onboard the Kuun-Lan. To find someone in those coveralls who was a complete stranger shocked her. He approached Karan, and sat opposite of her from Noreena.

    “I don’t remember you,” she remarked, baffled. She leaned around Karan to get a better view of him.

    “Came up from Third Fleet,” he said in an oddly accented voice.

    “Oh,” Noreena said, suddenly wondering why the man sounded like Makaan trying not to sound like Makaan. She gulped down a quick swig of her Courage.

    Coincidence. Has to be. If it’s him, I’m outta here.

    The Worker winced.

    “Don’t ask. Please,” he muttered, subtly pointing his thumb at the trio of Vaygr heading to the bar for refills of their drinks. “Bad enough I have to use a holofield to get anywhere alone on this ship. It’s worse when I have to use it to keep fights from breaking out over people’s reaction to me. Usually I do this to keep an eye on my people's morale, but when things are like this...well...morale is the least of my problems.”

    He scowled disgustedly at his drink.

    “Sorry,” Noreena said in a small voice. Besides her, Karan quirked an eyebrow.

    The three Vaygr came and went; Noreena watched them as they strode back to their own table. Then she turned back to eye the Worker who wasn’t a Worker. His position at the bar allowed the S’jet-Sa to provide a physical barrier between them. That single detail reassured Noreena more than anything he could’ve said.

    “I wouldn’t even be over on this side,” the disguised Warlord muttered, “if it weren’t for the disaster brewing back there.”

    He nodded to a table near the back wall. Noreena eyed it, and blinked. There sat someone she hadn’t seen in a while—Nadia Somtaaw, the Intel officer who’d spent the last five years passing as a Vaygr. She wore a Somtaaw uniform, taking care to keep its sleeves down so her Eternal Mark from her covert-ops work didn’t show. Sitting amongst a cluster of Acolyte pilots, she looked completely at home, and didn’t show the slightest hint of Vaygr behavior. She oozed more Somtaaw spirit than most of the people present, attracting plenty of curiosity from Vaygr patrons.

    Noreena cringed. Nadia was also quite drunk. Makaan was right; if she said or did the wrong thing, all hell would break loose.

    Noreena watched as the Somtaaw operative downed drinks with a pair of Acos in a drinking contest. A crowd of cheering Somtaaw surrounded her as they watched her progress. Within moments, both of her opponents collapsed to the floor in drunken heaps. Nadia’s tolerance to alcohol had risen considerably during her time with the Vaygr. She could drink any Somtaaw straight to Sickbay while being only moderately drunk herself.

    “You both need to leave,” Makaan muttered softly, “soon. There’s too many people here. If it goes, it’ll go straight to hell.”

    “That bad?” Noreena gulped, wondering what the Warlord sensed.

    In a room this crowded, whatever telepathic ablity Noreena had was useless. Her gift worked best in a one-on-one conversation, and as far as she knew, it hadn’t kicked out anything in a busy place like the Collision.

    Karan squinted, then frowned. She then pulled out her hand-com and dialed for Security.

    “Yes?” Tydaar’s voice came back on the line.

    “This is S’jet. I suggest you have some platoons on standby now. Things are very violatile down here. One wrong move from Nadia—yes that Nadia--and it’ll explode.”

    “You got it M’Lady. Call if it gets ugly before I'm there.”

    “Thank you, Chief.”

    “There are days,” Makaan sighed bitterly, “when I hate being in command. I feel as if I've a collection of complete morons for a fleet these days.”

    “Preachin’ to the choir,” Karan said with a snort as she downed her drink, then slammed the shotglass down on the bar.

    Then a young Vaygr lieutenant, full of testosterone-driven cockiness, strode up to the operative. He carried a bottle of his people’s most potent whiskey in one hand. He’d obviously been watching Nadia, and had now decided to run an experiment of sorts.

    “Well, I see you’ve a cast-titanium stomach,” he remarked, then held up the bottle. “Let’s see you drink this and stay standing.”

