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Directed Writing Workshop Two - Submissions

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    Fiction Directed Writing Workshop Two - Submissions

    Sorry folks, there was a bit of a mixup in moderator land. Here's this cycle's thread.

    Direct Writing Workshop Two

    Format:

    I will give you a sentence or a topic. You will write it down using your favored writing medium, and continue the story. No matter how blank your mind is, you must write something.

    If you find that the original sentence doesn't fit the story you have written, excise it. The point of the topic is to be a spark - once your on fire you no longer need the spark!

    Submit your entries to this thread. June 23rd is the deadline. ONLY SUBMIT ENTRIES. There will be a criticism thread opened at 11:00pm (23:00) GMT, on June 23rd, for comments and criticism. Until then, gather your thoughts.

    You have a week! Use it wisely. Write something down, walk away for a day, and then come back to it. Remember, the hardest part of writing isn't getting the first draft. It's every draft after that. It's honing your work into something worth reading. We're working on both with these workshops, so don't just write something and then fire it off. Put some time into it.

    Current Enrollment
    This is the list of everyone currently enrolled in the program:
    • Starfisher
    • Squid
    • MetalDragoon
    • Unk
    • Rodimus
    • Sanctimonious
    • Lestaki
    • Fiirks
    • blu
    • LoCo
    • Caesar
    • Jal
    • Numenor
    • Ion
    • Bentus
    • Beelzebuddy
    • Kaito
    • Sword_Monkey
    • Sholto



    Losers who submitted nothing!:
    Here's the people that said they would write something but never did:
    • Squid -- Lost Draft
    • Sanctimonious
    • Fiirks
    • blu
    • Caesar -- Real Life
    • Numenor
    • Ion -- Real life
    • Bentus
    • Caesar -- Real life
    • Unk



    To get your name off the list of shame, write something!

    Without further ado...
    This week's topic, courtesy of deadguy:
    This is a situation, not a sentence. Set up the scene, invent characters and the story, and run with it!


    Two people are sitting at a table, talking over drinks about someone they knew who had recently died.



    Go!

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    Criticism thread. Looks like the field has been winnowed some more.
    Last edited by Starfisher; 26th Jun 06 at 5:17 AM.

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    [EDIT]Ok, maybe I wasn't sick enough of this story to clean it up a bit and put it in spoiler tags.

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    Spoiler

    Last edited by Rodimus; 23rd Jun 06 at 8:54 AM.

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    I don't like this one as much as the last one; for a start, I'm pretty sure it should either have stopped at the first scene or else been a lot longer. But never mind.

    The Story

    Quote Originally Posted by n0z
    Generally I find posts can be short, long, super long, or Andkat long. I tend to read the first three categories.

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    Fiction

    Here is my little piece of wrting, read and cry at my awful use of english even though it is me first lang. :buddies:

    READ ME!!!!!!!!!!



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    is it possible that one can't write when he's stressed? -.-
    couldn't think of anything the whole week...

    i'll just try something right off the bat...
    or wait... eehehe
    this be a follow up to the first writing workshop

    PS: 1 hour of writing, no cleaning... no time



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    'Goodbye Mr Blake'

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    About an hour and a half of mostly freeform writing. I refined it just a tad to clean up spelling and grammar, and left it as it was otherwise. It seems a little rushed - there's no lead in, for example - but overall I sort of like it.

    Spoiler


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    Now, I get the feeling the italicized clarifier in the topic was directed at me, and I was sorely tempted to write a story with "This is a situation... run with it." as a topic just for spite. Luckily for you all I decided to play this one straight.

    a pointless waste of time


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    I was a bit busy this week, work and study and all that. So it's a bit late I know, but it's here all the same. Not my best work to be sure, but it's something new for me.

    Spoiler

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    to convince most people
    that they are lying.

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    I'm too busy with other stuff to write. I wrote the intro ish thing for this sentence, but I can't finish it now. Sorry guys =/

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    Sholto
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    Late again - sorry. I wrote this one this morning. It's a bit rough, and I think the ending needs some work.

    "Old Friends"



    Sholto
    Last edited by Sholto; 26th Jun 06 at 4:38 AM.

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