    “Don’t mind if I do,” Nadia replied with a smirk. Noreena hoped the Vaygr wasn’t setting her up for a fall.

    The looks among the Somtaaw crowd surrounding Nadia indicated they’d thought the same. They eyed the officer with intense suspicion. Their bodies oozed so much pent-up anger that Noreena didn’t need her budding powers to sense it.

    Nadia took the bottle and uncorked it. She then took a hearty swig. Then she took another. The Vaygr officer watched with interest, and then growing respect as she slowly drained the bottle’s contents. Then, by the time the bottle reached its last third, she yanked it from her lips as she gasped for air.

    She set it down as she coughed fitfully.

    “Ugh, I forgot how strong that shit was,” she muttered to herself.

    “Oh, you’ve tried it before?” the lieutenant said around a smirk. Nadia blinked at him, then scrambled to come up with a good cover story.

    “Dare from some friends. ‘Try the strongest Vaygr stuff ever, and see if you’re still standing afterwards.’ Nearly passed me out.”

    “I see, and yet you can take your Courage like it’s water.”

    Noreena eyed the woman worriedly; the operative had insisted on staying with her Somtaaw identity to hide her Vaygr one despite Tydaar’s concerns. The Vaygr didn’t tolerate spies in their midst too well. Kiith Somtaaw’s Vaygr War files said that much, along with the public “All Intel personnel are advised to use extreme caution” reminder from Fleet Intel. While the Vaygr typically didn’t mistreat covert operatives, they had proven very, very good at flushing them out, and would make it extremely difficult for said operatives to get home to unload their knowledge on those needing it. To make matters worse, the more corrupt Crusade Admirals and ship captains now serving Ashoran weren't so morally restrained, and gleefully used experimental torture techniques on any Intel personnel they came across.

    “I’m used to Somtaaw liquor, not Vaygr,” she replied with a weak laugh as she tugged on her uniform collar. “I only tried that once, anyways. Whoo, is it me or is it hot in here?”

    Nadia tugged at her jacket as if she were heating up inside it. The whiskey had worked its way into her system faster than Noreena feared. She scowled darkly. Didn’t Nadia know better than to get drunk now of all times?! That Vaygr was far too stupid and patriotic to let her get away with anything.

    Oh shit. Whatever you do, do NOT reveal that tattoo!

    “Ah,” the young Vaygr said with a smug smile, “so you Somtaaw claim to have incredible liquor tolerance, but it’s really just for your watered-down swill. Charming.”

    The Somtaaw crowd shifted warily around the Vaygr officer, eyeing him dangerously. Several had grabbed hold of empty chairs and adjusted their grip on their bottles. The Vaygr several tables over also stood, eyeing the situation suspiciously. Several laid hands on their knives’ hilts, while others cracked their knuckles.

    Then Noreena noticed the handfuls of Vaygr and Somtaaw who sat together. They’d sensed the shift in the Collision’s atmosphere, and now squirmed uncomfortably in their seats. Several got up together, and headed for the exit while trying not to look nervous.

    The cocky lieutenant sneered.

    “And to think Lord Makaan thought you people worthy of an alliance. PAH!”

    A murmur of agreement rose from several Vaygr. The crowd of Somtaaw shot them dirty looks, and grumbled a few choice remarks of their own.

    “Remind me to demote that idiot when this is over,” Makaan growled under his breath. “And promote anyone who left with Somtaaw.”

    The one thing we can all agree on today—which fucking moron to demote. Great, just great. And we’re supposed to be ALLIES!

    “Will do,” Karan said as she pulled out her hand-com again.

    The lieutenant turned away, shaking his head as he clucked with disapproval. He headed towards the nearest table of Vaygr with a smirk of superiority on his face.

    Nadia, relieved to have him away from her, fanned her face. Then she opened her uniform jacket and rolled up its sleeves. Her Eternal Mark gleamed in the Collision’s lighting. Several people drew in sharp breaths; the Vaygr two tables cursed in bewilderment.

    Well, now I know the collective IQ of this room—and it’s dragged Nadia right down with it. We’re screwed.

    Upon finally reaching Tydaar, Karan spoke urgently: “Nadia just blew her cover in the Collision, with Vaygr all over the place. Get over here now.

    “Qwaardamn it!” the Chief exploded. The hand-com relayed the sound of him sprinting out of his office while yelling for every Security officer within earshot to get down to the Collision.

    Noreena turned her attention to the disaster she saw unfolding before her. The cocky officer, upon hearing the Somtaaw’s horrified gasps, had turned to investigate. The sight of Nadia’s genuine tattoo reduced him to stunned speechlessness. Then his eyes narrowed with suspicion.

    “If you are one of our own,” he asked icily, “why are you wearing a Somtaaw uniform, and acting as one of them? They’ve welcomed you.”

    Then his eyes widened with anger as he reached his conclusion, which just happened to be the right one.

    “Unless you’re not one of our own. Only a spy would get a true Mark done and then hide it!”

    The Vaygr behind him burst into angry exclamations. The cluster of Somtaaw flinched, then hardened their glares. More people bolted to their feet, balling their hands into fists.

    The lieutenant scowled as he snatched up Nadia’s arm and examined it closely.

    “Get your hands off her!” one furious Aco snapped.

    “That Crusade was full of incompetent idiots,” the arrogant officer remarked. “They’re a disgrace to his Lordship. A perfect ground for spies to infiltrate. And you dare show your face here? Is this the Hiigaran idea of an alliance—flaunting spies in front of us in a gloat?!”

    He leaned towards Nadia until his face hung mere inches from her.

    “What have you got to say for yourself...bitch?”

    He yanked hard on the operative’s arm, intimidating her into giving him an answer. The crowd of Somtaaw moved to surround the lieutenant, glowering dangerously down at him. Several elbowed him roughly.

    “Get going, now. Before the fight blocks your escape,” Makaan muttered grimly, motioning for Karan and Noreena to head for the Collision entranceway. Both women nodded and scurried towards it, periodically looking over their shoulders at the growing disturbance.

    “I-It’s not what it looks like!” Nadia finally blurted out.

    The lieutenant had enough. He backhanded her across the face, sending her into the table. The Somtaaw, as one, lunged at him. He went down in a blur of fists and bottles. Every Vaygr at the nearby tables dove into the fray to avenge their fallen companion. Then other Somtaaw and Vaygr, seeing the birth of a free-for-all, quickly scurried into the fighting for a chance at payback.

    Noreena picked up her pace as she ran towards the Collision entryway,. Then a second mass of struggling bodies moved in front of her, blocking her escape route. Karan quickly caught up to her student and pulled her back towards the bar. She pointed to the doorway behind it, which led to the Collision’s storage rooms, and an emergency escape corridor. Noreena nodded and changed her direction. They slowly picked their way across fallen bodies, rolling bottles, and toppling tables. Noreena hoped they would reach the back room before either of them got hurt.

    Then a group of combatants stepped in their way, their fists moving so fast she could barely dodge them in time. She saw Karan take a misplaced fist in the gut and go down. The infuriated Worker pilot who’d swung it moved to swing again at the Vaygr mechanic between him and Noreena.

    She had eyes only for Karan, who lay on the floor in a stunned heap.

    “M’Lady!”

    Then pain exploded along her jaw. She staggered back from the impact, then sank towards the floor. Only the hard surface of a table broke her fall.


    Chapter 16

    Noreena blinked in shock as she recovered from the misplaced blow. Had that Worker swung any harder at the Vaygr mechanic, she would’ve had a broken jaw. She pried herself off the table and crawled underneath it. Then she sat there, shaking her head to clear it. It had all happened so fast. One minute the Vaygr lieutenant had backhanded Nadia, the next she’d ended up in a sea of swinging fists. She then peered about from her hideaway, looking for a safe escape route.

    Then an injured Manufacturing officer crashed into her hiding place, knocking it off its legs. Noreena scrambled out from under it as it toppled into the floor, sending the officer sliding onto her. His weight knocked the wind out of her lungs as his body settled atop her back. She quickly squirmed from underneath him, then sprinted for the bar.

    Suddenly, pain screamed from her left calf. She quickly tumbled to the floor, her forehead banging into the bar's edge as she went down. A panicked glance at her leg told her what had happened. A Vaygr shuriken, its forcefield blades set to small for short-range throws, stuck out of her leg. The shuriken’s metal disc had small serrated blades that allowed it to stick to its target so its energy-field blades could wreak continuous havoc.

    Now they had buried themselves painfully into her leg.

    Cursing furiously, she resumed her trek towards the back of the bar, scrambling on all fours so her injured leg didn’t have to bear her weight. Then she saw Karan wake up and roll over. The S’jet-Sa spotted Noreena and crawled towards her, somehow dodging the falling bottles, chairs, and bodies as she moved. They quickly took shelter under another overturned table that had collapsed onto the bar's side. Karan looked her student over worriedly, then saw the shuriken. She winced sympathetically as she pressed her fingers against the center of the disc from both sides. The energy-field blades promptly retracted. The S’jet-Sa tossed the weapon aside, and helped Noreena to her feet. Then the pair, hunched over so any debris or weapons landed against their backs instead of more vulnerable areas, scrambled towards their escape route.

    They reached their destination quickly, only to find several fallen bottle racks blocking their way. Karan quickly worked to toss the racks and various broken bottles aside while Noreena clutched at the smooth bartop as if she’d fallen into a rough sea from a wrecked ship. The disguised Warlord had already moved away from her to give her room to hold onto the bar without him being immediately next to her. She then stood slowly, taking care to put all her weight onto her good leg. She turned to stare back at the battle zone, and gaped at the sheer enormity of what she saw.

    The brawl now encompassed the entire Collision in one enormous sea of violence. She’d never seen anything like this, not even in the old Morale Sector. She couldn’t even see Nadia amid the sea of fighters. As she stared in transfixed horror, several Somtaaw and Vaygr waded into the fight in a bid to break it up. Two went down immediately; the others vanished into the violent mass.

    Sajuuk in Heaven. It’s like watching a fucking Beast Infection! Why isn’t there a Naar Directive for bad juju?!

    “Tell me about it!” Karan yelled over the din as she moved to stand next to Noreena at the bar. “We need to keep going! The back room’s the only way out!”

    “Not anymore,” an accented voice snapped. The Worker who wasn’t a Worker pointed towards the back room.

    A pair of Vaygr had backed an off-duty Marine into the corner near the door. Now they pummeled him violently with their fists. He fought back when he could, but his two opponents refused to let him up. Then a group of Recons rushed the two Vaygr, swinging bottles and broken chairs at them. Within seconds, that entire area had fallen to the mass of fighting that held the Collision in its thrall.

    Noreena and Karan quickly skittered away from the fresh wave of violence, now heading for the far back of the Collision, where the fighting was more sparse.

    “This is idiocy,” Makaan growled furiously, “beyond anything I have ever seen.”

    The disguised Warlord tapped his belt buckle. The air rippled around him as the holographic disguise melted away, revealing the fearsome sight Noreena knew all too well. The Warlord’s face bore a furious expression as he surveyed the battle.

    He bellowed an order to halt in his own language.

    Suddenly terrified again, Noreena clapped both hands over her ears. Then a thrown bottle slammed into her shoulder, nearly knocking her off her feet. When she recovered her balance, she saw the fighting had simply continued on.

    Not one Vaygr heard Makaan’s orders. They’d become so embroiled that it would take physical force to snap them out of their bloodlust. The Warlord’s anger deepened as he bared his teeth in a snarl. Noreena scampered away from him, instinctively heading for the nearest exit, which happened to be the back room Karan had pointed her towards. Only the discovery of a fresh pile of unconscious bodies from that earlier fight kept her from going any further.

    “I expected better of my people than this!” Makaan shouted. He repeated the order in an even louder voice. Once again the Vaygr ignored him. Then the Warlord’s patience abruptly ran out. He stormed into the fight like an enraged god.

    Several Vaygr saw his approach, and backed away instantly from him like children with their hands caught in the cookie jar. Unfortunately, the embroiled Somtaaw saw an opening when the Vaygr stopped fighting. Completely unaware that Makaan was trying to stop the fight, they charged the retreating Vaygr with renewed fervor.

    This in turn enraged the Vaygr, who quickly rejoined the fight despite their Warlord’s presence. They swarmed around him, charging at their enemies as they screamed with fresh rage.

    Makaan’s mood suddenly went from enraged to murderous--and now even Noreena could sense the boiling fury in his mind despite the massive brawl going on around her. He grabbed hold of the first two Vaygr combatants and threw them away from the fight. Then he dove into the sea of struggling bodies, reaching for any other Vaygr he could get his hands on. Suddenly, he went down amid a blur of Somtaaw and Vaygr fists.

    Noreena’s jaw fell open in shock.

    Those idiots took down MAKAAN?!

    Then several bottles flew into the floor and bar, sending glass shards flying around her. Karan flinched away when they came far too close to her neural slots for her liking. Noreena gritted her teeth in disgust. They needed a new hiding place now.

    She clambered to hide behind the bar. She and Karan would just have to wait this fighting out. The S'jet-Sa, reading Noreena's intentions perfectly, scurried to sit down next to her.

    Suddenly, the back room’s swinging doors banged open, shoving the few wounded bodies around them aside like rag dolls. A horde of corridor-commandos and Marines wearing riot gear thundered through them. Noreena spotted Tydaar and the female Vaygr she saw at Risco’s among them. The pair snapped orders to the Security teams with calm efficiency, directing them to where they could best break up the fight.

    The Marines and commandos interlocked their riot shields, then swarmed towards the mass of violence ahead. Noreena peeked over the bar in amazement. The fighting didn’t even slow at their advance; rather it flowed around them and gobbled them up. Shields and bodies went flying as the chaos engulfed the Security teams.

    Then the doors banged open again. Ifriit Somtaaw-Sa surged through with another horde of Security forces from both the Somtaaw and Makaan's Crusade. Noreena stared in awe; she’d never seen his face this red with fury. He stormed towards the thickest crowd of combatants, his green eyes snapping with sparks.

    THAT IS FAR ENOUGH, PEOPLE!” he roared furiously, his deep voice carrying over the din with surprising ease.

    Then the fighting swallowed him up. Noreena gaped in horror. Never before had she seen such an unstoppable brawl. It made Makaan’s attack on her seem like a training session.

    Then movement near the bar caught her attention. She saw a Vaygr resourcer pilot swing his chair at a nearby IS officer. The man dove underneath the chair’s arc and tried to tackle him. The Vaygr, seeing his approach, swiftly kicked his opponent in the gut before he got too close, then swung his chair again.

    The IS officer promptly crumpled to the floor in pain, causing the Vaygr’s chair to swing through empty air. It flew out of his sweaty hands and soared towards Noreena. She tried to duck, but felt as if she moved in slow motion as the chair hurtled towards her.

    It slammed into her forehead and instantly knocked her unconscious.
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    HOLY SAJUUK :argh:

    That's one HECK of a riot...

    Both Karan and Makaan ought to have jointly mindblasted them all when they had the chance to.

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    w00t!!!!! BARFIGHT!

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    I had to do it. I just HAD to. I've had a massive Vaygr/Hiigaran barfight on my mind for at least a year, simply as a too-cool-concept for the HW universe. Figured it had to be the Mother of All Barfights too, just for the hell of it.

    Glad you guys liked it.

    More chapters tomorrow. Maybe I'll even find time to punch off two sets then. We'll see.

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    I think a certain smiley is seeing to much use right now.
    I'm with atmawp, I'm still itching for the massive mindblast that sends them all to the shrink for the next several weeks.

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    oo barfights. i like. poor Nor, she's just caught in the middle of it.

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